Mr.D's Krystal Ball Slide-show and Mr.D´s characters

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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby 12eku » Sat Aug 06, 2011 11:10 pm

@Mr D. about<updated krystal version: Yes the five toes looks quite excellent in compairison.

@Mr D. about<Testing loop: myrr... little less of he tounge its doing some crazy gymnastics there. Otherwise very well done good sir!

@Mr D. about<responding to my comment: Mr D., just because you base something off of something else doesnt make it great. You still put your own time and effort into these lovely spirtes who (by now) are becoming well animated flash objects. That is what matters. Kuja and Katsu do deserve credit for inspiring you and providing base modles for your own work but all the same. You looked at something and made it better. Thats half of what inventing and creating is. SO to reiterrate: WELL. DONE. SIR! Apologies are in order if I murdered the word reiterrate.

So... Myrr!
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby Mr D » Sun Aug 07, 2011 12:09 am

Ok I have most of the shading done and think that this shape sort of works. Now the problem are the colors. I saw some pictures with Gardevoir having green colored and white colored legs. So I dont know witch to follow. Any advice?
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby TedFallenger » Sun Aug 07, 2011 2:18 am

It looks like the red thing on her chest is on her left breast. I think you should probably reduce the character's breast size to be more in line with the source material.
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby bed_intruder » Sun Aug 07, 2011 4:28 am

I think partly green legs could go well with the rest of the body so that it isn't just a single color scheme on the legs. Just white doesn't seem to compliment the model very much, but as always very nice job on making these.
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby Mr D » Sun Aug 07, 2011 3:04 pm

YAY physically imposible insertion :D

......should I make it move? :lol:
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby morningstars » Sun Aug 07, 2011 5:01 pm

PLEASE DO MAKE IT MOVE!! Looks nice!! :shock:
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby Mr D » Sun Aug 07, 2011 8:21 pm

Well I was able to finish it faster than expected. So what do you think?
But belive me this was not easy
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby TedFallenger » Sun Aug 07, 2011 8:33 pm

Her skin looks a little too transparent to me. Have you tried it opaque?
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby Mr D » Sun Aug 07, 2011 9:03 pm

TedFallenger Wrote:Her skin looks a little too transparent to me. Have you tried it opaque?


Well the truth is that her skin is not transparent. I put an transparent dick (50%trans) model over her body and put a mask on it.

Here is one in 30% and 1one without the dick
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby KaTsuO_O » Sun Aug 07, 2011 9:27 pm

The animation could need some work work like add smoother movement which only takes a extra minute or so.

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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby Mr D » Sun Aug 07, 2011 9:32 pm

KaTsuO_O Wrote:The animation could need some work work like add smoother movement which only takes a extra minute or so.


NIce work :D . I know that it should be smoother but the fact is that my skills as an animator are minimal. The best thing I can do in flash is to make simple classic tweets -_-. So I dont know how to speed up or slow down the process other than add more frames.
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby TedFallenger » Sun Aug 07, 2011 9:37 pm

With the opaque skin that animation is VERY nice. You'll just have to make sure in your final version that her expression matches her situation.
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby origamitoast » Sun Aug 07, 2011 10:45 pm

now we need eye and mouth movement :D
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby Latios411 » Sun Aug 07, 2011 11:05 pm

Stretchy. It goes any deeper its coming out her mouth! :O
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby KaTsuO_O » Sun Aug 07, 2011 11:09 pm

To make something smooth is very easy and also a must if you want to make some more professional animations. This shows how i made it slow down once she got the the top:

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So simple but at the same time so good, the only thing is that you need to find where you should have it or not.

Btw, in 0 looks best in my opinion.
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby Mr D » Mon Aug 08, 2011 12:34 pm

OK I tried to follow your advice KaTsuO_O and tryed to make it more smooth withouth the inner view. Is it better like this?

EDIT: did a little facial edit
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby TedFallenger » Mon Aug 08, 2011 1:38 pm

Oh yes, it looks very nice like that.
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby Digfree » Mon Aug 08, 2011 1:43 pm

is it just me, or is there something off/unattractive about her face? lol sorry idk what it is
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby Mr D » Mon Aug 08, 2011 1:48 pm

Digfree Wrote:is it just me, or is there something off/unattractive about her face? lol sorry idk what it is


I guess its the facial expresion (mouth more specificaly). I didnt really know how to work with it -_-
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby Thomson » Mon Aug 08, 2011 4:02 pm

Awesome man :) love your art
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