General Discussion about Gangs and Whores

[FAYAZ666]

Just wanted to pop in and give more words of support. Everything looks fantastic and I can't wait to try it out. Really looking forward to when you guys get the blog up and running.

well it really isnt a blog, but more of a forum, but we will get it set up soon so we can interact with you guys better and hopefully getting the demo out soob

[BlueLight]

I'd suggest you all move the discussion over to here viewtopic.php?f=37&t=4015
however we're still editing the thread and changing content.

[BlueLight]

no post for 5 days... i'm getting depressed. is it my cute fluffy kitsune avatar that's scaring you all away.

[Nice and Blue]

no post for 5 days... i'm getting depressed. is it my cute fluffy kitsune avatar that's scaring you all away.

They are just waiting for news, you silly fox.

[BlueLight]

>_> not my fault that zues and pixel decided a real discussion to involve them should be moved to the private section.
I guess i can show some screen shows of the current Gui to them. While it's nothing new, it will provide feed back for us before we add them to the introduction page.

BTW you guys can post in that thread in our new sub forum.

[pixelfetish8]

We are still alive, just waitinting the programers finish their work while we work on more writting and events, we are currently working on second demo events

[Duplicity]

Just so people know, the game is still being worked on. Full steam ahead and what not. Exciting features have been added, Pixel might be able to fill you peoples in, but it all depends what is kept secret, oh so secret for the demo launch.

Erotic writers are still wanted and shall always be wanted. Experienced or not, all are welcome. There are story NPC's and events that need to be written, but people are welcome to come along with their own characters and events, provided they fit into the world.

Though there will be room for events and characters not fitting into the world. These will be on mini cassettes and will be scattered through out the game, some providing lore, some providing exciting alternate worlds.

This is a big game and so it will take quite some time to flesh out and create. Writers always wanted.

If you haven't the inclination or desire to write porn/erotica then we need programmers to speed up the process. AS3 is our language and some skill/knowledge is preferable, though I think the coders don't mind teaching some things. So contact Pixel on Skype(his skype name is on the bottom of the first post), or leave a message here.

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We also need proof checkers and beta readers if people want to help.

[clankclank]

What exactly would a proof checker do? I would be more than happy to help out in any way I can.

[Zeus Kabob]

What exactly would a proof checker do? I would be more than happy to help out in any way I can.

Correcting comma placement and other grammatical errors, fixing sentence syntax, fixing improper verbiage or tone, and other proofreading tasks.

[BlueLight]

What exactly would a proof checker do? I would be more than happy to help out in any way I can.

basically you read what other people have written and correct any mistakes.

[clankclank]

Sounds good! How would I go about getting started?

[Zeus Kabob]

Add pixelfetish8 on Skype (pixel fetish8) and tell him that you want to proofread for the project.

[clankclank]

Alright, thanks

[Duplicity]

I should add, that most writers, especially me, prefer the proof checker to use comments.

That way the writer can see where they went wrong, what the proof checker thinks is the best solution and choose how they will fix the problem. Other wise it is very hard to see what has been changed. Even if you track changes some programs won't show them.

Often I just rewrite the sentence to make it sound better, and often I use 'incorrect' words like smoosh or mons on purpose. I always double check my work, but mistakes get through. So in some cases the proof checker is more of a copy editor, that is looking for the small mistakes and grammar.

The format we are using is double spaced paragraphs. And probably US English, but I don't think people care if we interchange words like grey/gray etc. I can never remember which one is the proper spelling and which one is the gibberish US spelling.＼(^o^)／

[tracingthelines]

I'd like to point out that I offered as proofing and beta reader over in the translator section and was told it was pretty much full and that no help was needed, or at least that's the impression that I got. Is there a different way to contact pixel (such as by e-mail, I've sent a PM already) rather than Skype? As that is something I would prefer to do, if only because it'll be more work than waiting for someone French to write something.

Also, in regards to grey/gray, it's pretty simple: E for England, A for America. And Mons is a word (for the area slightly above the vagina), it's just more scientific than sexy, which might be what the scene calls for if it's a mad doctor of sorts, less so some wild assailant with low intelligence attacking another. Situational, for sure.

[turbs]

hello!!! im here to add the request of a lifetime! may I help in the writing for this game, like enemy descriptions, attacks, encounters, etc. etc. I may not be the best writer in town, but it seems as if you need writers so I wish to help!

[BlueLight]

I'd like to point out that I offered as proofing and beta reader over in the translator section and was told it was pretty much full and that no help was needed, or at least that's the impression that I got. Is there a different way to contact pixel (such as by e-mail, I've sent a PM already) rather than Skype? As that is something I would prefer to do, if only because it'll be more work than waiting for someone French to write something.

Also, in regards to grey/gray, it's pretty simple: E for England, A for America. And Mons is a word (for the area slightly above the vagina), it's just more scientific than sexy, which might be what the scene calls for if it's a mad doctor of sorts, less so some wild assailant with low intelligence attacking another. Situational, for sure.

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[Duplicity]

I'd like to point out that I offered as proofing and beta reader over in the translator section and was told it was pretty much full and that no help was needed, or at least that's the impression that I got. Is there a different way to contact pixel (such as by e-mail, I've sent a PM already) rather than Skype? As that is something I would prefer to do, if only because it'll be more work than waiting for someone French to write something.

Also, in regards to grey/gray, it's pretty simple: E for England, A for America. And Mons is a word (for the area slightly above the vagina), it's just more scientific than sexy, which might be what the scene calls for if it's a mad doctor of sorts, less so some wild assailant with low intelligence attacking another. Situational, for sure.

I know mons is a word that is why I had the single quotes on incorrect. Mons, just like clit, is seen as wrong by some people who think Word is the greatest resource ever and knows all 'correct' words. As for there being no room for proof readers, the person replying to you probably thought you meant for French.

hello!!! im here to add the request of a lifetime! may I help in the writing for this game, like enemy descriptions, attacks, encounters, etc. etc. I may not be the best writer in town, but it seems as if you need writers so I wish to help!

Generally the person to write the character scenes will write the enemy description, attacks and such. But are you offering to write the smut as well? Because we welcome any one really, and the more you write the better you get.

Anyway the best thing is usually contact Pixel on Skype(bottom of opening thread post), because he uses it most often. Blue has posted Pixel's email above

[BlueLight]

Thinking of updating the intro duction thread.

[pixelfetish8]

hello!!! im here to add the request of a lifetime! may I help in the writing for this game, like enemy descriptions, attacks, encounters, etc. etc. I may not be the best writer in town, but it seems as if you need writers so I wish to help!

it will be fantastic if we can have more erotic writers to write erotic scenes : 3