Hentai: Peach's Untold Tale 3.48 (Nov 2/18) - HIATUS

[Ivan-Aedler]

The whole lubrication thing... Ivan's.

The scene was my creation but not your words:

E. Gadd SCENE:
[21:02:09] Ivan: E.Gadd detected a giant unkown red mothership parked in the moon. and Peach has to investigate. Say what? That could be, actually, Rosalina spaceship! But Peach was kidnapped by a X-naut before that.
[21:10:00] C*****.: Peach: Can I please ride your rocket?
[21:10:20] C****: Gadd: You may, but I will need some lubication before it can launch
[21:16:12] Ivan: Hmmmmm it may work! I will make a scene for it

X-Nauts would need some kind of way to take over (they're kinda stuck on the moon, since the Warp Pipe is gone).Grodus could just be on the moon in his base thinking, when Peach just so happens to land (or crash) near his base. He might even be thinking of leaving the Moon and try take over the world by flying to it with Peach's spaceship. Or maybe he keeps her spaceship around for investigative purposes, so his lab guys can figure out how it works and he can build his own spaceships.
- Peach will use the spaceship from E.Gadd, after finding all pieces of a blueprint sheet of paper, which will have a random picture of peach in the other side
- Peach will use the red spaceship from SMB2.

[DeadRomance]

There a big problem with the mushroom power ups, every time I pick one up I get the frog suit power up.

[VintageBass]

The whole lubrication thing... Ivan's.

The scene was my creation but not your words:

So, it's still your creation.

Ivan: E.Gadd detected a giant unkown red mothership parked in the moon. and Peach has to investigate. Say what? That could be, actually, Rosalina spaceship! But Peach was kidnapped by a X-naut before that.

*checks the Comet Observatory* ... That's red? It looks far from being red.

[21:10:00] C*****.: Peach: Can I please ride your rocket?
[21:10:20] C****: Gadd: You may, but I will need some lubication before it can launch
[21:16:12] Ivan: Hmmmmm it may work! I will make a scene for it

I still don't recall that being what I wanted. Heck as far as I know, cum isn't exactly the best lubricate to use for machines. In sex, sure, since water + protein is all good for penetration, but if the stuff is corrosive on paint, I'm not exactly sure if it's good enough to be use to power a rocket to the moon. Especially when they're going to need a good amount of the stuff and I'm going to take a guess that E. Gadd won't have enough to do that. Then again, lubrication isn't enough to get to the moon, either and I will know.

- Peach may encounter Geno and/or Rangers on world 9.

OK, I know it's been a while since I've played RPG so I might be confused about the whole Geno thing, but I know what he's doing in the game is just taking over a puppet and that's it. I don't know what his true form looks like, other than what I got on the Wiki saying that he's a Star so what do I know, so I can't say much.

I will, however, want to ask why are the Axem Rangers on the moon?

- Peach will use the spaceship from E.Gadd, after finding all pieces of a blueprint sheet of paper, which will have a random picture of peach in the other side

Well that's not creepy at all!

- Peach will use the red spaceship from SMB2.

May I asked: what red spaceship? I checked and the only related space item is the Rocket, which is the very thing that E. Gadd has in his lab.

[Ivan-Aedler]

Ok new Birdo pose made: Backside.

There a big problem with the mushroom power ups, every time I pick one up I get the frog suit power up.

I have to check it again but I remember I already fixed it. Please clean your browser cache.

*checks the Comet Observatory* ... That's red? It looks far from being red.

Ok lets call it 'grey' then..... its still like a rock....a meteor from a distance.

I still don't recall that being what I wanted. Heck as far as I know, cum isn't exactly the best lubricate to use for machines. In sex, sure, since water + protein is all good for penetration, but if the stuff is corrosive on paint, I'm not exactly sure if it's good enough to be use to power a rocket to the moon. Especially when they're going to need a good amount of the stuff and I'm going to take a guess that E. Gadd won't have enough to do that. Then again, lubrication isn't enough to get to the moon, either and I will know.

Well, its only pun intended, you know. Of course it has double meaning. The 'real oil' and the 'cum oil'. The main problem is that the spaceship IS broken and E.Gadd needs the plan in order to remake the engine (the main blueprint), so far scattered in the levels (14 or more parts).

