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The only problem is that her legs move but her thighs not, so its like she broke her legs :/
It is easy to fix - any other criticism - i will try to fix that too
The only problem is that her legs move but her thighs not, so its like she broke her legs :/
OwnerOfSuccuby Wrote:It is easy to fix - any other criticism - i will try to fix that too
alucardiff Wrote:This has been fretting me for quite a bit.
"After so many Quests, Princess Peach has been in love with Mario (finally). She was a bit embarrassed but, now, she decided to make love to him after so many struggles Mario had in order to save her. Peach and Mario went on a romantic date inside the Excess Express, and were enjoying the company of each other. Then, they had a kiss and they returned to Peach's Castle.
Peach, now drunk, began to undress herself and lay in the bed, when suddenly Airships passed by. Mario saw this and left without saying a word. Peach, somewhat confused and slightly irritated yelled: "Mario! Well, he probably comes back soon." But he did no come back and Peach fell asleep."
So uh, why is she covered in cum when she wakes up?
MPLDAM9919 Wrote:The Toads were playing with her. That was the effect of that magic.
Ivan-Aedler Wrote:OwnerOfSuccuby Wrote:It is easy to fix - any other criticism - i will try to fix that too
Thank you. So far so good, really.
This is really funny. This makes me remember of an animation I've found with a Nicholas-cage like person. In the forum, the creator said he was eating a strong meat (or a gum).
I am finding time to start to make the next scene and to include Peach running embarassed.
Ivan-Aedler Wrote:cantthinkofaname1 Wrote:Hey I just wanted to say, thanks for implementing my idea
Which scenes gets her hair cumstained, so far from what I can tell it's the Bob-Omb "Escaping" or when it explodes on you, and Morton Koopa's scene. Are there any others?
Hey, it was a nice idea! Indeed, Peach is getting drenched up, all filled with dirty cum, except her hair. Why? So you're right.
Hmmm its a mistery (sometimes even I dont know) but I can say that bobomb explosions, Birdo's egg (when it explodes on Peach), Morton, those grupal scenes (3 goombas, 3 koopas, 3 phantos), the Wrench Guy scene where he pushes Peach into his hatch, one of the x-naut scenes and I think one or two more scenes (I think one of pokey scenes).
Peach Wrote:Ohhhh! I'm washed out! I am his doggy salad!
alucardiff Wrote:You are way in over your head.
Ivan-Aedler Wrote:
Ivan-Aedler Wrote:alucardiff Wrote:Plus, we could add some fur-coat or some other protective shit for Peach to use as a costume.
Ask the tailors. For now we might have the Penguin suit and later, then Ice Peach.
Ivan-Aedler Wrote:cantthinkofaname1 Wrote:This could be fun...would Peach react to the cold if there is a snow world, too, if she were nude?
There will be a snow world. Which reaction you mean? Sneezing? Trembling while covering herself?
OwnerOfSuccuby Wrote::mrgreen:
Ivan-Aedler Wrote:MPLDAM9919 Wrote:alucardiff Wrote:So uh, why is she covered in cum when she wakes up?
The Toads were playing with her. That was the effect of that magic.
Yes. But as about the magic, not exactly, because the toads could be, IN FACT, doing that, because even without magic, toads love Peach and some want to feel her...you know.
The 'three toad' scenes will be made. I might include ToyLoli with them. So three 'old teenager' toads are playing with a drunk Peach who is sleeping, then they will steal her clothes and the game will start.
alucardiff Wrote:So you guys are telling me the Toads molested her in her sleep?
I don't understand if that's just an excuse to cover up a plot error or that Toads actually came over her while she was sleeping.
OwnerOfSuccuby Wrote:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1d_JG2Vr4w8
OwnerOfSuccuby Wrote:Okey than I send fla to you
VintageBass Wrote:Yeah, you're really satisfying that cum fetish of mine with Peach now getting drenched all over now. Personally I didn't care about her getting it in her hair, because it's a mess to clean out, but hey it's one area to add! By the way I forgot say this, but I do like some of the new lines (and some that I missed earlier). I may have said something before about the dialogue, but there are some things that you guys write are pure genius! For instance with the new Chomp scene phrase: 'Ohhhh! I'm washed out! I am his doggy salad!' That is seriously something brilliant!
VintageBass Wrote:Another of my favorites includes when Peach was walking naked and I had some cum on me while I was invisible on the Moon. When I got spotted by an X-Naut, you know what option I went? "I AM... YOUR... CUM!" Seriously you can't make that up... well you can, but still that's freaking hilarious! I can't wait see more of it in newer scenes!
VintageBass Wrote:Oh come on, I'm not trying to exclude you from the fight. Besides I'm not exactly a bulldog, just more of a friendly golden retriever.
VintageBass Wrote:Maybe the Ice suit could be the fur coat?
