The game I'm working on is a CYOA adventure in Twine.
Main plot: 20 years ago, a mad, corrupted king ruled the (currently unnamed) kingdom. One brave man sought to take him down. With the help of the church, he summoned a powerful goddess who agreed to aid him in restoring peace and order. They gathered as many fighters as they could find who would help them in their cause and ambushed the king, storming his castle in the dead of night. They managed to fight their way into the king's quarters, where they managed to subdue him. Many guards were eager to turn on their king, quickly betraying their brethren in the name of justice and freedom. After capturing, killing, or turning all of the guards who hadn't fled already, they dragged the king to the gallows he had built in plain sight of his chamber window. Many commoners and nobles alike had already gathered around the castle, disturbed by the echoing yells and clangs of fighting. The crowd began to cheer as they executed the king, the resonating roar beckoning any citizens who had not joined the cheering crowd to leave their homes and do so. Cherished by all, the brave (also currently unnamed) man was crowned as the new king. His intentions, however, were not so pure as everyone thought. With the help of the priests, he trapped the goddess who had aided his quest, keeping her as his sex slave. In return, the priests were allowed free use over her body. That is, until the king grew jealous. He banished the priests, wanting the goddess to himself. He soon drove the kingdom into a state of lust and chaos. Buildings that were once holy monuments had now been re-purposed to be used as brothels, priestesses and nuns selling their bodies as prostitutes. The goddess birthed three children for the king, a boy, a girl, and a hermaphrodite. Each possessed strength and intellect that far surpassed any regular human, though they are far from godly.
His oldest son is now 21, his hermaphrodite daughter is now 20, and his youngest daughter is now 18. His cleric has recently discovered that he has fallen ill, and only has a few years left to live. He decides that it's time to choose a successor between his two eldest children. He begins a competition between the two. Whichever child creates the largest harem for their father will take the throne, and the king will live out the rest of his life happily surrounded by lustful sluts begging for his cock. You play as his (you guessed it, currently unnamed) hermaphrodite daughter, and basically you have to go around picking up slaves for your harem and become the queen.
So here's the deal. I'd say I'm a pretty alright writer, but I'm far from the level I've seen on some stuff around here. I'm curious if there's anyone around here who'd be interested in writing a couple of scenes, or even just proofreading and offering any tips or criticism you might have. Any help is appreciated! I also want to know if anyone thinks this actually sounds interesting, or if I'm a horrible person. Be gentle, senpai.
Edit: I was pretty tired when I made this post (had actually been up all night working on it) so I skipped a few details that might be good to know. The game plays somewhat like a sim, where you can choose which area you want to visit and what you want to do there. Also thought I'd list some of the fetishes that are planned so far, so you can get a feel for if it interests you or not : slaves (obviously), futanari (also obvious), incest, BDSM (avoidable), furry (avoidable), pseudo-rape (avoidable), somnophilia (mostly avoidable), humiliation (avoidable), gangbanging (avoidable), etc. Possible pairings include h/f, h/m, h/f/m, m/h/m, f/h/f
Prototype build here: https://mega.nz/#!8hZwzTwb!X65cAYdHdR1y ... fhxG5MZ_fk
For anyone who wants to try it out and leave some advice/criticism
All the writing is rough summaries at the moment
You don't have to worry so much about grammar and stuff at the moment, because most of what's written is going to be replaced, as most of it is just placeholder. Also, I'd kind of prefer if you just sent me whatever you write and include the passage name instead. Partly because it's easier for me to keep track of that way, and partly because I've been learning how to use twine as I do this, so it's really all a mess and I don't want you to have to sort through it all haha. Would that be okay with you?