Nikag Wrote:Added new version to the front page.
Hopefully thanks to Spartacus, it will have MUCH less of Engrish inside
First thing I read in the game is "Kendra and I's refrigerator".
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So in english, you would never say (I's). You could say (Casey and Kendra's fridge) because both (Casey) and (Kendra) would use ('s) but (I) doesn't, so you need to phrase it differently. Colloquially, you might say (me and Kendra's fridge), this is not "correct", but more natural. My brain is thinking (mine and Kendra's fridge) but I think (my and Kendra's fridge) would be most correct, but this is an awkward phrasing, and the natural speaker would avoid it. It would be most natural to simply say (our fridge) and allude to Kendra's presence elsewhere, like (Kendra and I live here. This is our fridge.) Actually, it would be even more natural to simply say (This is the fridge) or (Here's the fridge) since one does not typically need to claim ownership of the fridge in one's own home.
Also you would not say (less of Engrish) just (less Engrish). I'm not sure exactly what the grammatical rule is for (less) vs (less of). Offhand, I think you would say (There is less Engrish) or (There is less of the Engrish) or (There is less of an Engrish feel) or (There is less of it).
I actually find some Engrish to be charming, and you don't have anything where I don't understand your meaning, so you should be fine. Grammar can be fun, but in porn, not the most important thing.
Anyways, the game. It seems like there was a lot less to do. I improved my technical skill to 14 or something, but I couldn't tell if it was making any difference. After a while, Casey was in a "horrible mood" all of the time and I couldn't tell what was influencing this or if this influenced anything else. I could increase relationship with Sam, but the human guy disappeared. I was hoping for some action with the squirrel, but she never said anything. I tried to stick around to see if any of the old cutscenes appeared, like pizza delivery or twerking or the outdoor party, but I didn't find any. It's tough to play something like this not knowing how much I'm able to find.
But the new format is much more natural than the old way. The office is well drawn. I did have some trouble walking through doors and sometimes the character got stuck in weird places, especially in the boss's office. You might consider an A* algorithm so that she walks smartly. Also, the character will try to walk if you click while the status screen is up.