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Re: Pressia|Choose your own adventure novella|Updated: March

Postby NamelessSynthetic » Fri Apr 05, 2013 4:26 pm

Ermahgerd.. -Flails- I had almost given up on this, I'm so glad I checked back ;; A big welcome back to you, AMJ.
The question isn't whether how much wood could a woodchuck chuck, but rather how much wood would a woodchuck chuck, if a woodchuck could indeed chuck wood. Those woodchucks are lazy bastards.
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Re: Pressia|Choose your own adventure novella|Updated: March

Postby axmanjack » Wed Apr 17, 2013 12:13 am

Update:

I'm finishing my second-to-last semester here at school, and as soon as I'm done I'm going to start working on the last couple chapters of Pressia.
Hopefully I'll have it done by the end of summer, but who knows...
I have the most patient ten fans in all of the Internet I'll tell you what.
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-AMJ
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Re: Pressia|Choose your own adventure novella|Updated: March

Postby axmanjack » Mon Apr 29, 2013 8:32 pm

I'm locking the votes in for "Honor His Request" and starting my outline today.
I'll tell you guys how far I've gotten this weekend.
-AMJ
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Re: Pressia|Choose your own adventure novella|Updated: March

Postby NamelessSynthetic » Tue Apr 30, 2013 11:53 pm

Sweet :3
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Re: Pressia|Choose your own adventure novella|Updated: March

Postby Throbby » Wed May 01, 2013 5:33 am

You are awesome, may I say again. And a pretty good writer to boot! What other types of carnality interest you, O Novella-writer?
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Re: Pressia|Choose your own adventure novella|Updated: March

Postby Eumel2 » Wed May 01, 2013 9:50 pm

holy shit this story is amazing
You have talent, have you ever thought about writing a book? I would definetly read it.
Theres on thing that bugs me a little though.
Im nativ german and the transaltion you did there were partly so bad that i had trouble finding out what you ment there.
No offence intended.
so if you plan to write german again please give me a pm i´ll glady translate it :)
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Re: Pressia|Choose your own adventure novella|Updated: March

Postby NamelessSynthetic » Thu May 02, 2013 6:48 pm

Eumel2 Wrote:holy shit this story is amazing
You have talent, have you ever thought about writing a book? I would definetly read it.

Read back in the posts, he's already stated he's going to see about making this a book to sell :lol:
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Re: Pressia|Choose your own adventure novella|Updated: March

Postby axmanjack » Mon May 06, 2013 3:49 am

Update:
Finished my outline tonight, and I'm going to start writing this week. I'm not making any promises about when I'll be finished, but I'm hoping I can just push through this with little interruption.

Throbby Wrote:You are awesome, may I say again. And a pretty good writer to boot! What other types of carnality interest you, O Novella-writer?

Thanks! The extent of the weirdest things I'm into has actually been fully eclipsed by what's covered in Pressia, I just tried to include as many of the "off-color" paraphilia as possible. As for what else I may be including... you'll have to wait for the next action.

Eumel2 Wrote:holy shit this story is amazing
You have talent, have you ever thought about writing a book? I would definetly read it.
Theres on thing that bugs me a little though.
Im nativ german and the transaltion you did there were partly so bad that i had trouble finding out what you ment there.
No offence intended.
so if you plan to write german again please give me a pm i´ll glady translate it :)


Again, thanks for positive feedback! I have a fairly limited grasp of German, so thanks for the offer, I'll keep it in mind.

A big thanks to everybody that's messaged me, I'll put up a progress report by next weekend.
Peace,
-AMJ
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Re: Pressia|Choose your own adventure novella|Updated: March

Postby ADIDAS » Thu May 09, 2013 7:08 am

Hats off to you bro. Your story telling is brilliant and it almost plants a theater screen in my mind with your stories words coming out as a vivid image.
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Re: Pressia|Choose your own adventure novella|Updated: March

Postby axmanjack » Mon May 13, 2013 4:08 pm

Update, as promised.
Im starting actual writing today. Each time I get done with a writing session I'll try to give you guys an update/ word count so you'll stay posted.
-AMJ

Also, have you guys seen Attack on Titan? That shit is off the fucking chain.
It's why I didn't update yesterday.
That and Fate/Zero.
And Crunchyroll.
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Re: Pressia|Choose your own adventure novella|Updated: March