OK, I know it's been a while since I've played RPG so I might be confused about the whole Geno thing, but I know what he's doing in the game is just taking over a puppet and that's it. I don't know what his true form looks like, other than what I got on the Wiki saying that he's a Star so what do I know, so I can't say much.

Yes he's a SOUL (a star spirit), thats why I wanted him to take the human (flesh) form. But I am still thinking about putting him as wood (pinnochio form).

I will, however, want to ask why are the Axem Rangers on the moon?

They use a vessel to go around the sky, right?
Its not expected to have a volcano level.

- Peach will use the spaceship from E.Gadd, after finding all pieces of a blueprint sheet of paper, which will have a random picture of peach in the other side

Well that's not creepy at all!

I wanted to make that one (E.Gadd using Peach's butt to draw a blueprint and use it to make him remember the correct location of things. This might have happened BEFORE the real blueprint exists. Then he got it lost around the levels). Peach was like drunk so she doesnt remember that embarassing moment.

May I asked: what red spaceship? I checked and the only related space item is the Rocket, which is the very thing that E. Gadd has in his lab.

Yes yes, beige one. I am just copying and pasting old text we talked about in the past. When ASIANPERSUASION made the spaceship, we were regarding to it as 'red' due to its wings.

[VintageBass]

*checks the Comet Observatory* ... That's red? It looks far from being red.

Ok lets call it 'grey' then..... its still like a rock....a meteor from a distance.

Hence the name. "Still like?" When has a rock be added in to this line of thought?

Well, its only pun intended, you know. Of course it has double meaning. The 'real oil' and the 'cum oil'.

And about that... if your cum tastes like oil (and why would anyone be drinking oil of the non cooking variety, and even then), then someone needs to see a doctor.

Yes he's a SOUL (a star spirit), thats why I wanted him to take the human (flesh) form. But I am still thinking about putting him as wood (pinnochio form).

No, his species is a Star, not a soul. What kind of Star he is, I'm not exactly sure, but a Star Spirit, that's possible. And why would he have a human form? He never shown anything about being a human, and only chose to be as the doll to help fight Smithy because it was the strongest of the four dolls the boy was playing with.

I will, however, want to ask why are the Axem Rangers on the moon?

They use a vessel to go around the sky, right?
Its not expected to have a volcano level.

Yeah the Blade is their ship, but it hasn't been seen to have space travel capabilities. It was only at the volcano because they were happened to be there, being slow to help earlier. This is probably why Smithy should not based them on five teens with attitude.

I wanted to make that one (E.Gadd using Peach's butt to draw a blueprint and use it to make him remember the correct location of things. This might have happened BEFORE the real blueprint exists. Then he got it lost around the levels). Peach was like drunk so she doesnt remember that embarassing moment.

... Why am I siding with Bowser on your treatment of Peach for this game?

May I asked: what red spaceship? I checked and the only related space item is the Rocket, which is the very thing that E. Gadd has in his lab.

Yes yes, beige one. I am just copying and pasting old text we talked about in the past. When ASIANPERSUASION made the spaceship, we were regarding to it as 'red' due to its wings.

... So that's a bit of redundancy there. If Peach is going to use the spaceship from E. Gadd's lab, which happens to be the "red" rocket you mentioned earlier, then why have a third option?

[Ivan-Aedler]

Hence the name. "Still like?" When has a rock be added in to this line of thought?

E.Gadd is observing an undentified object that might be a meteor since hte beginning of the game. Its just a reason for him to make Peach use the spaceship. Once she gives him the blueprints, E.Gadd can 'save the Earth', but of course, its NOT a meteor, but Rosalina spaceship! hehe. So Peach ends up in a hurry to help (because E.Gadd cant leave his lab, he works hard there), and SHE gets in trouble (again)!

And about that... if your cum tastes like oil (and why would anyone be drinking oil of the non cooking variety, and even then), then someone needs to see a doctor.

We also should not take 'Oil' literally

No, his species is a Star, not a soul. What kind of Star he is, I'm not exactly sure, but a Star Spirit, that's possible. And why would he have a human form? He never shown anything about being a human, and only chose to be as the doll to help fight Smithy because it was the strongest of the four dolls the boy was playing with.

So lets make him a doll then....

