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Re: Mario Kart Wii Biker Outfits

Postby 肉まんマン » Tue May 03, 2011 8:07 am

SexyFoxTime Wrote:Hmm uhm, you know how people sit, how about RIDING A COCK >:D, too dirty right..?


I support that. How about anal with her back turned from what she`s siting/riding on so we see her from the front?
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Re: Mario Kart Wii Biker Outfits

Postby SexyFoxTime » Tue May 03, 2011 1:56 pm

肉まんマン Wrote:
SexyFoxTime Wrote:Hmm uhm, you know how people sit, how about RIDING A COCK >:D, too dirty right..?


I support that. How about anal with her back turned from what she`s siting/riding on so we see her from the front?


I Support that more XD
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Re: Mario Kart Wii Biker Outfits

Postby LuftMallow » Fri May 06, 2011 2:35 am

The animation is almost done, just have to refine some of the movement and some more features. If you see anything wrong below, tell me. Backgrounds really aren't my forte so expect little improvement on that. I ended up using a completely new pose and parts if you haven't noticed. I couldn't use the first front view due to the legs not working right. So I took a rough sketch I drew while figuring out how to go about this and used that. This isn't unusual for me, I had a bunch of stuff during the initial versions of the biker outfits that were never released. There was a banana peel and lakitu that never made it in for example.

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Re: Mario Kart Wii Biker Outfits

Postby SexyFoxTime » Fri May 06, 2011 3:13 am

Sorry but i'm just not feeling it, other then that, GREAT ART AND ANIMATION :O, cant wait to see it done
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Re: Mario Kart Wii Biker Outfits

Postby Unholy Sonic » Fri May 06, 2011 3:19 am

Very well done tho, personally, 2 things are bothering me:
Pubes... I want an option to remove it like the clothes.
Need a creampie animation to end things

Maybe add some blinking once in a while to make things feel uh... nice?

Other then that I ain't got any negative comments to add.
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Re: Mario Kart Wii Biker Outfits

Postby Anonymous » Fri May 06, 2011 3:37 am

Unholy Sonic Wrote:Very well done tho, personally, 2 things are bothering me:
Pubes... I want an option to remove it like the clothes.
Need a creampie animation to end things

Maybe add some blinking once in a while to make things feel uh... nice?

Other then that I ain't got any negative comments to add.

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and i love the nose man
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Re: Mario Kart Wii Biker Outfits

Postby Reaver » Fri May 06, 2011 5:22 am

only one thing i can say........ BRAVO cant wait to see the climax
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Re: Mario Kart Wii Biker Outfits

Postby Valithan » Fri May 06, 2011 5:56 am

i think her hair could be a bit... poofier I guess. Maybe scaling it up just a notch; just doesn't seem quite like peach. And I'd say erase the hardline for the nose indentation. Regardless of those, that's a pretty saucy model.
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Re: Mario Kart Wii Biker Outfits

Postby Oriandu » Fri May 06, 2011 7:10 am

Give her actual facial expressions, she's scary to look at currently. Also, a little more tit bounce and an outfit that actually covers everything.
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Re: Mario Kart Wii Biker Outfits

Postby Unholy Sonic » Fri May 06, 2011 9:04 am

Oriandu Wrote:Give her actual facial expressions, she's scary to look at currently. Also, a little more tit bounce and an outfit that actually covers everything.

Everything like every skin part showing off?
I could understand if it the breast and show the nipples pointing out but everything? really?

Unless the everything was for the breast only then forget what I just said.

And I agree with Valithan by making her hair a bit more puffier not too much since she's in a sport clothing so the hair style and everything that goes with it must fit.
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Re: Mario Kart Wii Biker Outfits

Postby 肉まんマン » Fri May 06, 2011 3:35 pm

The only three problems I can find is that she seems to have no hip bones, her breasts don`t move properly (the nipples go farther down than the rest) and her face doesn`t move (like a mask).

Other than that it`s pretty much perfect. How long did it take you to make this?
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Re: Mario Kart Wii Biker Outfits

Postby shorterm » Fri May 06, 2011 9:25 pm

why are you all even looking at her face?
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Re: Mario Kart Wii Biker Outfits

Postby Valithan » Sat May 07, 2011 5:34 am

why are you all even looking at her face?


cuz we all got tired of fapping to Dark Ophelia
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Re: Mario Kart Wii Biker Outfits

Postby Rinzler » Sat May 07, 2011 3:24 pm

wow! the animation and art are really well put, but I was wondering are you planning to make it a game? or just animation? (sorry if you've said this before on the thread)
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Re: Mario Kart Wii Biker Outfits

Postby Fapbro » Sat May 07, 2011 5:34 pm

Hello. This is my first post on this forum and i made this account to give you some constructive criticism, because i enjoy your work so far but i think you could do even better!

First of all, great job so far with Peach! she's by far my favorite Nintendo girl and i'm glad you're making animations with her.
I think your animations could be improved though, first of all the framerate should go up a little. I'm guessing you're animating at 12 FPS, or you're double framing at times. I think if your animations would be smoother they would be allot hotter.

You could also change her facial expressions and actions (blinking, looking at her partner). I think this would require less work than moving the whole body, but it seems like the animation is a whole lot bigger, and it also gives a feeling that peach is a bit alive.

I really hope to see more from you, good luck.
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Re: Mario Kart Wii Biker Outfits

Postby Hattorihanzo » Sat May 07, 2011 9:10 pm

LuftMallow, Fuck Yea. I fucking like your Style man. Keep it up.
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Re: Mario Kart Wii Biker Outfits

Postby LuftMallow » Sat May 07, 2011 9:42 pm

I better start answering questions before the list gets overbearing. Facial animations are coming, as well as improvements to the general animation. I''m trying to get everyone's request in, but if it doesn't get in I probably have a reason. I'm working on this on and off, so I have no idea how much of my time I've invested in this. I do want to get to the game eventually, but I'm not going to rush the current project.
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Re: Mario Kart Wii Biker Outfits

Postby Surskit » Sun May 08, 2011 6:04 am

I think as far as the head goes, either add ears or widen it a little bit. Seems narrow to me.

Otherwise I say awesome job. Just throw some more facial expressions later on, euphoric slut should be Peach's favorite flavor.
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Re: Mario Kart Wii Biker Outfits

Postby Xanatos » Sun May 08, 2011 10:29 pm

Only two things i see that need to be fixed are the hair on the side of the head it should be closer to the front, or you should put ears behind it, the other thing is the motion of the breasts and as stated prior some facial expressions to not have a crazed smile looking at you constantly.
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Re: Mario Kart Wii Biker Outfits

Postby LuftMallow » Thu May 12, 2011 10:30 pm

A small WIP update, added the options for facial expressions and pubic hair. Also, I'm fixing a few perspective errors, so all the animation has been thrown out. The buttons and backgrounds still have a lot of work needed, they can be done last. The new hands are probably too small, but at least I got around to them now.

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