Jumbo70's Art Garden

[KaTsuO_O]

The hips are too long for sure, his penis should have be drawn above his fist. Right now it essentially looks like he have a torso, and under the torso he have another body part that can be bent, and then the legs are attached on to that. While you just want a torso and legs on to that. The other thing is that his head should have be moved forwards.

Here's an edit that I have done to demonstrate it.

[Jumbo70]

The hips are too long for sure, his penis should have be drawn above his fist. Right now it essentially looks like he have a torso, and under the torso he have another body part that can be bent, and then the legs are attached on to that. While you just want a torso and legs on to that. The other thing is that his head should have be moved forwards.

Here's an edit that I have done to demonstrate it.

Aye it looks way better now, thanks for the help ^^

[Jumbo70]

Hello

hello mellow

Time is not the thing i have much of in the army. This picture took meaby 5 days to make XD
But i like the overall quality on it
(i loose the track of time sometimes here)

The legs are little of proportion i thinks
and i need to focus more on the hands

[Jumbo70]

Army takes a lot of my time, luckily this army is soon over ^^

Have a army lady

[riddlebox1321]

You've improved a lot since the last time we spoke, keep at it

[Jumbo70]

You've improved a lot since the last time we spoke, keep at it

Thanks ^^

Heh i dont have access to all my stuffs either but i think im doing ok with my little crappy eraser (that was swiming in water for a while), lead pencil meant for writing and my trusty sketch book. ^^

Feels strange to look at my old old art n think that is where i started from.

[Jumbo70]

Alrighty, back from army and 1 month long trip from my girlfriend. got myself a nasty bellysicknes (both tubes work overtime, if you know what i mean)
Once i beat that il go behind the pen again ^^

[Zeus Kabob]

Yay!

[Jumbo70]

Yay!

happy kabob is happy

[Jumbo70]

Something little to start with and so on

i still have my problem on how to signature my art......

[Jumbo70]

more^^

not really happy with her to be honest.. but meh not really much you can do with pencils to correct that.

[Zeus Kabob]

Her face is adorable, her anatomy at first glance is without fault.

Further inspection reveals that the feet aren't quite on point, and the spine bends quite a bit right under her ribs (not necessarily wrong, just looks uncomfortable). The neck is quite skinny as well, though that can be fine.

It looks great though, you should be happy about her.

[Jumbo70]

Her face is adorable, her anatomy at first glance is without fault.

Further inspection reveals that the feet aren't quite on point, and the spine bends quite a bit right under her ribs (not necessarily wrong, just looks uncomfortable). The neck is quite skinny as well, though that can be fine.

It looks great though, you should be happy about her.

heh thanks for the feedback ^^
her hands are way too small in my opinion and i see what the problem now is thanks to you, appreciate it ^^
In a other note, ive been thinking bout posting my stuffs in this e621 place (called like that yes?) opinions in should i do that?
Ofcourse id keep putting my things here too ^^

[Zeus Kabob]

Sounds like a reasonable idea. I know very little about e621, but it seems similar to the boorus, so I'd suggest watermarking your work (tastefully) so people can tag and credit properly.

[Jumbo70]

Sounds like a reasonable idea. I know very little about e621, but it seems similar to the boorus, so I'd suggest watermarking your work (tastefully) so people can tag and credit properly.

What is a watermark? XD a transparrent splat ontop of your work?

[Zeus Kabob]

Yeah, a partially transparent mark that gives your name and where they can find more of your stuff. I would suggest something like Ninja Kitty's

[Jumbo70]

Yeah, a partially transparent mark that gives your name and where they can find more of your stuff. I would suggest something like Ninja Kitty's

Looks reasonable, and would be a good idea too, thanks ^^
just wonder if i should smash fa on the watermark or this place. fa is more popular source for more work in e621 but il see, meaby both cuz i have more of my never stuffs here but not in fa. dunno why i havent been in mood on uploading my crap to fa.
Probably cuz i hate naming my art...

[Zeus Kabob]

I'd be super happy for you to put LoK forums as your source, but FA seems like a better way for people to find your work. I guess you could always put a link to this thread in your FA profile.

[Jumbo70]

I'd be super happy for you to put LoK forums as your source, but FA seems like a better way for people to find your work. I guess you could always put a link to this thread in your FA profile.

Il place lok forums as source for sure, yu peeplz have helped me alot with my art. Turns out tough that i have to wait a week before i can upload stuff there oof, luckily i made one earlier so i need to wait just a couple of days.

tried to see also how quickly i could draw, heh. i think this whole thing took meaby half hour, quality suffered tough i think.

trying to see how it looks with whiskers and so, comments on that highly appreciated ^^

damn headache

[Jumbo70]

ok, headache gone and a new post ^^

shoulda spended more time on shadows too

that neck is waaay too long, and hands suck too, other things need improvment?