Hentai: Peach's Untold Tale 3.48 (Nov 2/18) - HIATUS

[www.porncritique.lol]

I'm amazed at how much work you've put into this, for curiosity's sake, how much do you plan on doing with this? It's already massive for a flash game, but you're still tirelessly working on it. (not that I'm complaining) You've been working for at least 2 years now, will you continuously update until you get bored with it, or is there some goal you've made?

On an unrelated note, I think a great costume with peach would be "Zero Suit Peach", it would be like Samus for the most part, but maybe it could have a heart shaped breastplate instead of a chozo rune. Also, it will have to be edited so the rear fabric looks more like a thong. For scenes involving anal and vaginal sex (not rubbing btw) some of it could be torn off to reveal her ass cheeks and pussy. Possibly for tit scenes as well, but I don't think that would be necessary. Good luck working on this, I'm eager to see what will come next!

On a final note, I created this account solely to praise your game, but you'll still hear from me here and maybe see me elsewhere on the site if you were wondering.

[tripflip]

I made a design for Iggy in case you'd like to use it. Ivan, I'll email you the parts if you'd like. What format do you prefer? (jpeg, gif, png, etc). I moved the pieces around enough so that I think they'll all work in different positions, but let me know if you'd like any of the parts changed. They're separated into head, mouth, neck, torso, upper arm, forearm, hand, upper leg, lower leg, foot, and penis. Actually, as I'm writing this, it occurs to me that I forgot the tail. Grr... Ah well. Here's what I have right now.

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I'm planning on putting some time in on the rest of the koopalings that aren't implemented yet, and storyboard out a first draft of scenes for them. I'm basing these off of their basic wikki info (Iggy's the hyperactive and demented one, Roy is either a bully or the smooth one (though Morton is already the big bully, so I'll probably go with smooth), Lemy is the most innocent and playful, and Ludwig is the smartest but the most cruel). I apologize in advance if anyone else is already working on these and I missed it.

[Ivan-Aedler]

I updated the game with Monty Mole scene 5!!
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I'm amazed at how much work you've put into this, for curiosity's sake, how much do you plan on doing with this? It's already massive for a flash game, but you're still tirelessly working on it. (not that I'm complaining) You've been working for at least 2 years now, will you continuously update until you get bored with it, or is there some goal you've made?

Thank you for your acknowledge I plan working on it until I have all the 8 worlds, more enemies (with its scenes), all Koopaling scenes, 'Half Boss' scenes, like Wart, 20 or more side quests (like Peach having to bring a potion or a key to someone), Krystal character in the game, the pregnancy feature, ground pound feature, 'P' feature (in SMW, Mario flies by while fat), more Peach art (in cut scenes), and more endings, like Peach marrying Mario. Then I might be satisfied.

On an unrelated note, I think a great costume with peach would be "Zero Suit Peach", it would be like Samus for the most part, but maybe it could have a heart shaped breastplate instead of a chozo rune...

Sorry, no outfits outside Mario universe allowed, as stated in dozens of pages ago. But I might add 'Alice outfit' as a bonus.

Good luck working on this, I'm eager to see what will come next!

We shall see!

On a final note, I created this account solely to praise your game, but you'll still hear from me here and maybe see me elsewhere on the site if you were wondering.

Thank you, I'll be hearing you!

I made a design for Iggy in case you'd like to use it. Ivan, I'll email you the parts if you'd like. What format do you prefer? (jpeg, gif, png, etc).

Hey nice one!! I've notified Luftmallow and Biles, because I want them to opine. They are artists.
Luft said in a few minutes ago: 'He just need to be less lanky and a better pose and he should be good'
Do you have a vector version (AI, SWF or SVG file?) It would be better! Do you use Illustrator or Flash? If not, no problem, I can trace it (turn to vector). I dont use bitmaps.

They're separated into head, mouth, neck, torso, upper arm, forearm, hand, upper leg, lower leg, foot, and penis. Actually, as I'm writing this, it occurs to me that I forgot the tail. Grr... Ah well. Here's what I have right now.

