[RPG Maker MV] Pale Pure

[Rech]

Hey there! For past several month I've been working on the game called Pale Pure, which is a free adult adventure made with RPG Maker MV, DAZ3D and my, hopefully, good writing / drawing skills.

So far it's about ~1.5 hours long, includes ~50 scenes and more than 600 images.

Some screenshots:
http://imgur.com/a/oZ3Fl

Pale Pure is a tale of friendship and family, murder mystery and suspense, embraced lust and moral choices.

The game takes place in a rural 18 century town and surrounding area with some fantasy elements. In short it's more or less a classic setting inspired by Christian themes, Lovecraft, Poe and Grimms' Fairy Tales.

Player will control 2 local girls, one at the time, each with her own events and plot progression. Basically it's a two different stories set in the same area.

As for H-content, aside from classic (anal, bj, lesbian) the game features:

• Incest
• NTR*
• Beastiality*
• Crossdressing*

*You can choose to ignore each of this.
**It's also not a classic corruption game, H-scenes are early accessible

There will be different ways to complete and progress each chapter, with endings depend on players choices (don't expect much though, but it's not just a few scenes either).
Twisted version of a "good girl" route.
Hidden events and generally lively town with it's own characters and their little stories.

I'm not a native english speaker, so be ready for some typos and mistakes.

My general aim is to create a pleasant H-game experience where the player doesn't have to wait for adult stuff to happen, grind through combat or doing repetitive things while also not being restricting to a linear plot. It might be silly sometimes, but I hope you enjoy.


https://mega.nz/#!7ocVnLAR!7aAXzG7l3pFMdywAnKdnXhEfdqkWUywl2i26FgopQUg Win

https://www.patreon.com/aretired

[theressomeonehere]

just finished playing through it. So far, so good. I love the art, as well as the concept.

That being said, some suggestions:
A gallery is always nice for games like this, so I don't have to sort through saves and such to find the scenes I want
a list of scenes would also be nice, I got 10 of the scenes for each route, and couldn't for the life of me find the remaining handful.
some way to get hide the text box, since it's blocking *ahem* important parts of some of the pictures
and - this is just my personal preference - after sucking someone off, it'd be nice to have a picture showing the girl with a mouthful of cum.

other than that, it's quite solid.

If you're interested, I could proofread the writing for typos and grammar stuff

[Rech]

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Thanks for a good reply.

some way to get hide the text box

I've already been pointed to it, will add that in the next update.
There are a few scenes that really need it, sure.
I rarely use it in other games, didn't even thought about implementing it (I was thinking about 1.5-2 sec delay before showing pics).

A gallery is always nice for games like this

That could be a bit time consuming..
I can add some kind of book in each character's room with all of previous day's scenes.

a list of scenes would also be nice

Will write it soon. (in ~1-2 days)

a picture showing the girl with a mouthful of cum

That is also coming with the next update. Top priority.

Proofreading would be great, but I don't really see an easy way for doing it. Copypasting every line, one by one, out of game project isn't something I would like to spend my time doing. If you can point out the most weak parts in big events - I can send them to you. Would really much appreciate it.

[Akkin]

I find the atmosphere very impressive. Beyond the fact that it is RPG maker MV with a music that we know at the fingertips to listen to it on other games, here it seems to be part of a whole that completely transcends this That we do (whereas sometimes on other games, we only has a hurry is to turn off the loudspeakers). Add to this drawings of rare quality.

I like the choice between the characters of Annabel and Kirsten at the beginning. The two stories are really different. It is not that we choose a character and then two or three little things that change, no we have two characters with two different origins and stories, which sometimes intermingle though because we are in the same city .

Small question: the demo allows to play only the first day. So the first day with Annabel then the first day with Kirsten (knowing that there is a cycle day / end of day / evening). But in the images of the game, I have the impression that there is more than for a simple day, am I wrong?

[Rech]

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. I altered the original MV tiles a little so the colors appear warmer, nothing complicated but it makes visuals more pleasant. Uhm, sorry if that disappoint you, it's not a drawings - it's 3d models with a toon shader effect.

Yes, I was planning to release 2 days at first but all those small details I thought I could deal with in one-two days, drained a lot more time than was expected. There's also some unused images, I should clean them up somehow later.



