Sivertop Wrote:pigdey's are really friendly pokemon. they always try to make new friends. they will try to make there first male friend there boyfriend and they will do anything!
should be
Pigdey´s are really friendly Pokemon. They always try to make new Friends. They will try to make theyre first Male-Friend to theyre Boyfriend and they will do anything!
(But after all, this Text makes no sense at the end)
SirBalto Wrote:Sivertop Wrote:pigdey's are really friendly pokemon. they always try to make new friends. they will try to make there first male friend there boyfriend and they will do anything!
should be
Pigdey´s are really friendly Pokemon. They always try to make new Friends. They will try to make theyre first Male-Friend to theyre Boyfriend and they will do anything!
(But after all, this Text makes no sense at the end)
Wouldn't this be a better way of saying it, grammar wise?
"Pidgeys are really friendly and are always trying to make new friends. As a result, they will attempt to make a boyfriend out of the first male they befriend.
I left the "and they will do anything" out because I was unsure if it was be taken as sexual or as crazy girlfriend, where he is her boyfriend and all other girls will get cut. If it is the latter, I believe the below sentence would be better.
"Pidgeys are really friendly and are always trying to make new friends. But take care, as they will use any means necessary to become the girlfriend of the first male they befriend."
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