Dont worry about the tail

I'm planning on putting some time in on the rest of the koopalings that aren't implemented yet

Hey, please pay attention. We have all Koopalings! (As stated in page 1 of this thread, whose link is there and here!)
viewtopic.php?f=34&t=2265&start=3700#p196906
But we appreciate stylized versions, because our Koopalings reuse some parts, so they are into a given style. But I like your work, because now Iggy would be UNICQUE

I'm basing these off of their basic wikki info (Iggy's the hyperactive and demented one, Roy is either a bully or the smooth one (though Morton is already the big bully, so I'll probably go with smooth), Lemy is the most innocent and playful, and Ludwig is the smartest but the most cruel). I apologize in advance if anyone else is already working on these and I missed it.

You're great, thank you!

[VintageBass]

Slimes so far: (You can zoom them).

YES

YES!

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And now we just need to put Nicky into the top of a vase and he is set for life.

[Darthan]

And now we just need to put Nicky into the top of a vase and he is set for life.

Now now Vintage, we can't just put Nicky in any old vase, it has to be a special vase. Nicky needs his pot to live in, he wouldn't be quite as adorable otherwise.

[VintageBass]

And now we just need to put Nicky into the top of a vase and he is set for life.

Now now Vintage, we can't just put Nicky in any old vase, it has to be a special vase. Nicky needs his pot to live in, he wouldn't be quite as adorable otherwise.

Oh yeah, you're right about that, and he certainly can't have the ones where Shy Guys and Cobrats are popping out.

[SwordOfAlmonds]

http://www.hardcoregamer.com/2014/11/17 ... ts/117824/

I thought this might brightness your day for all your hard work. Technically, your project is now officially endorsed by Nintendo.

[enTEGR8ion]

I was wondering if maybe you'd put another physique option, this one can be a permanent change (unless you change it yourself in the options) just changing the size of the character's ass :p Maybe you thought of this already but if there'll be scenes for the sun. The affects that if there would be that instead of having it to where you choose the skin tone in the beginning of the game, each time she gets forced by the sun her skin tone changes from original to tan, then the second time she turns from tan to fire peach (skin tone of course). Will there be giant scenes too or will there only be you getting stomped on in the forest levels? One thing I noticed during sex scenes or if you face Peach away from the camera her nipples are also still facing the camera when they shouldn't. Will there also be more variety of enemies in the levels? Especially in the snow world since all there is snow men? Will the whales have a random scene too or will they just stay as platform elements?

I'm sorry I have a lot of questions lol I've played this game quite a bit since I found it a few days ago and I just have input :p

[MPLDAM9919]

http://www.hardcoregamer.com/2014/11/17/nintendo-officially-endorses-derivative-works-permits-fan-projects/117824/

I thought this might brightness your day for all your hard work. Technically, your project is now officially endorsed by Nintendo.

I saw that yesterday. Ivan's project was the first thing I thought of when I saw that news.

[tyler_eli]

Look't all these helpful ppl with their great ideas and artwork! Peach would be in shock mode from all the pounding and new ideas that are waitin for her

http://www.hardcoregamer.com/2014/11/17/nintendo-officially-endorses-derivative-works-permits-fan-projects/117824/
I thought this might brightness your day for all your hard work. Technically, your project is now officially endorsed by Nintendo.

They can't really endorse this, and since Ivan's version is barely an indie game and a freeware, there aren't any profits that they could have claimed (unless all of you guys are getting paid and leaving me out!). If they do endorse us I would go to the cons, just to meet all the PUT princesses' cosplayers...

[Ivan-Aedler]

Now now Vintage, we can't just put Nicky in any old vase, it has to be a special vase. Nicky needs his pot to live in, he wouldn't be quite as adorable otherwise.

Why not making that pot yourself? I wouldnt be using my time on that this weekend.

[LINK] I thought this might brightness your day for all your hard work. Technically, your project is now officially endorsed by Nintendo.

Is that real? At least they are more parody-friendly, in opposite of 'Game Freak' and others related to Pokemon.
I'll read the link tonight, Ok got it earlier! Great!