Yeah the Blade is their ship, but it hasn't been seen to have space travel capabilities. It was only at the volcano because they were happened to be there, being slow to help earlier. This is probably why Smithy should not based them on five teens with attitude.

Who knows how they got there (in the moon). Maybe they used the Grodus teleporter. Maybe we are not going to see their ship (because they used the teleporter by foot).

... Why am I siding with Bowser on your treatment of Peach for this game?

Couldnt I make her embarass herself more due to ('who God knows') her acceptance of being naked in order for E.Gadd to use a tender and smooth 'tissue' (her butt) to draw his ideas on?

.. So that's a bit of redundancy there. If Peach is going to use the spaceship from E. Gadd's lab, which happens to be the "red" rocket you mentioned earlier, then why have a third option?

Which third option? You said the 'rocket pun'?

[MPLDAM9919]

Hence the name. "Still like?" When has a rock be added in to this line of thought?

E.Gadd is observing an undentified object that might be a meteor since the beginning of the game. Its just a reason for him to make Peach use the spaceship. Once she gives him the blueprints, E.Gadd can 'save the Earth', but of course, its NOT a meteor, but Rosalina spaceship! hehe. So Peach ends up in a hurry to help (because E.Gadd cant leave his lab, he works hard there), and he gets in trouble (again)!

That line now makes sense to me. I thought that line was dark for a hentai game. Which why I suggested him studying "the sexual behavior that's been going on lately". But it's spouse to tie into meeting Rosalina.

[VintageBass]

Hence the name. "Still like?" When has a rock be added in to this line of thought?

E.Gadd is observing an undentified object that might be a meteor since hte beginning of the game. Its just a reason for him to make Peach use the spaceship. Once she gives him the blueprints, E.Gadd can 'save the Earth', but of course, its NOT a meteor, but Rosalina spaceship! hehe. So Peach ends up in a hurry to help (because E.Gadd cant leave his lab, he works hard there), and he gets in trouble (again)!

And looking at MPL's response got me thinking about that. OK, I was focusing more of my butchering of my idea than the first option. And wait, why can't he just say he's looking at the moon and noticing some life on their, not directly saying its the X-Nauts, and needs someone to go up there. Heck I still like my idea of him wanting to explain his ghost research by bringing ghosts to the moon and see how they behave there. It's silly, but it's true to him.

And about that... if your cum tastes like oil (and why would anyone be drinking oil of the non cooking variety, and even then), then someone needs to see a doctor.

We also should not take 'Oil' literally

What makes you think I was taking that seriously?

No, his species is a Star, not a soul. What kind of Star he is, I'm not exactly sure, but a Star Spirit, that's possible. And why would he have a human form? He never shown anything about being a human, and only chose to be as the doll to help fight Smithy because it was the strongest of the four dolls the boy was playing with.

So lets make him a doll then...

Yes, let's.

... Why am I siding with Bowser on your treatment of Peach for this game?

Couldnt I make her embarass herself more due to ('who God knows') her acceptance of being naked in order for E.Gadd to use a tender and smooth 'tissue' (her butt) to draw his ideas on?

... If she's accepting her nakedness, then she wouldn't be embarrassed by being naked around people. She'll probably be more embarrassed getting into sexual situations that are not in her control, not because she accepts being naked.

And I'm trying to figure out a situation to where E. Gadd and Peach were together and that were to happen, and the only way that could work is when both are drunk. And even then, I still see problems with this.

.. So that's a bit of redundancy there. If Peach is going to use the spaceship from E. Gadd's lab, which happens to be the "red" rocket you mentioned earlier, then why have a third option?

Which third option? You said the 'rocket pun'?

OK, I'm getting myself confused over this. No, it's not a pun, it's an innuendo. Second, I thought there was a third item in where Peach goes to the moon, confusing the whole X-Naut line as one thing.

[FurrinGok]

As far as Geno goes, he was called a Star Spirit. The star people from Paper Mario were called Star Spirits, too. What this means is that Geno probably has a similar appearance to Twink or one of the Seven Super Star Spirits.

Speaking of star people, what about Starsprites, will Starlow show up?

