I'm not really attracted to the genre, but I gave this a waste of time chance, and it's kept me interested for a week. This has a lot of personality, attractive style, likable characters and clever writing. Couple bugs and suggestions, though:
* This may have been reported already: At random times, buttons fail to appear in a glory booth, making it impossible to exit.
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This is usually when it's empty, and happens before the dream sequence.
* Too many pictures in the album can prevent a loaded game from starting. It doesn't prevent it from loading though, so you can start a new game with everything the previous game had, and an additional Alice.
* The debt collectors demands started scaling back as I got close to having the money to pay it off. Because I recruited Eva, I have no way to pay down lump sums, and the asshole loan manager apparently can't handle money without underlings. If this was intended, then it's turning the game grindy; when the pace of gameplay picks up like that, the story should follow suit. How much repetition is required to demonstrate enough mastery to just move on already?
* Speaking of grind, a MC doesn't get the opportunities a FC has to reap fat xp awards from absurdly high level johns that come around making unreasonable demands and going away bitchy. At least a male player should be able to advance faster through gang fights, abduction and training.
* Positions on scrolling positions become moving targets, making position selection so teeth grindingly futzy that I want to throw my mouse at someone's forehead.
* Alice doesn't recognize the flavor of Julia's asshole. Or maybe she does, and just isn't saying anything.
* "Long Drink" - the word you're looking for is "highball".
* Sit to regain energy. Of course you can never do this without interruption while business is going on, there'll always be someone bringing you problems, forcing you to make decisions. You could get more of a break while nursing a highball at the bar.