VintageBass Wrote:It'll probably be the latter, more likely. Then again there isn't really any real consequences in the main games with Mario running around in his regular clothes, so Peach being naked shouldn't be too bad. As far I can see, there's Flurries and her fucking them isn't going to be that bad.
VintageBass Wrote:I thought it was from Mario and Peach's foreplay, with maybe a boobjob and some butt sex (not anal, actually rubbing his penis against her butt cheeks). After all, usually the male in hentai ejaculate a couple of times before finally having sex and then be done.
MPLDAM9919 Wrote:No it's not a plot error. We planned that plot point awhile back.
Ivan-Aedler Wrote:Thank you! I was trying to detect Peach feelings in that scene, as she was pushed by the Chomp, and she needs to 'feed' him , to calm him down in order to escape. Then this phrase appeared on my mind, or Peach herself told that in my mind. 'That's it', I said. You're a cute salad now
Ivan-Aedler Wrote:Heheheheh I'll try. But really, QUIZ is the scripter. He made many and many great phrases and dialogues. I just LOVE the Charlieton scene Quiz can review all scripts when he wants, and he can tell me which can be improved even more. But he should admit other people in the team also made interesting phrases/dialogues. Those phrases sometime comes from nowhere. Its a moment of 'Eureka', a small enlightement. I cant explain. It plays with our feelings too. Like I said before, I love Peach character, she's a cute princess. She plays with our senses sometimes
Ivan-Aedler Wrote:VintageBass Wrote:Oh come on, I'm not trying to exclude you from the fight. Besides I'm not exactly a bulldog, just more of a friendly golden retriever.
I know It was just to illustrate, a kind of meme scene.
Ivan-Aedler Wrote:VintageBass Wrote:I thought it was from Mario and Peach's foreplay, with maybe a boobjob and some butt sex (not anal, actually rubbing his penis against her butt cheeks). After all, usually the male in hentai ejaculate a couple of times before finally having sex and then be done.
Yes it could be too. But I really like the idea of Toads playing with Peach because, well, she's so pretty for them. Those toads are famine!
VintageBass Wrote:Image
VintageBass Wrote:Still, keep it coming no matter who it's coming from! Even if it doesn't make any sense, it's just brilliant to see such bizarre lines and putting a smile on my face!
VintageBass Wrote:So it was just something you can find? OK, I can accept that. Really it's kinda hard to find a good image of a retriever in a style like that.
VintageBass Wrote:It could be that smut that's been going around lately. They gotta cure it one way or another. And what's this about Toyloli being a part of the group?
VintageBass Wrote:By the way I forgot say this, but I do like some of the new lines (and some that I missed earlier). I may have said something before about the dialogue, but there are some things that you guys write are pure genius! For instance with the new Chomp scene:Peach Wrote:Ohhhh! I'm washed out! I am his doggy salad!
That is seriously something brilliant! To be fair that doesn't make any sense, but I love it! Another of my favorites includes when Peach was walking naked and I had some cum on me while I was invisible on the Moon. When I got spotted by an X-Naut, you know what option I went? "I AM... YOUR... CUM!" Seriously you can't make that up... well you can, but still that's freaking hilarious! I can't wait see more of it in newer scenes!
Ivan-Aedler Wrote:VintageBass Wrote:Maybe the Ice suit could be the fur coat?
Luft? Quiz?
alucardiff Wrote:So you guys are telling me the Toads molested her in her sleep?
I don't understand if that's just an excuse to cover up a plot error or that Toads actually came over her while she was sleeping.
QuizmasterBos Wrote:I personally find these lines bad, I am very likely going to change all of Ivan's placeholder script. It doesn't work very well with Peach's written lines either, so we need a pretty big change. Don't worry though, there will still be jokes, just written differently.
QuizmasterBos Wrote:Seeing how the Fire suit got some pretty substantial changes, I don't see why we aren't allowed to do the same thing with other outfits. However, turning an ice suit into a fur suit is a change to big, as it won't resemble the source material enough anymore.
QuizmasterBos Wrote:Also, we already have an ice power-up: The Penguin Suit. I don't see why we need both kinds of outfits. I think we should try, even if we find a way to handle more costumes better, to not keep stuffing the game with more. So, we should go with one ice power-up suit, not two.
QuizmasterBos Wrote:Why don't we take the tail spin out of the game and replace the leaf with the tanooki suit? Or, mash the abilities together, like the original SMB3?
Ivan-Aedler Wrote:QuizmasterBos Wrote:I personally find these lines bad, I am very likely going to change all of Ivan's placeholder script. It doesn't work very well with Peach's written lines either, so we need a pretty big change. Don't worry though, there will still be jokes, just written differently.
