Mr.D's Krystal Ball Slide-show and Mr.D´s characters

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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby Reaver » Thu Mar 24, 2011 2:32 am

i dont mind it too much although u should draw the finger coming out a little wet or something
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby Kalypso » Thu Mar 24, 2011 2:37 am

Mr D Wrote:
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Now if only she had some toes >.>


Noooooo toes, my only weakness....and hair..... and fingers.....and eyes.....just give me a second i will think of more weaknesses.

lol. Same here. Just make some fake toes, like draw some shitty lines across her feet. Or give her stiletto heels that rise to her kneecaps.
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby trunks2585 » Thu Mar 24, 2011 2:51 am

Don't let my preferences affect what you make, she does look good though.
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby xcommando » Thu Mar 24, 2011 5:26 am

I prefer Imp Midna but honestly in this situation the way you designed her I like much more and it works out a lot better.
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby Mr D » Sat Mar 26, 2011 7:03 pm

Ok I guess this is it. All is done and working (i was able to make toes :D ). So here it is the finished model.
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby haloman » Sat Mar 26, 2011 7:55 pm

Awsome! I cant realy see anything wrong with it.
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby Sparten1337 » Sun May 01, 2011 12:15 pm

Nice work It looks great!
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby JosephTheSly » Sat May 07, 2011 9:09 pm

So...whos going to use these models? I sure as hell want to see them in a game soon.
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby Mr D » Mon May 16, 2011 3:10 pm

Sitll alive :D

note: tuned it down a little
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby haloman » Mon May 16, 2011 3:19 pm

Still alive, and still makeinig me go :shock: :mrgreen:
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby rooiehaan » Mon May 16, 2011 11:45 pm

personally, i think the thighs can be made a little bit thinner, showing off just a tiny bit more ero and making it a tad more interesting :3
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby ByHisBillowingBeard » Tue May 17, 2011 3:00 am

I'd say tone down on the skin tone... she looks sunburnt o.o
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby Mr D » Wed May 18, 2011 11:57 pm

Yeah i know, sucks. "sigh"
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby haloman » Thu May 19, 2011 1:36 am

Eh?! :shock: It sucks?! Are you high man? thats a realy good start on Zelda!
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby Valithan » Thu May 19, 2011 4:13 pm

good drafts so far for the mods on peach and zelda from the midna model, but they could use a few tweak at places to get their body types to feel unique and certainly some scaling adjustments to alter the proportions. The thicker thighs and longer arms works as a scaled up imp-midna, but that same proportioning looks off for both peach and zelda, moreso because it was used for midna (who would have a different proportion than either of those characters.)

if it'd help more, I could probably get some paint doodle lines for some visual suggestions. Should be some quick fixes in flash if the nodes all touch up and you can just reshape the arc shapes.
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby Mr D » Thu May 19, 2011 4:50 pm

Valithan Wrote:good drafts so far for the mods on peach and zelda from the midna model, but they could use a few tweak at places to get their body types to feel unique and certainly some scaling adjustments to alter the proportions. The thicker thighs and longer arms works as a scaled up imp-midna, but that same proportioning looks off for both peach and zelda, moreso because it was used for midna (who would have a different proportion than either of those characters.)

if it'd help more, I could probably get some paint doodle lines for some visual suggestions. Should be some quick fixes in flash if the nodes all touch up and you can just reshape the arc shapes.


That would be very helpfull :D
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby Valithan » Fri May 20, 2011 2:03 am

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Peach: lower the shoulder a touch and then clip off some of the upper arm so her forearms are longer
increase the indentation on the nose slightly
move her breasts inward a little.
tuck in part of her asschecks and then trim the legs
the far shoulder will probably not be visible (or just the outline) when it's moved to match the front one.
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Zelda: increase the upper lip indentation under the nose
remove the chin protrusion (just let it roll)
pull her butt checks downward (stretch)
pull the calves out slightly so it has a similar arch to the cheeks above
stretch/pull the torso so she's a bit taller. That way her upper body (top of her leg segment to the top of her head) is closer to being about the same size as the lower part of her body (adjusted base of her butt check to the bottom of her heel)
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby Gregdgreat » Fri May 20, 2011 10:18 am

I agree i think those would be good changes, but for peach and the nose, dont push in the bridge of her nose too much
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby Digfree » Fri May 20, 2011 6:18 pm

zelda bottom part of her hair looks weird too, just the placement
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby Mr D » Fri May 20, 2011 11:23 pm

Hmmm something like this? :?:
1 game (oh I mean story slideshow -_-) and 5 flash loop FINISHED...fuck yea
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