[Ivan-Aedler]

And looking at MPL's response got me thinking about that. OK, I was focusing more of my butchering of my idea than the first option. And wait, why can't he just say he's looking at the moon and noticing some life on their, not directly saying its the X-Nauts, and needs someone to go up there. Heck I still like my idea of him wanting to explain his ghost research by bringing ghosts to the moon and see how they behave there. It's silly, but it's true to him.

Yes, provided he can convince Peach to help him, no problem. Also, its like he is convincing US too (to explore the moon).
But the meteor thing would make sense in a way we would be maneuvering the spaceship through space (a quick level like Samus game?) then crashing in the moon.
The spaceship is already crashed there, right? How to explain it if E.gadd wants Peach to check the moon for him?

What makes you think I was taking that seriously?

Meh, nevermind

Yes, let's.

I will come here with 'wood' Geno model in order for us to see him. Maybe in the weekend.

... If she's accepting her nakedness, then she wouldn't be embarrassed by being naked around people. She'll probably be more embarrassed getting into sexual situations that are not in her control, not because she accepts being naked.

Yes but she was a bit drunk. She havent understood that 'need' so well....but she remembers it every time she gets that memory. Then she becomes embarassed and she might not look at his eyes directly as before anymore. Its their little secret.

And I'm trying to figure out a situation to where E. Gadd and Peach were together and that were to happen, and the only way that could work is when both are drunk. And even then, I still see problems with this.

The idea is, yes, making them drunk. But the explanation that there is no paper there, and he needs an 'area' to draw using a pencil / feather pen make the situation understandable. He preferred to use her butt because she can bend better (not hurting her spine for example) and due to the nature of her round butt, the blueprint could be drawn better. The idea of all this is just to have an embarassing picture. Peach is a bit drunk, she is partially concious about the situation, so she is embarassed somewhat.But she knows she needs to help him. Without the blueprint to record his volatile ideas, he will lose them forever.

OK, I'm getting myself confused over this. No, it's not a pun, it's an innuendo. Second, I thought there was a third item in where Peach goes to the moon, confusing the whole X-Naut line as one thing.

Well we only need to get a reason for Peach to go to the moon. The special world is there, right? Is there where we are going to see Rosalina too.

As far as Geno goes, he was called a Star Spirit. The star people from Paper Mario were called Star Spirits, too. What this means is that Geno probably has a similar appearance to Twink or one of the Seven Super Star Spirits. Speaking of star people, what about Starsprites, will Starlow show up?

Not a 'WOW planned!!' one, but I am brainstorming his possible appearance when the game is more completed.

[FurrinGok]

As far as Geno goes, he was called a Star Spirit. The star people from Paper Mario were called Star Spirits, too. What this means is that Geno probably has a similar appearance to Twink or one of the Seven Super Star Spirits. Speaking of star people, what about Starsprites, will Starlow show up?

Not a 'WOW planned!!' one, but I am brainstorming his possible appearance when the game is more completed.

Wow, a couple of minutes after reading this and letting it settle in my brain, and I had the thought that he could show up in both forms--Either as a de-posession in some scenes or simply as his star self at different locations than his wooden self.
Involuntary brainstorming is a fun thing

[coolness32]

Sweet! They aren't my favorite enemies or anything they just look like they need more scenes so I was curious. I do like the scenes for both of the enemies though.

People who can return to the team (if they really want it), like VintageBass, can help with scene ideas, or ThatGuy (if he has time), SuperDodoMan12, Blargh... If not, I will end up having to imagine how those new scenes would happen. Well, I am not that bad in having ideas for scenes. The pokey one (where Peach tries not to fall in his dick, then falling and getting super horny) was made when I was in the kitchen thinking about a given funny action! So yes, there are some eureka states around here Thats why I REALLY appreciate scene ideas here in the forum (even if you can only imagine it or draw only using balls and sticks). They can be so valuable and great to be seen!

I actually have an idea for the Bloopers. Since they are basically a tentacle creature, one of the last scenes can be an orgy scene. Just like the one where there's two Bloopers but add one for Peach's mouth and two more, one for each of her breasts. You could even have one for each hand as well. They just seem like the perfect enemy for a mass gangbang.

I just thought of a scene for Boo/Daisy. Maybe a Boo can posses Peach and then have sex with Daisy? Or even the naked girl in the castle who's name I forgot.

And yes, make sure to get your rest!

