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Re: A MiM hack

Postby Unholy Sonic » Fri Mar 11, 2011 5:07 pm

I've check the animation a dozen of times and I can't find anything wrong except for the 4th personallity, the "none".
In this one, it would find it better to simply remove the text bubbles entirely cause it still gives me the impression that one of them are gonna say something at anytime but thats just me tho.
It's not like it's something major, I'll probably get used to it the more I watch it.

Other then that everything seems fine and well done.

Good job!
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Re: A MiM hack

Postby KaijoPhanex » Fri Mar 11, 2011 10:40 pm

Blargh <3 <3 <3

It's amazing! I think my only complaint would be the finish for the first blowjob (where he finishes in her mouth). To me, while it's cool to see how far into her mouth all that stuff is going (like an internal shot haha), it looks kind of weird. Maybe just take out the blasts of mess from the actual release, then just make her gag it all up like she does after.

The transition-turn to where she faces away from him after that is still a little awkward too. Other than those two little things... mmmmm mmmmmmm. I love most how the mess just keeps stacking on her and stacking on her... <3 <3 hottttt hahaha

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Re: A MiM hack

Postby Anonymous » Sat Mar 12, 2011 3:32 am

looks awesome but you should put corta's sheik model in it.
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Re: A MiM hack

Postby Blargh » Sat Mar 12, 2011 4:05 pm

Unholy Sonic Wrote:I've check the animation a dozen of times and I can't find anything wrong except for the 4th personallity, the "none".
In this one, it would find it better to simply remove the text bubbles entirely cause it still gives me the impression that one of them are gonna say something at anytime but thats just me tho.
It's not like it's something major, I'll probably get used to it the more I watch it.

Other then that everything seems fine and well done.

Good job!

I'll see about making them disappear in the main game, but for now this is all you're gonna get.

paint-the-seconds Wrote:looks awesome but you should put corta's sheik model in it.

I'm not adding characters to the Morton scene template. They'll be added to the main game when I get to them after finishing with Morton.
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Re: A MiM hack

Postby geos » Sat Mar 12, 2011 6:56 pm

Krystal's hips are still acting weird.
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Re: A MiM hack

Postby Blargh » Mon Mar 14, 2011 5:21 pm

geos Wrote:Krystal's hips are still acting weird.

They're going to act weird until I chop off the ass cheeks from her body model. >_>
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Re: A MiM hack

Postby Digfree » Mon Mar 14, 2011 5:26 pm

Blargh Wrote:
geos Wrote:Krystal's hips are still acting weird.

They're going to act weird until I chop off the ass cheeks from her body model. >_>


Don't you need to have gone too medical school to be legal able to do that?
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Re: A MiM hack

Postby Sexybones » Mon Mar 14, 2011 10:03 pm

The only issue i found is that after the titjob whit a bigger breast character the left hand stick through her left breast.
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Re: A MiM hack

Postby kagenoryuu » Mon Mar 14, 2011 10:06 pm

this is really cool. just needs the arrow buttons to allow you to move forward or back through the scene. other than that, great job!
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Re: A MiM hack

Postby LuftMallow » Wed Mar 16, 2011 5:17 am

In your added sex scenes, all the characters I've found open their mouths in a way that looks unnatural to me. It looks less like they're panting/moaning than that they're distending their lower jaw like a snake. My suggestion is to have it open not as wide and articulated not where the jawline meets the neck but a little above there like so:
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Re: A MiM hack

Postby Blargh » Wed Mar 16, 2011 2:44 pm

Digfree Wrote:
Blargh Wrote:
geos Wrote:Krystal's hips are still acting weird.

They're going to act weird until I chop off the ass cheeks from her body model. >_>


Don't you need to have gone too medical school to be legal able to do that?

I totally have a PHD in ass-chopology. I saw something that may have been related on TV this one time, and I completely qualified for it. ^_^

Sexybones Wrote:The only issue i found is that after the titjob whit a bigger breast character the left hand stick through her left breast.

I'm gonna try some reverse psychology here and say look at it harder. That way you won't get stuck always looking at it just because I said not to look at it. >_>

Unfortunately, it's not going to change since the animations (even the originals) don't account for the larger breast sizes. Then again, if I made the normal size smaller and shrank the big size down to normal, then it would work. <_< And everyone would have small breasts. T_T
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Re: A MiM hack

Postby Lord Panzi » Thu Mar 17, 2011 2:41 am

Digfree Wrote:
Blargh Wrote:
geos Wrote:Krystal's hips are still acting weird.

They're going to act weird until I chop off the ass cheeks from her body model. >_>


Don't you need to have gone too medical school to be legal able to do that?

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Re: A MiM hack

Postby Blargh » Fri Mar 18, 2011 4:49 am

Okay, so I was hoping to include a main game update with this post, but it looks like flash is fucking up my FLAs every time I open them, so I'll have to re-install. In the meantime, I did get done with the text, so here you go. Unless there's anything game-breaking, this'll be the final build to copy over to the main game.
EDIT: Main game has now been updated. I can finally get back to sweatin' the small stuff. :D

KaijoPhanex Wrote:Blargh <3 <3 <3

It's amazing! I think my only complaint would be the finish for the first blowjob (where he finishes in her mouth). To me, while it's cool to see how far into her mouth all that stuff is going (like an internal shot haha), it looks kind of weird. Maybe just take out the blasts of mess from the actual release, then just make her gag it all up like she does after.

The transition-turn to where she faces away from him after that is still a little awkward too. Other than those two little things... mmmmm mmmmmmm. I love most how the mess just keeps stacking on her and stacking on her... <3 <3 hottttt hahaha

MORE!

