Pokemon Hentai Game update (Jan 31, 2016)

[Akhera]

Eyoh, I needed some practi(c/s)e so I tried shading your Nidorina in a different way than I shaded the Grimer
I hope if someone can give me some feedback in ways to use glows and the gaussion blur to shade, I'd appreciate it. Anyway, here you go:

Shouldn't the right side of her body be shaded brighter than the left? I'm pretty sure the light comes from the right in battle. I also still think her butt hole shouldn't be visible in that pose.

Thanks for the feedback, I tried re-shading it but something about it bothers me... I just don't know what, I can't put my finger on it... It feels like I'm forgetting a huge factor...

(Btw, is there a way I do not need approval from a moderator? I guess not but meh, just askin')

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[VintageBass]

(Btw, is there a way I do not need approval from a moderator? I guess not but meh, just askin')

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If you're talking about your current posts, it's only up to 10 posts and then you're good.

If you're talking about the picture, I ain't have a problem with it. It's looking good!

[humbird0]

Okay so apparently, I completely forgot to tell you guys what's happening with my website.
Although I did mention it on twitter.



You can access it here:
http://149.56.5.190/content/show.htm
(The links in my signature are up-to-date)

It doesn't have a name yet because I switched web-hosts.
The domain name transfer is still pending.
Anyway, now I get to pay $8 a month instead of $30-$100 a month, and I supposedly also get unlimited bandwidth.



Other than that, I'm doing pretty well at the moment.
Aside from being distracted by Fallout 4: Atomatron, I've also been working on a little self-playing Flash story, and tweaking my RPG Maker to have better performance.
(by caching image files instead of constantly re-loading them when I edit a character's appearance)

[フランク]

ok,
I cannot deny, that it is a bit close to the reference.
So I did a little rework (mainly the face)
... I am not sure if it is better or worse now ...

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[www.porncritique.lol]

Thanks for the feedback, I tried re-shading it but something about it bothers me... I just don't know what, I can't put my finger on it... It feels like I'm forgetting a huge factor...

(Btw, is there a way I do not need approval from a moderator? I guess not but meh, just askin')

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Nidorina2.jpg

That's not quite what I meant when I said her anus shouldn't be visible, I meant her butt cheeks shpuldn't be separated, because she isn't spreading them in any way and because of that you shouldn't be able to see her anus. As for the shading, you might have over-done the dark area, compare it to the pikachu back humbird0 did. Rather than a straight black, try shading the dark area with a darker blue and darkening it a bit less.

[Akhera]

That's not quite what I meant when I said her anus shouldn't be visible, I meant her butt cheeks shpuldn't be separated, because she isn't spreading them in any way and because of that you shouldn't be able to see her anus. As for the shading, you might have over-done the dark area, compare it to the pikachu back humbird0 did. Rather than a straight black, try shading the dark area with a darker blue and darkening it a bit less.

Well, you certainly live up to your username.
Anyway, I don't feel like editing Nidoran F, so I did that grimy girl again. Tell me when you think.

Those buttcheeks though, way too bad. Also I got no idea what to do to 'toxicate' the skin.

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[www.porncritique.lol]

Well, you certainly live up to your username.
Anyway, I don't feel like editing Nidoran F, so I did that grimy girl again. Tell me when you think.

Those buttcheeks though, way too bad. Also I got no idea what to do to 'toxicate' the skin.

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alternategrimer.png

The right one actually looks fine, it's her left butt cheek that needs work. As for "toxicating" her skin, couldn't you just make some wavy dark lines like in Grimer's original design, or do you mean something different?

[Akhera]

Well, you certainly live up to your username.
Anyway, I don't feel like editing Nidoran F, so I did that grimy girl again. Tell me when you think.

Those buttcheeks though, way too bad. Also I got no idea what to do to 'toxicate' the skin.

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The right one actually looks fine, it's her left butt cheek that needs work. As for "toxicating" her skin, couldn't you just make some wavy dark lines like in Grimer's original design, or do you mean something different?