I was wondering if maybe you'd put another physique option, this one can be a permanent change (unless you change it yourself in the options) just changing the size of the character's ass :p

This IS a SO AWAITED feature, as I love big asses myself! I've already posted about this, like 4 or 5 times in those long pages. HOWEVER. I am postponing this since late 2012 because I am still organising it. That change WILL (101% of the chance) break like 1,000 or more scene frames, so I would need to fix them all in order to accept bigger butts. Also, certain poses, like 'Peach Frontal Toad scene', where we see her little butt, might not get increased, so the 'bigger butt' will be more evident and even in Frontside Standing Up, Backside Standing Up, 3/4 Pose (or 1/4, I always exchange those definitions) and Side Facing. There will be scenes we may think her butt is not bigger, but that will be due to object limitations.

Maybe you thought of this already but if there'll be scenes for the sun. The affects that if there would be that instead of having it to where you choose the skin tone in the beginning of the game, each time she gets forced by the sun her skin tone changes from original to tan. Then the second time she turns from tan to fire peach (skin tone of course)

This would require me to create a 'tanned' skin for all characters. Peach already has this, but not Peach PS, Daisy, Rosalina and Krystal in the future. I dont see any reason to add up complexity just to make the sun tan her. Peach PS (Playshapes Peach) doesnt even have a burn mode as well. So even if I add this feature up, it will only work for Peach and Tanned Peach (Peach turning to Tanned, then Tanned turning to Burn). In fact, the game IS concepted for JUST one character, Peach herself! The other characters are just to diversify. There was a feature I wanted to add an year ago: 'multiple character colors', that could be applied to any character. So normal Peach could get 'Golden Peach' in certain powerups, 'Frozen Peach' if attacked with ice... But this system needs me to make 3 or 4 mask properties to every bodypart (Peach has more than 50 different ones, most of them hands!). Each mask will contain a given color BRIGHTNESS, in order to make shadows and outlines. Its a thing I dont want to do just yet.

Will there be giant scenes too or will there only be you getting stomped on in the forest levels?

I plan making ONE giant scene for every huge creature. Its not feasible to make like 5 or more of those scenes, also because giant creatures are found only in 4-5 and 4-6 levels. In the future I might make them appear in more levels (once Peach finishes the game at least once).

One thing I noticed during sex scenes or if you face Peach away from the camera her nipples are also still facing the camera when they shouldn't.

Let's say her nipples like to face the camera

Will there also be more variety of enemies in the levels? Especially in the snow world since all there is snow men?

There is also Bumpties there. I plan putting some blue koopas (which wont fall in cliffs during walking) and the Cherbils (those small butt-like creatures). Whales will 'spurt' water to raise Peach up. Maybe some scenes can happen (funny ones) like Peach rotating due to the 'geiser'.

[VintageBass]

Now now Vintage, we can't just put Nicky in any old vase, it has to be a special vase. Nicky needs his pot to live in, he wouldn't be quite as adorable otherwise.

Why not making that pot yourself? I wouldnt be using my time on that this weekend.

One vase, coming right up!

They can't really endorse this, and since Ivan's version is barely an indie game and a freeware, there aren't any profits that they could have claimed (unless all of you guys are getting paid and leaving me out!). If they do endorse us I would go to the cons, just to meet all the PUT princesses' cosplayers...

I would imagine that part of the problem with this is the fact that this game is an adult game, so there's not really much going for public appearances for this game, but given that Nintendo has been easing up on things, especially how they did get Bayonetta some Playboy treatment, it might be possible for PUT to see some love like that eventually.

[tyler_eli]

I would imagine that part of the problem with this is the fact that this game is an adult game,

Well, if I was this game's artist

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time to take my pills...

[VintageBass]

Well, if I was this game's artist

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time to take my pills...

And for every boys out there, they will finally learn what it'll be like to be a man.

[tripflip]

Luft said in a few minutes ago: 'He just need to be less lanky and a better pose and he should be good'

Alrighty, sounds good. I'll modify him.

Do you have a vector version (AI, SWF or SVG file?) It would be better! Do you use Illustrator or Flash? If not, no problem, I can trace it (turn to vector). I dont use bitmaps.

