here's my feedback
The good* amazing backstory
* great attention to detail. The way your avatar in the world changes based on your choices in the wardrobe, awesome
. I also like the detail that your hair gets messed up after sex
* nice and fluid sex animations
* nice art style on the world
the medium* As mentioned before, I could do with a different movement control scheme. You get used to it after a while, but a first person control scheme applied to a third person view is unusual.
* the night is VERY dark. It use a bit more light. Even with brightness and contrast turned all the way up I can't make out anything, even outdoors. Indoors can be pitch black as that feels thematically right, but outside should be some light.
* I personally am not a fan of the super large boobs, but it is your game so go ahead.
* the minimalist art style does make it easy to miss items. You might want to consider some form of highlighting when near or something. I did not notice the guy in the gas station or the single guy in the flat until my fifth or so visit in search of hard drives
* I could also use a mute button on the music. It is very nice, dark and thematical but after an hour you want to hear something else
the bad* nothing here
the bugs* belly remains large after birth. Scanner and conversation avatar have flat midriff, but world avatar remains pregnant
* Sometimes the character gets locked after a human birth and can no longer move. I first assumed it had something to do with pushing the close button instead of waiting for the screen to go dark, but in my latest test run this alone was not enough to trigger it. I now think it has something to getting pregnant of fungus and humans at the same time. It happened three times now, always on human birth, always with multiple pregnancies.
* multiple pregnancies confuse the scanner
It resets the scanner to the non pregnant model, but nothing new grows until you give birth. I assume this will be fixed once multiple pregnancies are disabled
All in all great work, I will be following this closely.