Yeah, I meant that, I just didn't know what kind of effects I'd use to reach that kind of lines without making it look like a purple zebra
I tried it like in the original design as you said, but it feels incomplete, also, with the lines around her eyes she looks tired/older

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[FTKnight]

Well, you certainly live up to your username.
Anyway, I don't feel like editing Nidoran F, so I did that grimy girl again. Tell me when you think.

Those buttcheeks though, way too bad. Also I got no idea what to do to 'toxicate' the skin.

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alternategrimer.png

The right one actually looks fine, it's her left butt cheek that needs work. As for "toxicating" her skin, couldn't you just make some wavy dark lines like in Grimer's original design, or do you mean something different?

Yeah, I meant that, I just didn't know what kind of effects I'd use to reach that kind of lines without making it look like a purple zebra
I tried it like in the original design as you said, but it feels incomplete, also, with the lines around her eyes she looks tired/older

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the lines just look odd, uncanny valley levels of odd. I would try to suggest something but I can't think of how to properly describe why the look off...

[Akhera]

the lines just look odd, uncanny valley levels of odd. I would try to suggest something but I can't think of how to properly describe why the look off...

Exactly what I thought, the only problem is that it looks ugly, despite it actually resembling grimer quite a lot. I don't know how to do it otherwise, using lines like Grimer's makes the body looks wrinkled.

[www.porncritique.lol]

As a suggestion, maybe she could just have those lines on her legs and arms, to resemble lingerie and keep her sexy while still looking like Grimer?

[MechDragon]

yo! sorry for the radio silence. just got back from a vacation that had no internet. here's the front pose

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i finished this before i left, but forgot to post it . i'll start working on the back pose now.

[www.porncritique.lol]

yo! sorry for the radio silence. just got back from a vacation that had no internet. here's the front pose

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i finished this before i left, but forgot to post it . i'll start working on the back pose now.

Looking good, a few errors I can see, but they should be easy to fix.
1: The line that connects the left side of her left breast to her chest is at an incorrect angle, make it more vertical.
2: The bottom part of her left ear looks odd, maybe make it curve more similarly to the inside of the ear above it?
3: I feel like her right shoulder blade should also be visible, but that's just me.
4: You may want to move her tail up a bit to have it match up with her back pose.

Those aside it looks quite nice, will you get to editing her back a bit more eventually? I still don't like how her butt looks.

[MechDragon]

will you get to editing her back a bit more eventually? I still don't like how her butt looks.

thats what i said i was gonna do.

i finished this before i left, but forgot to post it .i'll start working on the back pose now.

here it is!

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tried correcting the cheeks to cover the asshole back up.

[MechDragon]

thanks for the critique on the front pose. i'll get to work on them now.

[www.porncritique.lol]

here it is!

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tried correcting the cheeks to cover the asshole back up.

Looking better, though I feel like her cheeks should actually meet and cover a little more of the area between them. If you change anything else, it should be lowering and straightening her vagina, it looks a bit out of place now. You may also want to make her buttocks more connected to her legs and waist, the way they are now makes them look like they're bulging out sideways, it's a bit weird. The left one more than the right one.

Also, ignore the comment I made about her shoulder spike for her front picture, I didn't realize tge other spike was lower on her back, it shouldn't be visible in the front picture.

[FurrinGok]

here it is!

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tried correcting the cheeks to cover the asshole back up.

Looking better, though I feel like her cheeks should actually meet and cover a little more of the area between them..

I disagree. With the tail there, the cheeks being slightly separated makes sense.

[www.porncritique.lol]

I disagree. With the tail there, the cheeks being slightly separated makes sense.

I see your point, though looking at it again brought something else to my attention, which is that she's looking right at Ash. Is that the intention, or is she supposed to be looking at the opponent and that was a mistake?

[mattmon]

not sure if its a bug or something im not doing, whenever I lose a pokemon to charm and I then knock it out instead of capturing it again when I re-encounter it its still knocked out but it doesn't happen all the time, I had lost a weedle and a krabby but the weedle was full hp when I encountered it but the krabby was out cold. is there something I can do to fix this?

Ive played through the game again a couple of times and found the pokemon I lose to charm and then faint to poison don't recover hp but any other pokemon I lose but not poisoned do get their hp back when I encounter them again.

[Seraphic]

Never thought of asking but why aren't the ash sprites improved like the rest? o_o