legend of krystal the story.

[KrYpTeR]

YESSS SKULLFOX, I LOVE YOU!

[SkullFox]

um......
I love you too??

[thehammer]

Great bit of writing. Can't wait for the next one.

[Outonbail]

Great writing style and development, I must say. Overall a very well written fanfic.

I noticed your following the Legend of Krystal sexual encounters literally, though. Keeping in mind the later versions of the game will diversify the sexual encounters more (example: Krystal receiving vaginal intercourse), will you do the same in your next chapter(s)? Just asking.

[SkullFox]

That was a very informed question of which i have the only informed answer.
Yes, these things will happen...as you stated i am following the story quite literally. In that I am making a fanfic version of the game itself, I've done the same thing with Star Fox and one of my favorite movies The Crow. Sometime in the next two or so chapters I will actually be adding little scenes of my own, but, nothing that will institute a direct change in the storyline of the game. The only difference will be that Krystal in the story will have a traveling companion in Nina. And in case you're wondering, i have no real idea why I decided to have the reptile travel with her, it just seemed like a plot device that i could use at a later time in the story. Thanks for the informed questions, and just for reading...I hope this answered some questions...

PS: If anyone is interested in my other works, one is found other is found on AFF, while all others are on Fanfiction.net under the same Author name.

Thanks for the inspiration and the support guys...

The Footsteps in the Darkness ~ SkullFox

[SkullFox]

Chapter 7
Yo all chapter seven's up. Hope you all enjoy it. Have a nice one

[KrYpTeR]

ohhh SkullFox you're the MAN

[thehammer]

ME NEED CHAPTER 8!!!!!!

[SkullFox]

LOK chapter 8
Here's chapter 8 guys. This has honestly been one of the funner fanfics I've written, it's cool telling my own version of a previously existing story. Anyhow hope you all enjoy it.

The Footsteps in the Darkness ~ SkullFox

[beazjr090]

I have made my own story i do no know how good it is so tell me. The beginning is story gets more "dirty" in the future chapters and the end of this one
See it Right Here

[SkullFox]

Hey guys I'm finally back. Got a new puter and put up a new chapter.
http://games.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=600085350&chapter=9
Also if you all have any suggestions for more content in the story or which way you'd like it to go, let me know and I'll add it in wherever I can.

The Footsteps in the Darkness ~ SkullFox

[Cold Flame]

Yay, user input time on a very caringly-crafted adaptation. Here are a few ideas I had while reading through tonight...

-Fox could, through sex with Krystal, slowly leech off her telepathy, thus slowly regaining his own memories. I have no idea why it wouldn't have done so with the Sharpclaws (because she has such emotions for Fox, I guess?), but hey, Rule Of Porn.

-Krystal and Nina are forced into a "sex-off" (with each other) by the wolves for some reason.

-Some content with Katt in a later chapter; you've already built up her bisexuality and her un-prudish nature, so I'm sure I'm not the only one interested in seeing how she'd fare in this environment. Perhaps she ultimately stays with the Sharpclaw tribe, if she finds her position as a "trophy" to be quite enthralling?

-I'm kinda reaching here, but...possibly some plot event that causes either Krystal, Nina or both to lose all clothing, without access to any more, for an extended period, like a chapter's length? Wherein Krystal has to come to grips with the fact that she's not getting covered up any time soon, and she learns to be stoic about it rather than ashamed.

The overall genre of this story, for nine chapters strong so far, has been "M/F porn with sprinkles of F/F, with adventure and some action, in a tribal setting", and I'm trying not to deviate too strongly from that in my suggestions. Exceptional story, by the way.

[Outonbail]

Loved the last chapter. Nice that Fox got to take Krystal's virginity (unless I read it wrong) and I hope it ends with Fox and Krystal together, of course (I prefer happy endings, if you hadn't noticed). So consider that my first suggestion.

Second suggestion: Krystal showing how awesome she is in combat in sparring. Maybe the wolf tribe likes strong and capable females and they'd like to see how she is able?

Third suggestion: Why is Fox not being himself? Maybe Fox actually had to embrace the wolf tribe's culture to survive (it seems that already) and is keeping his real intentions on the down-low until the right time?

Fourth suggestion: Well they can't spend the rest of their lives on that planet. Perhaps in order for our two vulpines to leave happily ever after, they would have to prove themselves worthy to the alpha male to leave the pack. This can create all kinds of complications: what about Nina, for example? And how can they leave? If not be Arwing, maybe they can send a transmission? If not from Fox's, can they send it via Krystal's if they jury rig it? If so? How can they get to it?

Fourth suggestion: How would they prove themselves worthy? Well when they aren't having mindblowing sex orgies, maybe they can lead an attack to kill the leader of the sharpclaws. Would make for a dramatic battle.

Fifth suggestion: Who will lead the lizards after? Will there be a uniting of the tribes? Would Nina take over as the first female leader? (SHOCK!)

Thats just my two cents.

[SkullFox]

Thanks for the suggestions guys; these'll really help later on. As for your questions Outonbail, Fox has amnesia brought on by his fight with the original Alpha male, who was killed in the fight, which is why he is now Alpha. As for the happy ending thing, it will most likely happen since I also love happy endings...Thanks again...

Cold Flame, you have a lot of great ideas that I will most likely be adding to the next few chapters of the story...especially the clothing thing, I like that idea and honestly don't know why.LOL. Anyhow, I'll be posting chapter ten before the end of the month Imma try for the 27th but, you know how it goes when you plan shit right? Thanks again for the suggestions and I'm always up for more guys...

The Footsteps in the Darkness ~ SkullFox

[beazjr090]

Thanks for the suggestions guys; these'll really help later on. As for your questions Outonbail, Fox has amnesia brought on by his fight with the original Alpha male, who was killed in the fight, which is why he is now Alpha. As for the happy ending thing, it will most likely happen since I also love happy endings...Thanks again...

Cold Flame, you have a lot of great ideas that I will most likely be adding to the next few chapters of the story...especially the clothing thing, I like that idea and honestly don't know why.LOL. Anyhow, I'll be posting chapter ten before the end of the month Imma try for the 27th but, you know how it goes when you plan shit right? Thanks again for the suggestions and I'm always up for more guys...

The Footsteps in the Darkness ~ SkullFox

When you people sat happy endings do you mean like peace and love endings or "Happy Endings" or what the sharpclaws do when their done with krystal. lol

[SkullFox]

I myself intend to end with an ending that's both Happy and Happy
I think that way everyone really gets what they want...not to mention the story will last roughly fifteen to twenty chapters sooooooo.......I have no idea how Imma end it just yet, I've got a few ideas that I'm working on but, in the end we'll see how it goes. Thanks for the support and suggestions guys...

The Footsteps in the Darkness ~ SkullFox

[SkullFox]

Hey everyone I promised another chapter before the end of the month so here it is. Hope you all enjoy it...
http://games.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=600085350&chapter=10

[beazjr090]

Amazing, great job looking forward to more

[beazjr090]

I think you should have a part where she gets back at Nina and also how goes progress on 11?

[SkullFox]

Sorry if i haven't posted in a while guys. Job's been getting a little hectic since we're doing this big promotional thing for Olive Garden. Anyhow
Chapter II
I try to maintain a set schedule with my writing but, since getting my new job it hasn't really worked out that well.
On a side note I'm still taking suggestions, this thing can go however we want it to LOL

The Footsteps in the Darkness ~ SkullFox