I have Illustrator, but I almost always do everything in Photoshop, using bitmaps. I'm kind of an Illustrator n00b. Also, my version is only cs4, and from what I can tell, LiveTrace isn't that great in this version. I've never really been satisfied with any of its results, no matter how I adjust its settings. But then, maybe I'm doing something wrong. From what I've seen, it looks like it became much better by cs6.

I should really upgrade.

Hey, please pay attention. We have all Koopalings! (As stated in page 1 of this thread, whose link is there and here!)
viewtopic.php?f=34&t=2265&start=3700#p196906
But we appreciate stylized versions, because our Koopalings reuse some parts, so they are into a given style. But I like your work, because now Iggy would be UNICQUE

Ah, I apologize. I completely missed that. I had only noticed that, in-game, most of the koopalings were under construction and since Lemy looked so much like Lary, I assumed it was just a placeholder image. That's my bad.

And I had read from a few pages back that it seemed like many contributors had moved on, leaving Ivan to carry the burden. So I thought I'd do what I can to help out, without really knowing the current state of affairs. I apologize to the artists for making assumptions and presumptions.

[Ivan-Aedler]

Well, if I was this game's artist ...

Calm down you hear?
(Of course I wont be doing that).

Alrighty, sounds good. I'll modify him.

Great!

I have Illustrator, but I almost always do everything in Photoshop, using bitmaps. I'm kind of an Illustrator n00b. Also, my version is only cs4, and from what I can tell, LiveTrace isn't that great in this version. I've never really been satisfied with any of its results, no matter how I adjust its settings. But then, maybe I'm doing something wrong. From what I've seen, it looks like it became much better by cs6.

Interesting enough, I've made 95% of the art in MIM PUT using Flash CS5. I havent used even Illustrator itself. But people recommends it (even Illustrator CS4 is great), because their vectors are more optimized (less points/curves, which is great for a game). Anyway, I've learnt how to optimize also in Flash So, when we have a final version of him, you can send me the non vector file, no problem.

Ah, I apologize. I completely missed that. I had only noticed that, in-game, most of the koopalings were under construction and since Lemy looked so much like Lary, I assumed it was just a placeholder image. That's my bad.

No problem at least I was quick here hehe, because there were some non communication problems before (Asian made a great Bullet Bill, then Digfree made another one, without realizing Asian made it). I ended up with two great Bullet Bills and I dont know which to use (I know Digfree one is more polished, but I also like the cartoonish style, mostly because our Peach is a lovely cartoon, right?)

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(I might make a 'joint stereo' here... I might use the cartoon version with the shadowing, the arm/hand and the 'base' of the polished model).
EDIT (after some minutes): Hmmm like this

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And I had read from a few pages back that it seemed like many contributors had moved on, leaving Ivan to carry the burden. So I thought I'd do what I can to help out, without really knowing the current state of affairs. I apologize to the artists for making assumptions and presumptions.

Hey, thank you! No problem (about affairs, communications and 'rules'). But please talk to me about anything before giving out surprises, or you might be at risk of doing double work :/

[Pram]

Wasn't it only the big ones that had the shark teeth? I don't recall. I've been looking between them for a bit and it feels like the lower one needs to be a little longer maybe? I've also noticed bullet bills look a lot like buttplugs.

[VintageBass]

Wasn't it only the big ones that had the shark teeth? I don't recall. I've been looking between them for a bit and it feels like the lower one needs to be a little longer maybe? I've also noticed bullet bills look a lot like buttplugs.

Usually the one with the teeth are referred as Banzai Bills, and don't really have arms but are bigger indeed. Bullet Bills are smaller, look like the top one (which looks great) and have arms... so it being a buttplug and spanking Peach with his arms...

>_> Well, there's an idea.

[Ivan-Aedler]

I am contacting Newgrounds again. Maybe the game could be there again soon?

Wasn't it only the big ones that had the shark teeth? I don't recall. I've been looking between them for a bit and it feels like the lower one needs to be a little longer maybe? I've also noticed bullet bills look a lot like buttplugs.

Well, thats the intention

[Pram]

Oh yeah, I wanted to ask if the anal gape is working correctly, I did the scene with the dog in the castle several times, and did a do over with goombas several times as well and it wouldn't trigger for me.