Provided it will be really better for people (like the Charlieton scene, where I CAN REALLY say you did a nice job). But people should see and decide, in case I want to retain a given phrase and you, not (like the salad ones). Votes. Feedbacks. We will get plenty of text, we will try to be as close as Mario, texts will be replaced and improved, thats true, but you cant just say 'I will replace all Ivan garbage text'. (the form you say makes me think that way). Why change 'everything' just because you feel it needs change? We're again going to the 'BIRDO' case in the beginning. I was creating everything on that time, and I wanted my Birdo period. But I decided to LISTEN to people. I reconsidered.
And please dont call my phrases placeholders. When I put text there, its not like 'ok, I'll put it here because I know it will be changed'. No. I put it there with the current flow, the current idea, the current 'ENERGY' AND feeling I get. so YES, I also think about text. I stop programming then I start thinking of a better phrase. Some CAN be interesting. Some NOT. But all will have explanations. I know you will show your text , your mode, your changes, and people will say 'Quiz one is better'. But if some say 'Aedler one is better', or if people dont mind, Aedler one can be there as well. Its a way to say 'I sometimes can make text too'. Indeed, it was like this until now. Some are retained, some are changed. Or do you like to be "the contrarian man", who changes everything to the opposite?
Ivan-Aedler Wrote:QuizmasterBos Wrote:Seeing how the Fire suit got some pretty substantial changes, I don't see why we aren't allowed to do the same thing with other outfits. However, turning an ice suit into a fur suit is a change to big, as it won't resemble the source material enough anymore.
Ivan: Fur can be interesting, sexy (option 2)
Quiz: I prefer to retain as the original (option 1)
Darthan: ??
LuftMallow: ??
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Toyloli: ??
ThatGuy45: ??
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Ivan-Aedler Wrote:QuizmasterBos Wrote:Also, we already have an ice power-up: The Penguin Suit. I don't see why we need both kinds of outfits. I think we should try, even if we find a way to handle more costumes better, to not keep stuffing the game with more. So, we should go with one ice power-up suit, not two.
We will have Penguin and Ice Peach (not one or the other) because a voting poll was made. I would like to see Penguin Peach able to go underwater without being transformed into a solid block for a bit (we can create that plot), or at least make her swim like the frog. AND make her use her belly to 'travel' along slopes and maybe planar areas (like Sonic, but without speed increase during planar/climbing up). Ice Peach can throw ice balls, which will transform enemies into solid blocks for some seconds.
Ivan-Aedler Wrote:QuizmasterBos Wrote:Why don't we take the tail spin out of the game and replace the leaf with the tanooki suit? Or, mash the abilities together, like the original SMB3?
It will never happen. Leaf AND Raccoon WAS inside the game original concept (AINCHE) alongside with what Playshapes thought. It cant be helped. Tail Spin will be still there. Nothing will change to these outfits. Raccoon is a special powerup where Peach can turn into a statue. And I even have to add the 'P WING'. A raccoon Peach will be horny all the time (and arrays tingling all the time).
QuizmasterBos Wrote:If you ever say I like Apple, Naruto and soccer again, I'll punch you. Also, Pepsi is better than cola and SMRPG is superior to Sunshine (except SMRPG is a spin-off of sorts, which Sunshine in a way is too). Rance, Nvidia and Biles' Birdo are better though.
QuizmasterBos Wrote:Now, on topic, I think your lines are mostly very corny, like embarrassingly so (the wrong kind of embarrassing). I prefer a new script, written better overall and also has removed grammar and spelling errors. So, if we are to go head-to-head, I'd already have an unfair advantage with the grammar and spelling.
QuizmasterBos Wrote:I didn't say that exactly. I prefer keeping the Penguin Suit alone, but then again, you already had a voting on this before. Even so, you shouldn't let the no-faced lurkers be too powerful. It's just like you'd do stuff random strangers tell you on the street, take it with a few grains of salt.
QuizmasterBos Wrote:Don't say never. You probably didn't think about this all too much. You don't 'have' to add anything. Look, I don't want the game to be filled with too many costumes to handle, players will never see all outfits in the game like that. Instead, we should prioritize important costumes and have a certain number of outfits total in the game.
QuizmasterBos Wrote:Meaning, you'd pick a number like 25 and then you pick which 25 costumes will be in the game and not one more than that.
QuizmasterBos Wrote:When you're making a videogame, you have to cut your losses, every game has enough stuff cut from a game and they're still great.
QuizmasterBos Wrote:Maybe you can eventually make an extended version, but let's just get enough done for the game now (everything planned at least)and look back at this years later. We might even get new inspiration from that!
QuizmasterBos Wrote:Just to let you know, I wasn't entirely serious with my comment towards you naming random things I, supposedly, like (I knew you didn't know that). I was joking, but forgot to make it clear I was.
QuizmasterBos Wrote:Anyway, I intend to write up a reply, but not till tomorrow, I'm too tired for this right now.
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