by -QQ- » Mon Jan 18, 2010 5:43 am
here's the conversation that me and trunks partook for a general story line in my 3 areas (desert beach volcano) not that the volcano is mostly up in the air still because I still need to make the volcano town and dungeon. read from the bottom up.
Re: helping out with the story
Sent: Sat Jan 16, 2010 5:50 pm
by trunks2585
That's perfect, i was trying to think of how you'd fight the desert boss if there was still that sandstorm problem.
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Re: helping out with the story
Sent: Sat Jan 16, 2010 8:00 am
by -QQ-
no the volcano is also going to be bigger with its own town and dungeon its just that i have not gotten around to planing any of it at all but i do like what you've told me so far and thanks for helping me out with this part (b^ ^)b. all of you lines are much better than anything i could think of. also I'm going to bounce this idea off you what if the item that makes the desert sand storms stop is in the tunnel so that way we wont have anything conflicting latter on when you fight MR.Leever?
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Re: helping out with the story
Sent: Sat Jan 16, 2010 3:39 am
by trunks2585
part 2
the beach:
the tunnel could lead out by the area that goes to the entrance of the volcano that is blocked. some dialog for the gaurd here
Guard: wait woman, the volcano is no place for one such as yourself, heat comes from here that only ones such as myself can endure. What? You say you need the gemstone from inside? Well it is of no use to my people, if you can gather these materials I can forge a protective charm for you. One is held by a creature in the desert, some call him a monster, others say he is the guardian of the desert, either way his horn is one of the items. the other can be obtained from the beach contest, I'm sure you will have no trouble if you use your natural 'talents'. come see me when you've gathered both items.
(also instead of a charm it could be a new set of armor, like it's been talked about in some of the other threads)
I have nothing to add for how to win the beach contest for ideas, they all sound good to me. some announcer lines...
Announcer: welcome to the 64th annual beach body contest! today our judges will determine which of these sexy ladies has the best body suited for the beach. Todays contestents are (i'm thinking two other girls and krystal).
(for the sexy swimsuit)
Announcer: woah, krystal has chosen to really show off that body with that swimsuit, where did she manage to buy that from and why didn't the other girls do the same?
(for fucking the announcer)
Announcer: mmm there's no better way to tell who's got the best body than to give it a test drive, and there's no problem with krystals!
(for the strip show)
Announcer: woohoo, look at her go, this sexy vixen must have past experiance doing this!
Announcer: And our winner is this lovely fox, however the real winners are the judges *insert sex scene with contestents and judges here and then get awarded the quest item*
Mr. leever, i really have nothing to add to this other than I say name him something else, maybe just sandworm or guardian of the desert, or desert spirit, something like that.
back to the guard of the volcano:
Guard: wonderful you obtained the items, I shall make the charm for you right away, however I would appreciate some from of 'payment' (i'm sure you saw that coming)
so that's my thoughts for some dialog on the areas and whatnot. As for where to go, you'd said before the volcano only has two areas i thought it was, the entrance tunnel and the hotsprings. I'd make it at least 3 areas, the third being the place that has the gemstones or whatever we decide on for the quest item. It'd also make sense for it to be guarded in some way and krystal has to either pay for the item or 'fight' the guard for it.
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Re: helping out with the story
Sent: Sat Jan 16, 2010 3:18 am
by trunks2585
just read your responce, i'm typing this all up off to top of my head as i look back at the basic outline. I'll try to make comments in order to what you typed up so i'm not randomly jumping to different ideas.
If this set of events starts in the Gerudo village it's logical for there to be a gaurd at the entrance of the village to spot krystal and start this sequence of events. Some dialog off the top of my head....
Gerudo Gaurd: halt tresspasser! this is Gerudo territory, where even the bravest of men are not allowed, only the male heir of the Gerudo, born once every 100 years is allowed in here, let alone a diffrent species like you or that other animal we found. What's that you want to know about him? Then you can talk to the cheif, before we imprison you for tresspassing!
From these the scene could cut straight to the cheif's hut.
Cheif: Another outsider? And you want to know about the other one that was caught here, he escaped, but we are still tracking his location, no one escapes the Gerudo for long. Hmm you seem rather interested in him.....if you are willing to help me then I'll consider letting you go and withdrawing the hunt for him. There is a gemstone inside of the volcano that I seek, it's said to be worth more than the greatest riches and possesses special powers. Get it for me and we'll have a deal, until then you are free to enter and leave the village, but my warriors are free to do with you as they please as well! Now get out of my sight till you get that gem!
From here open exploration opens up just like the current sharpclaw village in the original game.
