Prelude11 Wrote:Ok, im at 4 hours of play.
I have to say, on the begin i was bored and not too fascinated by the prehistory era.
But then i liked it more every minute of play seeing is not a shallow and bad written rape game, i think is the first time i like a h-game for the story.
I like the sexual innuendo of dialogues, i like the chained events with a lot of possibilites (jeez, i could side with karflar, with sorv, or do a double or triple game, this is mindblowing for an event whore like me).
The story is linear and dont have plot holes and is very enjoyable.
I also like how you managed psychologically the first corruption hscene for the heroine, only two another game allow the main heroine to be pure and dont enjoy being raped/be a cockaddicted.
I hope there are some other events like that, i also enjoyed the art.
The only thing that i dont like too much is the way the blowing quest end, is a bit nosense that you need an artificial penis to learn how to suck, and that there is something like a quest start who make the player belive it will continue, but actually you can never found that penis.
For game design i could see that eran too much information point for blowing could break the game, but ending that in this way is a bit meh.
You could manage it to make Mere bite his dick so he does not want more blowjobs or stop giving infomation point for that bad behaviour. But i also confess that i would like to see another one or two blowing scenes lol.
A couple of gameplay tips:
Make one button (like shift) that if hold pressed will fast skip the dialogue until a decision, so when someone whant to replay the game will not become insane for pressing Enter million of times lol.
When starting a new game, make an option for skipping the intro part.
Make something for the lag, is an utter pain in the ass sometimes, and slow the game to the roots.
And a personal thing, i would love to see Mere using more refined way instead: cock, fuck, asshole etc, sometimes that terms ruin her pure image lol.
Congrats for the writing, i'd like to read the novels you quoted, also if i didnt lose my job some months ago i probably found your patreon for 25$.
Glad you enjoy the game

And I appreciate that you understand the concept of my game (being the rpg game with adult content, and not just a hentai images collector)
The BJ quest... well I will be honest - it was supposed to last quite a bit longer, but in the end I had to stop this part of the game and focus on other things. As mentioned on my Patreon - I worked on the game after long days at my regular work and REALLY wanted to finish the important bits and release the game. I had to give up on some content, therefore added 'the item might be lost forever' to final brunna conversation... Sorry
Tell me how to make skip messeges with shift in the game and I will most likely do it

I don't use scripts as this is my first ever experience with RPG maker and I mainly learnt the program basics during this first game

I will consider the skip intro as few people already requested it. If so, I might add it in version 1.12 when it comes out. And I will most likely add something like skip intro in the second game of the series :p
As weird as it may sound... During my playing tests I tried to adjust Mere's vocabulary to pure words... because I used some vulgar ones while forgeting to keep the issue in check... Truth to be told, I just did not manage to fix all of these and some were left... Sorry yet again, my bad as I also wanted to keep her range of words more decent...
My novels are in Polish language only, and I'm not distributing them as of now. But who knows maybe some day after a succesful career as a game designer I will take my time to translate these

I will get back to only writing one day - that's for sure.
As for the Patreon issue - If you ever find some spare money - I would be glad to have your support. If not - I'm glad you decided to take some of your time and share your opinion with me - it really means a lot to read the likes and dilikes of my players

Enjoy the rest of the game and post again when you are done with the whole 'Beginning'

Take care