Just finished the demo.
Some things I liked about the demo:
The scenes were surprisingly decent.
-I thought some of the 3 scenes were written fairly well. I'm looking forward to see how this progresses in future releases.
The playable area wasn't so big that you are wandering around for 10 minutes.
-That being said, it would be nice if the unaccessable areas were visibly blocked off so no one wastes time searching.
Some things I didn't like about the demo:
The grammar could use a bit of work.
-The game is understandable, but having to interpret the grammar gets in the way of the immersion.
-Some directions at the start of the game would help, for ex. a teleport to work and each district
brontanius Wrote:u need to paste the mega link with the decryption key if u want us to play it.
lol.