Sex Realm - Flash Hentai RPG Project - WIP

[Hnyarly]

When are you going to upload the next updated version and where

I think I'll surely upload first to my blog. And two or three days later, when the most important bugs has been fixed, I'll upload it to LoK. I mean, in my blog, if I want I can upload a version every 5 seconds, but in LoK I prefer to be more serious and upload something more tested.

I have to mention this before, i have slideshow only in you blog version, with version from here, on first page with low quality fps is fine. And about flash quality - yes, always turning it to low. As a mentioned before, i dont have any perfomance issue with Sakyubasu no Tatakai and other LOK games. I dont know do you understand me or not(my english is really bad ) when i told you about surface perfomance issues i meant ground surface. May be you can (if you have enough time) fill ground surface with some color, without any textures and upload this version somewhere so i can check it out.

The ground seems not to be a problem. Actually, if the graphic is not going to be rotated or transformed in Flash, you'd better convert to bitmap. Actually, when I transformed the background trees into BMPs, the game had a slight improvement of performance. I think that my problem could be from bad code. Just for testing, I remove all the grass grounds and tried in a slow computer, and the game speed didn't change.

About LoK games, they are more elaborated than mine. For example, I don't use event handlers (and I should).

And don't worry about your english. I think yours is more understandable than mine. xD

[dik3y]

Excuse me, for asking again, but i don't know english very good and i didn't understand. When are you gonna upload the new one? Thank you. Regards.

[SixtyBlackbirds]

Do you think that when you either finish or get bored of this project, you will allow others to modify it or make new adventures for Beth? Since you are using H.P. Lovecraft elements, it seems like you would, but curious about your thoughts on the subject.

[BlueLight]

So a new stable version will be uploaded in 2 or 3 days on LoK.
On the blog he will upload every version and they are't really tested.

[Hnyarly]

Excuse me, for asking again, but i don't know english very good and i didn't understand. When are you gonna upload the new one? Thank you. Regards.

I don't know how much time I'm going to spend finishing the version I'm working in. I hope to do if a few days... maybe 3 days, maybe a week... I don't know. There are a lot of things and surprises I want to finish for this version.

Do you think that when you either finish or get bored of this project, you will allow others to modify it or make new adventures for Beth?

Definitelly, yes.

Since you are using H.P. Lovecraft elements, it seems like you would, but curious about your thoughts on the subject.

Hahahaha, excellent analogy!

So a new stable version will be uploaded in 2 or 3 days on LoK.
On the blog he will upload every version and they are't really tested.

Well, I meant, I'll upload to LoK a couple of days after I do to my blog. For the moment I have no idea about when I'll have the next version finished. xD

[BlueLight]

oh... that helps. Notice that just about every game hasn't been updated last month.

[thedude9351]

Is there a passage to the west cause i cant find one

[Hnyarly]

Well, here I have a image of a new character for the game. It's supposed to be an handsome elf, so I did some kind of non-muscular male model. I put Beth in the image to compare their sizes.

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So, any criticis/comments/opinions about him, please? What should I change?

[BlueLight]

Dude the ears... They totally should be zelda style and overly huge.
Beth face looks like she's trying to win a funny face duel. Mouth looks weird and to much blush i think.

Going back to the elf i would try a elf with long hair just to see what it looks like. Also i personally think elves have more of a bleach color hair so anything that very white i would try. Maybe some light amber or red(Might turn out pink).

A normal art style i believe is to make character by the size of their head. I think women are 4 or 5 and men are 5 or 7 heads high but i would have to look it up.

I believe you could ask trunks about this since i believe he was talking about it at one point. I'll try to look it up in my art book that i never got in to much.

[iamnuff]

yeah, that elf looks ok as a character, but if you had not SAID it was a elf i wouldnt be able to tell.

try giving him longer hair and pointier ears. make him slimmer

elves are supposed to have slim pointed faces right?



something like this?

almost, (but not quite) girlish

[BlueLight]

Thanks for helping me with my point but you didn't tell him to bleach the hair... How could you.

[dik3y]

ohh man a whole week

[SixtyBlackbirds]

His upper torso seems small for his hips, or perhaps his hips and upper thighs are simply too large. The proportions just seem off for the torso somehow.

As for him being an elf, he really could pass for either an elf or a human as it stands. Anime introduced really, really long ears, and video games picked up on it not too long afterwards. It's become somewhat standard now. I imagine it was particularly helpful for video games, as you could pick out an elf profile from a long distance with that style of ear, unlike the semi-Vulcan ear style that had been common prior. I'm neither here nor there on it, it's your elf.

[banana]

The shoulders look a little off. They shouldn't really come up above the collarbone if he's non-beefy, but instead slope down off it. So I say lower the entire arm a few pixels for each side. Also maybe shade in a bit more between the shoulder and tricep on each arm to give them some definition, so it doesn't look like one continuous muscle. The ass seems to come up a bit too high as well, or at least it should slope more gradually into his waist, rather than come in perpendicular to it.

[Hnyarly]

Ok, I've done some changes. If you think the changes are not enough (Ears aren't long enough, Arms are still too high... etc), please let me know to keep improving.

About the hair, I like it as it is. I could try another colours for hair or skin, but I need the RGB codes (or a picture with the colours).

Thanks for your help.

[Crossbow1701]

oh that poll is gonna be so hard to pick through after the tally's are done.

[Smackman]

he's gonna have a penis at some point right? yeah if hes gonna be an elf he should have some long hair thats tied back or something. elf males and females should both be quite feminine by human standards, more "beautiful" than handsome. if you were to take your old model and make him a little more buff you'd have a perfect knight type character though.

lots of fantasy games like this just make elves futanari.

[SquallLion]

I Like the intro (with 3 choices each question)
but I have a bug

when the green monster hit her and give a game over: the game.. freeze.
she doesn't return to the bed so the checkpoint is corrupted

[Merrygate]

And don't worry about your english. I think yours is more understandable than mine. xD

You have so far ten pages of posts here, between a third and a half of them are you communicating with us on a back-and-forth basis; in addition, you have a blog where you do the very same thing. My point here is, your English is quite good. Your mistakes are infrequent, mild, and thus far, you have yet to miscommunicate something or require clarification. The cherry on top here, is that you're able to communicate with other partial-English speakers. So stop worrying about your language skills, you actually have a pretty good grasp of our language.

Although, I might have read this and forgot, but I'm not sure if you've told us what your native language is. Letting us know might make it easier to communicate with other multi-linguals.



Regarding the Elf's design, I think you're close, and the second picture is playable, but the coconut effect might help make him a little more iconic. The ears are sufficiently long and sufficiently pointy, but if you wanted longer and pointier, you could get away with it if you wanted. The hair colour is good (you could bleach it a bit, but I think this is fine), but the style, at least in my opinion, doesn't work. At least shoulder-length. Any shorter, and our tropes tell us it's a half-elf. The hair can be braided any which way, or kept loose. On his proportions, I have no qualms with what you've presented.



I'd like to request a quick update, would you please change the text of the old wo/man's note to something less misleading?



Have you thought about a name for this yet? At least twice I've lost this game on the LoK page.

[Hnyarly]

he's gonna have a penis at some point right?

Of course.

if you were to take your old model and make him a little more buff you'd have a perfect knight type character though.

I agree with you. I'll use some parts of the previous model to do a human male character (higher and more muscular).

when the green monster hit her and give a game over: the game.. freeze.
she doesn't return to the bed so the checkpoint is corrupted

That's because the gnome only saves Beth from rats, and he doesn't from other enemies.

Slime actually shouldn't be in this low level zone. I put it there just for testing purposes. xD