Also, I'm planning to add some animation in ver.0.2, about 40 sec for each video.
Here's the first one (still in progress) - https://my.mixtape.moe/yxoojk.webm (nsfw)

[theressomeonehere]

Proofreading would be great, but I don't really see an easy way for doing it. Copypasting every line, one by one, out of game project isn't something I would like to spend my time doing. If you can point out the most weak parts in big events - I can send them to you. Would really much appreciate it.

I've never worked with RPGmaker, so I have no real idea if there's a way to get the script in/out without putting way too much time into it that could be spent on more important things. Maybe someone with more experience can chime in. The only thing I could think of that could work without an inordinate amount of work from one or both of us would be if I could edit the text inside RPGmaker and then send the files back to you. Unfortunately, that would require me to have the source files, and I don't know that I can recommend giving those to some rando on the internet such as myself, even for a project in its very early stages such as this one. Trust is earned, not given, and all that.

I'd say PM me if you want to go forward anyway, but it seems my account is too new for that. I'll probably regret putting this out for everyone to see, but you can email me at REMOVED

Once again: great start, and I look forward to seeing more of this

[Rech]

As for sharing the source files, I don't mind to, but you need to have a copy of MV and then you'll be manually clicking on every event there is and editing it (there's no stand alone text file).
There's also a decrypter for MV, which basically works like sharing the source (then again you'll need a copy of MV to edit something). Maybe there's something easier, I'll try to google it later today and then email you.

Anyway, you can remove you email right now, I saved it.

[x3Darkie]

Not sure which version of RPG Maker MV you're running, but since one of the latest updates, it's possible to copy text window commands by right clicking them and choosing the option 'Copy as Text' (there's also the option to 'Copy as HTML' but I have no idea what that does). You can then paste what you copied to whatever text editing program you use and spell check or whatever. You'd still need to manually edit the text commands to make the corrections though.

[Rech]

It will still take a lot of time just to copy-paste and arrange them. I guess simplest way is to use decrypter or source files before releasing new version, otherwise it will make a boring and repetitive work.

[hoboy]

No menu shows up right clicking on a Mac, so that's out. Looked through the package and can't seem to isolate where the text may be residing. Looked through all the files in the resources folder, including everything under data, but can't seem to find it. It's not embedded in the individual's .json files, so not sure where else to look?

[Rech]

It's showing on 1.3.4 - http://i.imgur.com/hU2Ksw2.png (I regret updating it though, MV stopped working without Steam again).

It's possible to "CTRL+F" through .json and looking for color tags ("\C[20]") - it's way faster than manually doing it in MV, but there is a chance to mess something - http://i.imgur.com/UYM6VSD.png


*** theressomeonehere,

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[theressomeonehere]

*** theressomeonehere,

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well that's annoying, i should have double-checked.
let's try again, it's

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[email protected]
In case I misspelled it again, it should be spelled the same as my username

There should also be a way to email me through this forum

[Darthjake]

*** theressomeonehere,

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I guess you misspelled your email

Technical details of permanent failure:
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well that's annoying, i should have double-checked.
let's try again, it's

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[email protected]
In case I misspelled it again, it should be spelled the same as my username

There should also be a way to email me through this forum

I have an email and a pm Icon to the right of your post, it may be that one or both of you need to hit 10+ posts?

[theressomeonehere]

I have an email and a pm Icon to the right of your post, it may be that one or both of you need to hit 10+ posts?

That seems quite likely

[42sdfa43]

This game is awesome!! Keep up the good work

[MYS]

i love the art style and story design.
can't wait to see more of this.

[flamin16]

is there Beastiality in this demo

[Rech]

I'm really glad you liked it.

As for beastiality, there is some, but not actual intercourse. In 0.2 there will be more scenes (expect at least 2 different ones).

[Shardoom]

I really liked this, especially the shaded 3dcg. Definitely has a lot of potential.

It's unfortunate that the text box covers up a lot of the 'action' though, could it perhaps be made to be transparent. Or transparent when theres something good underneath at least...

For instance almost straight away on Anna's path when you have her open her legs you can't really see anything because of the text box. (there are quite a few other instances too)

[Rech]

I get this a lot. Coming with the next update - Mapped it on 'Q' and 'W' (Page Up / Page Down)

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