Postby axmanjack » Tue May 14, 2013 4:58 am

Update:
I'm at 2,000 3334 words and counting, with probably around 8,000 >9000 to go.
Maybe more.
This is the second to last action, so I'm wrapping up pretty much everything.
If you have any questions, this is the time to ask, because I may have actually missed something and, well, I'm almost done.
Peace,
-AMJ
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Re: Pressia|Choose your own adventure novella|Updated: March

Postby axmanjack » Sat May 18, 2013 2:07 pm

Update:
Got a bit done today. Bit bogged down by one of the slower portions.
Sitting at 6183 words right now, and I'm not even at the halfway point.
If I were to guess, I think this action is probably going to top out around 12,000 words or so. Maybe even a bit more.
I'm going gasoline on this mother right now, so bear with me. A this pace I hope to be done with this action by... next weekend maybe...
I'm not sure.
Compliments make me write faster, lol.
Hitting the rack now,
-AMJ
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Re: Pressia|Choose your own adventure novella|Updated: March

Postby The Management » Sat May 18, 2013 11:09 pm

Ive been a lurker for a loooonng time, and registered just now to say youre awesome for reviving this
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Re: Pressia|Choose your own adventure novella|Updated: March

Postby NamelessSynthetic » Sun May 19, 2013 8:47 am

A wild compliment appears! "AMJ! You're fabulous!" +1 Speed boost.
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Re: Pressia|Choose your own adventure novella|Updated: March

Postby axmanjack » Wed May 22, 2013 6:51 am

NamelessSynthetic Wrote:A wild compliment appears! "AMJ! You're fabulous!" +1 Speed boost.

The Management Wrote:Ive been a lurker for a loooonng time, and registered just now to say youre awesome for reviving this


Thanks guys! Every little bit helps, lol.
I'm at 8593 words right now, and I just finished the section I had been working on last time.
I'm going to finish one more section tonight, and I'll update this status when I'm done.
-AMJ
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Re: Pressia|Choose your own adventure novella|Updated: March

Postby Throbby » Thu May 23, 2013 12:10 am

Buffering, buffering... Twitch-twitch... Can't wait...
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Re: Pressia|Choose your own adventure novella|Updated: March

Postby axmanjack » Thu May 23, 2013 4:55 am

Just another update.
I crossed the halfway point, and I'm down to the last three sections of the action.
This action is, I'm pretty sure, going to be the longest I've written so far.
I'm at 13983 words right now, and I'm pretty sure there's around 6000 or so left, but don't hold me to that. (cause it could be more)
I'm going to keep writing through tonight. Hopefully, I'll be able to get the next two sections done before I go to bed.
We're nearing the end of this thing, so we are officially in epic showdown territory and hopefully wrapping up all the various plot threads won't clog the narrative with exposition.
Regardless, content is en route, and probably in the next few days if the gods are kind.
I'll report back when I've got more done,
-AMJ
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Re: Pressia|Choose your own adventure novella|Updated: March

Postby axmanjack » Fri May 24, 2013 8:00 am

Another section done.
15967 words.
I think I'll be taking a break from Pressia after this action.
For like, at least a couple weeks.
A week at least.
Maybe play that new Tomb Raider game, or Spec OPs: The Line.
Guff.
I'll let you guys know when I've finished some more.
Till then,
-AMJ

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Re: Pressia|Choose your own adventure novella|Updated: March

Postby axmanjack » Fri May 24, 2013 2:03 pm

Scratch that last update.
I'm at 19275, and there's only one section left to go.
This last one was... brutal, to say the least.
I'm going to have to edit the ever-living-shit out of this when I'm done.
When I go on these long writing benders things tend to get a bit... blurry.
This is officially the longest thing I've ever written, period, and this is the most word I've written in a short period of time in my life.
I've been clicking out about 2000 words a day for ten days now, and I'm finishing this action before saturday night, so help me god.
I think the last section will be the longest too.
Fuuuuuucking hell.
I'm going to bed.
Love you guys,
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Re: Pressia|Choose your own adventure novella|Updated: March

Postby Throbby » Sat May 25, 2013 4:11 am

When the muse rides you, she's not thinking about how fuzzy-headed or tired you're getting. Just let it flow, and 'fore you know it, you're gonna be sleeping and editing and saying, "Aaaahhhhhhhh..." :)
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