Yes. I need some... not just a day or two, but like 5 full days to up to 20 days. A rest from everything: job, game, even my family. Maybe I go to the forest (I am being serious).

I urge you to do whatever you need to do to get more rest!

[Ivan-Aedler]

Wow, a couple of minutes after reading this and letting it settle in my brain, and I had the thought that he could show up in both forms--Either as a de-posession in some scenes or simply as his star self at different locations than his wooden self. Involuntary brainstorming is a fun thing

Well, its great when he have a 'form' in the game, that is, a rabbit, a star, a penguin.... in this case, Starlow can be in the star form and we might see a little dick growing from him.
(before you say: "Ivan, not again! You are trying to make everything sexual", remember there are many enemies that wont be sexual, like Thwomps, Lava Bubbles and Sparklies. I just imagine those cute star beings having something that identify they're horny due to Peach.)

(About scene ideas and eureka moments) I actually have an idea for the Bloopers. Since they are basically a tentacle creature, one of the last scenes can be an orgy scene. Just like the one where there's two Bloopers but add one for Peach's mouth and two more, one for each of her breasts.

Not impossible to do. Just some movements, yes. Not a complex one where each tentacle do a precise movement. I may try with 5 bloopers first, and, of course, with 3 or more loops, provided they're later scenes (4,5,6,7....). I am trying to avoid the 'just one loop' scenes. The first ones (like goomba 1st) were 'two loop' ones (one-> main scene, two-> cum). Well... it works nice for initial scenes, yes.

Nobody would want scene 1 to have like 6 loops (a full scene with restraning, 'no!!!', penetration phase, then 'yess!', then speedup, then restraining2, then cum). It will annoy the player in future encounters.

I just thought of a scene for Boo/Daisy. Maybe a Boo can possess Peach and then have sex with Daisy? Or even the naked girl in the castle who's name I forgot.

Of course those possession scenes would need Daisy nearby. Maybe the Boo invades her bedroom, then Peach would say: "oooh what that? A Boo!! Oooh no!", then, too late!
But those are side scenes, that is, scenes that requires particular themes (other enemies and situations)... not top priority, but they are good ideas. Eventually they might be made.

I urge you to do whatever you need to do to get more rest!

Thank you, I'll inform people when time comes. Like I mentioned, one of those days might be a 10-day range in may.

[VintageBass]

... in this case, Starlow can be in the star form and we might see a little dick growing from him.
(before you say: "Ivan, not again! You are trying to make everything sexual", remember there are many enemies that wont be sexual, like Thwomps, Lava Bubbles and Sparklies. I just imagine those cute star beings having something that identify they're horny due to Peach.)

1) What characters are the Sparklies?
2) Why can't they just be horny for other things besides Peach? After all, Rosalina is a freaking goddess, almost literally, and she's far more beautiful than Peach is. So other sources will be nice for to fap to besides one thing.
3) And this is rather important:

Starlow is a girl. She has no penis.

People who can return to the team (if they really want it), like VintageBass

I'm only here because of one of my ideas is getting butchered. I'm not going to help, I got other things to worry about.

Yes. I need some... not just a day or two, but like 5 full days to up to 20 days.

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How about a day or two off every week. That'll probably help out a lot.

[Ivan-Aedler]

Starlow is a girl. She has no penis.

Sorry, you're right. I misunderstood because we were relating her as THEIR (star beings, etc), along with our discussion about Geno (HIM).

I'm only here because of one of my ideas is getting butchered. I'm not going to help, I got other things to worry about.

1. not only ONE. MANY of your ideas. You just ignore it.
2. I am not asking for help. Thats why the 'IF they really want' said above. You can do/not do everything, you are free
I can create what I feel missing anyway, or I can get help from those who arent as busy as you.
Of course (I will be repeating this ethernally), I DO appreciate people who can help, and ANY change I do to art (like in your case) was due to the fact they need to be vectorized. All people win here. More assets in the game, more features in less time. Everyone will enjoy it sooner.

How about a day or two off every week. That'll probably help out a lot.

I can't. My way of working doesnt allow me this. First, I have more time to think about the game and have creativity and stimuli on weekends. So I usually work in the game. Second, as my family now lives more than 900km from here, and I dont have any closer friend, there is no reason to 'just go anywhere' to relax. I prefer to visit my family in certain times a year (they live in a countryside area), so in those rarer times I can rest.

