MiscChaos Wrote:Like Dax said, you could basically ask anyone in the RP section for little tips and tricks on how they do things and there's more than a few in the Creative Corner you could ask as well. Personally, I'd recommend asking Napsii. She's always written creatively and descriptively, so she could be a gold mine.
If there's anyone on this forum I'd want to ask about
writing, it'd be axmanjack. Whereas my narratives are basically wholly improvised, I think his writing strategy is more calculated and considerate, which for developing a long-term story and conveying a narrative is essential. Not to mention his final product is clearer of mechanical errors and more polished, which is attributable to his skill and better editing. With me, what you see is my first draft hastily reviewed for typos.
Besides, he just has obvious talent; he already produced a complete novel. I mean, I myself have things to say on the topic of writing, but my feedback tends to be a lot more
meta and not at all useful to people whose question is "How can I write better?". I'm basically the archetype of the useless philosopher. Also, I'm of the opinion that while any novelist can be a great roleplayer, the inverse isn't quite
as true. I'm a roleplayer, not a novelist (my writing experience is limited almost specifically to roleplaying and to boot I forget most of English class) and I don't think a novelist would encounter enough contextual differences between book writing and roleplaying that they wouldn't be able to provide far superior lessons. Roleplaying is still
writing, but it can be thought of as several writers sitting at a table, passing a pen around and taking turns writing chunks of a story on a lone piece of paper.
It shouldn't have to be explained that this would (and does) produce fundamentally different reading than something authored by an individual. If you squinted hard at that example, you'd notice it describes a group of people playing Dungeons & Dragons.
But obviously, you can't take that image at face value since it's not the picture we'd call "good forum roleplaying". I'm not going to bother diving into it, but the eventual conclusion I'd reach is that as an individual writer, you're centre stage -- the unchallenged master of the story. It means that you don't have to concede most of your authority to other people like a roleplayer would, but it also means that there's nothing to reference what you make against. Your creation is not considered relative to anything except itself.
That's the most I can harangue right now without becoming [too much more] intolerable.
Anyway, what's the deal with airline food?