Eh, I'm just kind of letting it go at this point. I'll try to revisit it another time, but I'm about done with Morton for now.

kagenoryuu Wrote:this is really cool. just needs the arrow buttons to allow you to move forward or back through the scene. other than that, great job!

That may be done in the main game, later.

LuftMallow Wrote:In your added sex scenes, all the characters I've found open their mouths in a way that looks unnatural to me. It looks less like they're panting/moaning than that they're distending their lower jaw like a snake. My suggestion is to have it open not as wide and articulated not where the jawline meets the neck but a little above there like so:
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You're right. I'll see about toning it down for the parts where she's not giving out blowjobs.
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Re: A MiM hack

Postby Crossbow1701 » Fri Mar 18, 2011 5:35 pm

Blargh Wrote:Okay, so I was hoping to include a main game update with this post, but it looks like flash is fucking up my FLAs every time I open them, so I'll have to re-install. In the meantime, I did get done with the text, so here you go. Unless there's anything game-breaking, this'll be the final build to copy over to the main game.
EDIT: Main game has now been updated. I can finally get back to sweatin' the small stuff. :D

KaijoPhanex Wrote:Blargh <3 <3 <3

It's amazing! I think my only complaint would be the finish for the first blowjob (where he finishes in her mouth). To me, while it's cool to see how far into her mouth all that stuff is going (like an internal shot haha), it looks kind of weird. Maybe just take out the blasts of mess from the actual release, then just make her gag it all up like she does after.

The transition-turn to where she faces away from him after that is still a little awkward too. Other than those two little things... mmmmm mmmmmmm. I love most how the mess just keeps stacking on her and stacking on her... <3 <3 hottttt hahaha

MORE!

Eh, I'm just kind of letting it go at this point. I'll try to revisit it another time, but I'm about done with Morton for now.

kagenoryuu Wrote:this is really cool. just needs the arrow buttons to allow you to move forward or back through the scene. other than that, great job!

That may be done in the main game, later.

LuftMallow Wrote:In your added sex scenes, all the characters I've found open their mouths in a way that looks unnatural to me. It looks less like they're panting/moaning than that they're distending their lower jaw like a snake. My suggestion is to have it open not as wide and articulated not where the jawline meets the neck but a little above there like so:
jaw.jpg

You're right. I'll see about toning it down for the parts where she's not giving out blowjobs.


so this Peach extra is now in the game, anything else?
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Re: A MiM hack (Game updated March 18, 2011)

Postby haloman » Sat Mar 19, 2011 3:44 am

I dont wanna be the bitch here... But i kinda find the text hard to read. Ya i read it and watch the fucking, not just enjoy the fucking. Sue me. So anyway, Light purple against grey and blue is just to hard to read (In my case. I dont know about others)
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Re: A MiM hack (Game updated March 18, 2011)

Postby Lord Panzi » Sat Mar 19, 2011 5:23 am

i second this, halo dude
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Re: A MiM hack (Game updated March 18, 2011)

Postby Reaver » Sat Mar 19, 2011 5:39 am

very good at first i thought the ending wasn' t going to be right but u proved me wrong it was great
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Re: A MiM hack

Postby Blargh » Sat Mar 19, 2011 2:40 pm

Crossbow1701 Wrote:so this Peach extra is now in the game, anything else?

No. As noted in the original post, the "game update" just includes the Morton scene. It's mostly to point out that I'm ready to get back to dealing with other things. Next update will be an overhaul of the character selection screen and locking costumes.

haloman Wrote:I dont wanna be the bitch here... But i kinda find the text hard to read. Ya i read it and watch the fucking, not just enjoy the fucking. Sue me. So anyway, Light purple against grey and blue is just to hard to read (In my case. I dont know about others)

Lord Panzi Wrote:i second this, halo dude

I understand. If I'm looking at it at the wrong angle I can't read it either. I'm going to try to find a better color combo for the text.

ikechi Wrote:very good at first i thought the ending wasn' t going to be right but u proved me wrong it was great

Thanks. I'll be adding refinements to the animations every so often to make it better, but I won't be devoting another three months to this or any other single part of the project.
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Re: A MiM hack (Game updated March 18, 2011)

Postby bed_intruder » Sat Mar 19, 2011 4:07 pm

Eh, text is kinda weird. By that I mean what she is saying like how she wants to get pregnant or whatever. "I have a having kids fetish, it just feels so good to pop out kids!" - Princess Peach. Anyway the animation looks good enough for now, I agree that you should work on the other aspects of the game like more enemies, levels, etc.
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Re: A MiM hack (Game updated March 18, 2011)

Postby Blargh » Mon Mar 21, 2011 4:12 pm

bed_intruder Wrote:Eh, text is kinda weird. By that I mean what she is saying like how she wants to get pregnant or whatever. "I have a having kids fetish, it just feels so good to pop out kids!" - Princess Peach. Anyway the animation looks good enough for now, I agree that you should work on the other aspects of the game like more enemies, levels, etc.

Eh, I was just ripping off some recent hentai translations. I'll work on the text next time I deal with the Morton scene.

In other news, I finally fixed my memory problem and flash is working beautifully again. So there's a new update with a re-vamped character select. You can cycle through all of the costumes without having to click on an ugly button, and the credits and costume names are now directly under the preview costume. Costume locking is over top of the preview.

And hopefully the Bowser scene sounds didn't get corrupted again. I found out that fixing the sounds by replacing them with files from the original corrupts Rikku's hair of all things, and fixing Rikku's hair corrupts the sounds. I am hopefully close to getting both parts working together.
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