Pokemon Evil Grammar Fix

[Heath0069]

If it is going to harm the game then we won't do it

[AlphaGammaZX]

His concept was on point but it's inarguable that the story was lacking. He definitely had a good thing going, with the right partner (and a better head) Pokemon Evil could have been great. But what people liked about the game should remain whole, even if it's just improved upon.

Yeah I agree. I just didn’t understand why he couldn’t just listen. He lost a lot of respect from my point of view. Even if he continued it, I might’ve not supported his game. That’s why I was glad that someone else was picking it up and I wanted to give some ideas of how to make the story better or just give the next person a creative spark to continue the story

[Humadragon2016]

well that's why right now for evil i'm just trying to brain storm i mean i got a picture me and hunden got for the game that might work to help update the art a bit. tho if dapper is already mad about us taking it and hunden and him didn't see eye to eye i'd say we're doing ok.JK LOL

what if in the story ash after getting pikachu (cuz of a flash back if you ask me) is fed up with always losing the championchips and that's why he's turned evil cuz he feels like he's in a rut with his journy. would that work? it would make sense with how ash basicly rips on himshelf acting like that ash and him are difrent people.

[Heath0069]

I don't get will a Pokémon Hydra hybrid be better? Come on guys

cerberus
Or

Hydra

[Humadragon2016]

hydra? dude their's already a three headed dragon in black and white so we can add that pokemon

[AlphaGammaZX]

well that's why right now for evil i'm just trying to brain storm i mean i got a picture me and hunden got for the game that might work to help update the art a bit. tho if dapper is already mad about us taking it and hunden and him didn't see eye to eye i'd say we're doing ok.JK LOL

what if in the story ash after getting pikachu (cuz of a flash back if you ask me) is fed up with always losing the championchips and that's why he's turned evil cuz he feels like he's in a rut with his journy. would that work? it would make sense with how ash basicly rips on himshelf acting like that ash and him are difrent people.

That sounds a legit reason. I would rather see an OC doing this because, in a sense, you're putting yourself into the game rather than seeing a character that you know being the person you take a hold of.

[AlphaGammaZX]

I don't get will a Pokémon Hydra hybrid be better? Come on guys

cerberus
Or

Hydra

You must be one of the small percentage that likes vore and REALLY want it in the game

[Humadragon2016]

right and in a way that's kinda what ash said to giovani at the start that it's kinda a rut and most poke'mon games are basicly the same beat him become champian bla bla bla so we just add more to that quoting the anime. nah well- heath is but i just want to make a crazy ass game that basicly everyone will like.

[AlphaGammaZX]

right and in a way that's kinda what ash said to giovani at the start that it's kinda a rut and most poke'mon games are basicly the same beat him become champian bla bla bla so we just add more to that quoting the anime. nah well- heath is but i just want to make a crazy ass game that basicly everyone will like.

I would say that Ash rejects Giovanni first and then joins later because of the rut. I think that hunden did was too quick and almost an "empty" story plot. I mean I'm no expert in writing stories but I've written a couple of movie scripts that no one has picked up (One was a dark superhero and the other a horror).

[Humadragon2016]

yea i feel like the start of it was kinda rushed he litterly kept the first part of hentai in and just changed it a little bit AND he forgot to work on a few pictures that he needed. hmm...idk how people will react with that tho- like how dapper dosn't want vore in the game. BUT he did already messed with dreams in the game with poneys... not sure why he added some of the stuff he did tho. (like the ponys) so some people might get pissed if we change it too much from the old version. i havn't touched it that much tho as of yet cuz i'm just messing around with the engine so i know what to do. not to mention like dappeer said we are working on tiny version but with both i think we should work on the story first (or getting art since it seems a huge stopper like with pink for a while)

[Heath0069]

Dame it I knew it!! I stepped into a minefield shit!
Vore is only a opinion you guy can vote on it I'm not putting my head on the chopping block! No but hell No

[Humadragon2016]

LOL it's a 50/50 on how much will be in the game either way. so really no need to cause a riot in the first place hell we're still working on the story.

[AlphaGammaZX]

yea i feel like the start of it was kinda rushed he litterly kept the first part of hentai in and just changed it a little bit AND he forgot to work on a few pictures that he needed. hmm...idk how people will react with that tho- like how dapper dosn't want vore in the game. BUT he did already messed with dreams in the game with poneys... not sure why he added some of the stuff he did tho. (like the ponys) so some people might get pissed if we change it too much from the old version. i havn't touched it that much tho as of yet cuz i'm just messing around with the engine so i know what to do. not to mention like dappeer said we are working on tiny version but with both i think we should work on the story first (or getting art since it seems a huge stopper like with pink for a while)

That's when you say it's a spinoff of Pokemon Evil and go off what you think people would like. The ponies think was okay. I didn't really use them anyways. I would say that we should just stick to pokemon and maybe have a cameo that you get sucked into the computer like the infamous Porygon episode but have digimon instead LoL

[Humadragon2016]

LOL that might work for tiny too... hmm actuly if we put that in the start of the game we can have the starting bit kept in cuz he'd be pissed off that the games are the same so- he wants a challange

[AlphaGammaZX]

LOL that might work for tiny too... hmm actuly if we put that in the start of the game we can have the starting bit kept in cuz he'd be pissed off that the games are the same so- he wants a challange

Making an OC character not challenging enough? LoL That's why I said to stay away from having Ash as a MC but I dunno what you guys talked about so I wouldn't know what direction you guys are planning

[Humadragon2016]

lol

[Heath0069]

Sorry for what I said.

[Dead2112man]

At this point, I don't know why you two arn't PM each other or getting each others skype/discord/email or something

[Heath0069]

At this point, I don't know why you two arn't PM each other or getting each others skype/discord/email or something

I got a Skype but I don't go on it much we PM each other on eka

[VintageBass]

OK, so on the whole Cereberus/Hydra thing... why do they have to specifically be giants? Sure there are large Pokemon, but they don't exactly have to match up with how they're depicted in ancient legend... and some of them aren't actual Pokemon (the early years of the anime were WEEEEIRD). Pokemon has taken liberties with creating their Pokemon, so why can't that be a thing?

Also, and this is a sexual nature we're talking here, why specifically multiple actual heads? There is a different kind of head that we can look towards and provide potential pleasure to everyone

And no ponies? There are three different horse families and, if you want to count them, two deer and one giraffe. I think getting those in isn't that big of an issue... (comedically missing the point here)

i just want to make a crazy ass game that basicly everyone will like.

This is going to be VERY difficult if you're going to be doing Tiny Adventures as not everyone is going to enjoy vore, sexually or not. That could be seen as a major turn-off and will never play the game knowing that it's in the game. So going for "everyone" is a very lofty goal if you're going for Tiny Adventures.

Evil, on the other hand, I could see something working provided that there's a more concrete story and a protagonist to choose from... and less of the super extreme kinks involved. For an OC, I may suggest having a male and female OC, although that poses the problem of having to do two different routes given that not every male is bi or gay. So this likely will mean that the two OCs will be experiencing different scenes just so it matches up with their respective genders. Although... you are going to be at the bottom during the start and over time you can work to get to the top, so it could work but it really depends on how some will handle this.

And if you're looking for story... well it's not like I'm working on my own original story elsewhere (I'm not putting anything relating to that story here, thank you). I could, however, come up with a story that will work for the game here as long as we're in agreement about the idea for it.