[Ivan-Aedler]

Blooper scene 6 being made.
I think its better 4 instead of 5 bloopers, because otherwise it will be so populated. We may not see certain details, like her butt and the dick of the vaginal fucking one.

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[coolness32]

Blooper scene 6 being made.
I think its better 4 instead of 5 bloopers, because otherwise it will be so populated. We may not see certain details, like her butt and the dick of the vaginal fucking one.

blooper scene 6.jpg

That's awesome! I like the two with her hands! If you wanted to try, those two could be anal and boobjob, but I really like how it is now! The moving the two to the different spots just happened right now when I saw that picture. You could move any of the bloopers around in any combinations you want and it would still look good!

I forgot to quote it but about the Daisey and Boo scene. You're right about it being more of a scene rather than a sex scene. It could be part of the story, or maybe Daisy could get possessed while Peach is away and then force Peach into sex when she gets back?

How is the story going to be handled in this game? I don't think the game needs story scenes, it was just an idea.

[Ivan-Aedler]

That's awesome! I like the two with her hands! If you wanted to try, those two could be anal and boobjob, but I really like how it is now! The moving the two to the different spots just happened right now when I saw that picture. You could move any of the bloopers around in any combinations you want and it would still look good!

I will put this scene in the game tonight (day 10) and then I'll make a new scene (frontside), where two will grab her while two fucks her (front and ass)

I forgot to quote it but about the Daisey and Boo scene. You're right about it being more of a scene rather than a sex scene. It could be part of the story, or maybe Daisy could get possessed while Peach is away and then force Peach into sex when she gets back?

Possible but its a side 'story scene', a not so common occurrence. I'll let it as an idea.

How is the story going to be handled in this game? I don't think the game needs story scenes, it was just an idea.

Small story scenes are not troublesome to make. I think in that kind of situation, a plot device can make Peach return to Daisy's Bedroom to give her some news (maybe a toad says to Peach that Daisy discovered something about Mario). Then she reaches there but Daisy is possessed. After the scene, the Boo is knocked out (due to the sex action) and Daisy is dizzy. She may say something about where Mario is being held.

[VintageBass]

How is the story going to be handled in this game? I don't think the game needs story scenes, it was just an idea.

Small story scenes are not troublesome to make. I think in that kind of situation, a plot device can make Peach return to Daisy's Bedroom to give her some news (maybe a toad says to Peach that Daisy discovered something about Mario). Then she reaches there but Daisy is possessed. After the scene, the Boo is knocked out (due to the sex action) and Daisy is dizzy. She may say something about where Mario is being held.

I will agree with coolness that not everything needs to be involved in the story, this idea has absolutely nothing to so with anything relating to this other than just a fun little scene. Then again, if any of these characters know better, they should know where Mario could be since who is the #1 person that is likely to attack the Mushroom Kingdom? Really having this mystery is rather pointless because we know who took Mario. It can't be anyone else because he won't allow it.

[Ivan-Aedler]

I will agree with coolness that not everything needs to be involved in the story, this idea has absolutely nothing to so with anything relating to this other than just a fun little scene. Then again, if any of these characters know better, they should know where Mario could be since who is the #1 person that is likely to attack the Mushroom Kingdom? Really having this mystery is rather pointless because we know who took Mario. It can't be anyone else because he won't allow it.

But Mario has other archenemies, not only Bowser. In Paper Mario 2, the 'main' boss was Shadow Queen herself.
In this game, I wanted Wendy to be the 'main reason' who wanted Mario to have sex wit her (so she would be treating him as her puppy). She asked Bowser to capture Mario. And Kamek used that situation to make a mess too. but yes, the last scene would be with Bowser.

Peach might knock her out in world 5 or 6 (airship) but she will return (the same happens with Grodus and other arch enemies). She would encounter her again and discuss with her, then the final Bowser scene can happen thereafter.

So information like "I've seen Wendy with Mario when I was travelling the blimp", or a toad who gave her a message from Mario saying he is in a dark prison room but Wendy is treating him 'well' might make Peach 'less worried' (but a bit more worried at the same time in the case Peach dont like the idea of Wendy having sex to her Mario). So further information may not be told to Peach (although we might see it in a possible cut scene before the last level).