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Re: Starting fresh...

Postby PatchPirate » Wed Jul 13, 2011 2:08 pm

Bussa Wrote:claws and finger nails or no?

Not a big fan of the claws, personally.

Also: DANG that is sexy!
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Re: Starting fresh...

Postby Zeus Kabob » Wed Jul 13, 2011 9:57 pm

Bussa, I'd have to recommend against redoing that male. I can't find any way that it isn't a good adaptation of a wolf or dog to a human shape and facial alignment. If you are thinking of changing animals, I'd suggest keeping this model and creating another one fresh, because a change of model isn't necessarily an improvement although there is a feeling of movement being progress. If that was confusing, I'd restate it as: any model you make after this one will have its advantages and disadvantages to this model, and I'd recommend against throwing away any advantages this model has.
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Re: Starting fresh...

Postby ByHisBillowingBeard » Thu Jul 14, 2011 2:01 am

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Re: Starting fresh...

Postby Bussa » Tue Jul 19, 2011 2:46 am

So.... Random bored-ness made her:

Let me know what you think ;)
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Re: Starting fresh...

Postby origamitoast » Tue Jul 19, 2011 2:51 am

i call her sasha ;)
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Re: Starting fresh...

Postby KaTsuO_O » Tue Jul 19, 2011 3:30 am

I love the two new character, especialy the white lion but the other one is awesome as well. The art is perfect, nothing to point out which is good. Actualy the knees and boobs is drawn differently on the first girl compared to the rest. Also I know i asked this before but think you should stay with 5 toes for every character because you are basing on human feet. I dont think any animall actualy got 5 and you said you wanted 4 on the male because you was was referencing him as a dog so why not 4 on every one, still think 5 works best. For claws and nails, go for both or have nails on hands and feet.

Glad youre back and doing stuff again and if you need someone who can help with flash you can always ask me, in the feature of course. For more characters i suggest you to go back to your old thread and dig up the ones i posted for you and/or even redo the old ones.
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Re: Starting fresh...

Postby GoRepeat » Tue Jul 19, 2011 5:08 am

edit - lol oops realized I forgot the tail!


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Re: Starting fresh...

Postby trazinn » Tue Jul 19, 2011 8:29 am

Wow!.. dance dance dance!...nice loop animation going on there!...hope you'll do more
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Re: Starting fresh...

Postby Eggplants » Tue Jul 19, 2011 4:45 pm

I'm lovin the new characters especially this last one. She's sassy ;D And I'm all for the nails and claws! I just want to see her dig them into some bloke she's doing hehe. Makes her more fun and frisky.

Oh and I hadn't noticed this before but excluding the guy, I really love how much personality you draw into your characters, Bussa! They're just so much more stunning because of it.
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Re: Starting fresh...

Postby ByHisBillowingBeard » Wed Jul 20, 2011 2:01 am

Eggplants x2
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Re: Starting fresh...

Postby Bussa » Tue Jul 26, 2011 5:51 am

So I need a little feedback on this bee chick, she's really coming together nicely but I'm really getting pissed off at her proportions and limbs...let me know what you think, any points of interest, etc. One pic is with wings up and one wings folded down.
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Re: Starting fresh...

Postby BlueLight » Tue Jul 26, 2011 6:00 am

Her face looks like it had a few run in with the wall.
Boobs look to big for the face or maybe it's the body in general.
legs eh.
arms i like.

Sorry but thats all i got. Not to helpful i know.
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Re: Starting fresh...

Postby Bussa » Tue Jul 26, 2011 6:02 am

BlueLight Wrote:Her face looks like it had a few run in with the wall.


...what does a bee face look like? that's humanoid and seductive, yet still insectoid? <---- ONE OF MY BIG PROBLEMS :roll:
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Re: Starting fresh...

Postby Bussa » Tue Jul 26, 2011 6:06 am

this is her head blad, it's a pretty simple shape, but so hard to really do anything with :?
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Re: Starting fresh...

Postby Zeus Kabob » Tue Jul 26, 2011 6:35 am

Idea: Use a mask to make her look completely bee-like, but allow for the mask to come off, revealing a mainly human face. It would allow for you to make huge eyes and an angular face without leaving the limits of the human form.
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Re: Starting fresh...

Postby BlueLight » Tue Jul 26, 2011 8:01 am

Try adding different noses is all i can say.
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Re: Starting fresh...

Postby KaTsuO_O » Tue Jul 26, 2011 2:31 pm

The character is fairly good, just the head that doesnt look too good. I would go for something like this, it may not fit better for a bee character but i think it will look more apealing.
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Re: Starting fresh...

Postby BlueLight » Tue Jul 26, 2011 8:53 pm

Looks better. not great but better
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Re: Starting fresh...

Postby ByHisBillowingBeard » Wed Jul 27, 2011 1:47 am

I think it looks alright. Some of the lines on the curves are a bit jaggedy but otherwise..
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Re: Starting fresh...

Postby GoRepeat » Wed Jul 27, 2011 2:25 am

Think bee would work better with small breasts... you know... BEE STINGS

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