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Sins

Postby RB3 » Sun Jan 07, 2018 7:28 pm

Hello guys

The game I am creating is called Sins.

The game is set in the present but mankind has not evolved that fast(medievellike era).
You play as boy who is chosen by the gods to fulfil a mission.

I would like to hear what you guys think about the concept and if this type of game appeals to you.
Fell free to tell me what is lacking and what can be done better.

Next update around the end of march.

https://mega.nz/#!JPg0laoC!EqiLE_bdw9CEFLpVaiXHf34lIA8FZwCd89Mim1CDi4I

patreon = https://www.patreon.com/RGames1

Update v0.3:
-small update
-added story content
-fixed some spelling
Last edited by RB3 on Wed Feb 21, 2018 7:18 pm, edited 3 times in total.
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Re: Sins

Postby Swampstar » Tue Jan 09, 2018 9:47 pm

nice work so far. look forward to more
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Re: Sins

Postby RB3 » Fri Jan 12, 2018 5:42 pm

Thank you!

My main concern is that since it's a strory driven game that i'm creating, it doesn't have replayability.
Let's say i decide to put more work into it, would people want to wait a certain amount of time just to know how the story progresses?

I could look up and try to add a way to make scenes accessible through dialogue but i'm not that familiar with coding yet.
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Re: Sins

Postby theressomeonehere » Sat Jan 13, 2018 10:51 am

I see a good amount of potential here. I always enjoy animations in these sorts of games, so it was a pleasant surprise to see that the one sex scene that i saw was animated. Additionally, mind control elements usually lead down paths of promise, so that's another point in your favor. The 3DCG looks good as well, which is another plus.
The only major issue I saw is that this game is in desperate need of proofreading and editing. Normally, I'd offer my help, but I'm already working on two projects in addition to college, so that's not really an option at this point. I'd highly recommend that you either find someone willing and able to deal with that, or make an effort to get to the same level of proofreading as you have on your posts in this thread.
Overall, I encourage you to continue work on this, provided you can manage to balance it with college. I do hope to see more of this in the future.
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Re: Sins

Postby RB3 » Sat Jan 13, 2018 3:53 pm

Thank you,

I really should have proofread the script but I decided not to because i wasn't sure if I wanted to keep on doing this. The problem with the animation loop is the lack of having a good editing software(This game uses assets from Honey Select).
I have less time to work on this now unfortunatly(1-2d/w). The good thing is that i already kind of have a concept/idea for the story, so I just have to fill in the gaps as I work on it.
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