Crossing the Desert: Ok like you said crossing reguarly is impossible, krystal can try it but either a sandstorm will white out the screen and put her back at the start, or leevers will jump on her right away and bang her till her stamina is depleted and once again white screen back to start. Maybe have a gerudo guard inform her of a warning about the sandstorms and creatures. Optional would be you have to pay the guard for the information, either with coins or with sex, and once the sandstorms and the leevers are dealt with, the gaurd could actually lead you across the desert, like you'd go from beginning to end, not having to cross all the screens, sorta like a teleport. Since you're thinking a boss fight with Mr. leever will make the others stop attacking her, i don't really see the need to make an item to make attacks less frequent as it would become useless later on, however if the item just deals with the sandstorm that's fine with me, it could be a quest item after you do the leever boss fight or something.
Gurudo Guide: You're a rather cute outsider but not very bright are you? For a little payment I'll tell you what you are doing wrong.
After payment: mmm fuck that was good. Ok listen up because i'm only saying this once, if you want to hear it agian, it'll cost you just like last time. There's a vicious wind that dominates the desert, they say there was once a man that tamed the wind but his secret has been lost. However even if the sand storms don't get you, the monsters in the desert will, they attack relentlessly, only by defeating their leader would they let you pass, as if you can make it to the leader in the first place!
After the problems of the desert are solved: I don't belive it, how did a weak outsider like you tame the unforgiving desert? Very well, for another payment I'll guide you across, and don't give me that stupid look, even if you can cross the desert, I can get you across faster.
So for the time being, freeing the man is the only option, since the guide will only inform you of passing being impossible, and no items would currently work.
prisoner: oh shit, today must be my lucky day, a female that won't stab me for looking at her, why can't there be more like you around? Hey baby how about you help me out here and I'll pay you back, I know a way out of this hellhole, but I need a distraction to get past the guards. You help me slip by them and we are home scott free and at the beach!
From here I'm thinking krystal has to do her best to seduce the guards and keep them enganged in sex long enough for the man to slip by in the background and activate the passageway. Once inside the door to the passage can close behind them, locking them in a tunnel where he then rapes her.
prisoner: mmm you're pretty good, i've never seen those gerudo bitches dyke it out like that before. But watching all that got me hard as a rock, be a good girl and take care of me before we leave, and don't pretend you don't like it either.
(ok that's a lot for one message I'll send up my ideas for the other half in the next PM)
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Re: helping out with the story
Sent: Sat Jan 16, 2010 12:16 am
by -QQ-
you'll be glad to know that i wasn't talking about like likes i was talking more of on of many legend of Zelda boss characters are giant worm like creatures and i was just going to do that unless someone thought of something better as for story ill give you my basic idea on what needs to happen and you can make an arc that fits it.
First off we start at gerudo village were the leader has information on foxes whereabouts the leader wants some item that we can make up later from the volcano dungeon in order to trade the information and so our first challenge is to cross the desert but you cant cross due to frequent sand storms and monster attacks. The one way is to buy a gerudo guide or to buy an item that makes it so no sandstorms happen and fewer monsters appear. the last alternative is to get information from a prisoner about a hidden passage to the beach but it is hard to get because he wants you to get him out of jail so he can "show it to you" (he leads you to it then rapes you). now there will be nothing in the desert and the trigger for the boss comes later.
In gredou village there is a bath, a shop, a jail, and a Hut were the leader resides add anything that we can use to expand the puzzle I'll draw it up later if its an area.
Now at the beach the goal is to get in the volcano area were you are blocked by a volcano dezien (suborsian or goron it has yet to be decided) he will let you in only if you bring him the items needed to make a charm to protect you against heat in the volcano. One part is won at a beach body contest (you can win this multiple ways fuck announcer for win, buy bathing suits, or strip on the middle of the stage but then get you and the rest of the contestants gang raped or all three X D) so after you get that he tells you to go get a sand horn from MR.Leever (or other boss if needed to be changed) hes the giant sand worm sort of a leever on steroids. Anyways you have to train you endurance to a certain level by fucking with people around the beach. Then you can go try MR.Leever on for size you win if your endurance beats his but if you lose you start back at the beach his endurance wont be known in game but depending on how fast we make your stats rise we can figure out how much krystal will need later. so once you beat him you can go back to him for sex scenes and then leevers will no longer rape you on sight in the desert anymore (you may choose to have sex with them if you want to though). So once you beat MR.Leever and head back to the entrance the guy crafts a gem that protects you against heat and then you enter the volcano.
this is where I'm at a lose since I don't really know what to put in now. so that's the flow of action so far i need some help with what certain characters might say and also need help with getting basic layout with the volcano level.
(omg so many words @- @)
thanks for reading all this hope to hear what you come up with and just pm if you need anything.
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helping out with the story
Sent: Fri Jan 15, 2010 11:31 pm
by trunks2585
I think you already could tell i was interested in helping progress the flow of the story. I'd like to hear a more solid idea of what you are thinking of right now, since these are your scenes and everything, and then i'll give my imput. Sadly I still don't have any good alternative characters for the desert, the best i came up with was suggesting dark link in another thread. Maybe just don't do the 'like likes' as they'd be borederline on a vore fetish i think, unless they are altered to only 'eat' a certain part of krystal.
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