Hentai: Peach's Untold Tale 3.48 (Nov 2/18) - HIATUS

[Thatguy45]

The fingers covering her butt look weird. They might need to be turned or put behind Peach's buttcheek, not sure which would look better.

How about now?

peachwalkshy2.swf

Maybe move the back hand up just a little bit, then it should look right.

[Ivan-Aedler]

Maybe move the back hand up just a little bit, then it should look right.

To which direction? 'inside her butt'? Aside of it?

[QuizmasterBos]

Is there a fla files of it ? Can i look it please ?

The embarassing one was sent via PM to you (here on LOK)

The fingers covering her butt look weird. They might need to be turned or put behind Peach's buttcheek, not sure which would look better.

How about now?

peachwalkshy2.swf

That looks pretty good...
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However, there are two things I noticed about it.
First, why is Peach covering her butt and not her bust? Don't embarrassed girls usually cover their bust and genital area? Butt is generally more accepted.
Second, her strut looks more like a limp. Whenever Peach stands on her left leg and carries over to the right, she moves up a bit. It's as if her left leg hurts.

Other than that, great job Digfree and Ivan! I hope to see more good stuff in the future.

[Thatguy45]

Maybe move the back hand up just a little bit, then it should look right.

To which direction? 'inside her butt'? Aside of it?

Just a little farther up on the y-plane. The angle looks weird to me.

[Ivan-Aedler]

[DOUBLE POST].

[Ivan-Aedler]

Just a little farther up on the y-plane. The angle looks weird to me.

I understood this as 'put it 'upwards', following y-plane (the plane of peach height, not width).
If this assumption is wrong, please draw it to me.

First, why is Peach covering her butt and not her bust? Don't embarrassed girls usually cover their bust and genital area? Butt is generally more accepted.

IF YOU are able to make FIVE arm configurations/animations, then YES. Because YEAH, we have 5 bust sizes. She need to cover her breast with different arm/hands placements, or it will appear that her breasts are flat (due to the same placement).

(but yes, I can make her cover her breasts if they're SIZE 1 or SIZE 2. Bigger breasts wont be easier to cover for obvious purposes
Anyway we can also infer she doesnt want anyone spying on her royal bits. Its much more harmful for her to be ass/pussy fucked than touching her breasts.

Second, her strut looks more like a limp. Whenever Peach stands on her left leg and carries over to the right, she moves up a bit. It's as if her left leg hurts.

It was worse , much worse I'm improving
But we can infer that she's walking with her front hand blocking her thighs a bit, difficulting her gait.

Other than that, great job Digfree and Ivan! I hope to see more good stuff in the future.

I have two frontside Peach covering herself , I just need to find time to do it.
By the way, level 4-2 is 60% complete!

[Thatguy45]

Just a little farther up on the y-plane. The angle looks weird to me.

I understood this as 'put it 'upwards', following y-plane (the plane of peach height, not width).
If this assumption is wrong, please draw it to me.

Like this:

What I think it should look like is the one on the right.

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As you can see, I think the right hand needs to be slightly higher up and also turned around so she's almost cupping her cheeks for maximum coverage.

[Ivan-Aedler]

Code complexity:
Like I said in former pages (110?), I'll be remaking Peach code using Automata, which will modularize her code. But no end date yet.
EDIT: Decided not to transform to Automata until getting more help to make the game (art, voices).

As you can see, I think the right hand needs to be slightly higher up and also turned around so she's almost cupping her cheeks for maximum coverage.

Oh I see! Negative X axis movement with a bit of positive Y in carthesian law (diagonal upper left)!

Like this? (remember I cant change hand position in a 3d universe, they're flat images).
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[MPLDAM9919]

That embarrassed walk looks really nice! I can't wait to see it in game! Are you going to have her cover her breasts as well no matter what size they are?

[Thatguy45]

Like this? (remember I cant change hand position in a 3d universe, they're flat images).

peachwalkshy2.swf

Perfect!

[Ivan-Aedler]

That embarrassed walk looks really nice! I can't wait to see it in game! Are you going to have her cover her breasts as well no matter what size they are?

Later. As I've said above, covering her breasts will depend on her breast size. To be easier to make, when her breast is, say, SIZE 3 or more, she wont cover it for obvious reasons.

[MPLDAM9919]

That embarrassed walk looks really nice! I can't wait to see it in game! Are you going to have her cover her breasts as well no matter what size they are?

Later. As I've said above, covering her breasts will depend on her breast size. To be easier to make, when her breast is, say, SIZE 3 or more, she wont cover it for obvious reasons.

She might be able to cover SIZE 3 which I think is "BIG", right?

Size 1: smaller
Size 2: Normal
Size 3: Big
Size 4: Bigger
Size 5: Biggest

[Ivan-Aedler]

This Peach is familiar!

Spoiler (click to show/hide):

She might be able to cover SIZE 3 which I think is "BIG", right?

Yes. Testing needed.

[QuizmasterBos]

This Peach is familiar!

Spoiler (click to show/hide):

Wait, who made that picture? Did PS base his version off this, or is it the other way around?

[Ivan-Aedler]

Wait, who made that picture? Did PS base his version off this, or is it the other way around?

I dont know who made it (there is no watermark). I think PS based his version off this, yes. 80% possible. 20% possible that someone recreated PS Peach.
This Peach AS IS, is beautiful. Period. In game (since the beginning), her face/eye structures are different from this one. If I can recreate THIS Peach above, now its a PLAUSIBLE explanation to maintain PS Peach

[QuizmasterBos]

Wait, who made that picture? Did PS base his version off this, or is it the other way around?

I dont know who made it (there is no watermark). I think PS based his version off this, yes. 80% possible. 20% possible that someone recreated PS Peach.
This Peach AS IS, is beautiful. Period. In game (since the beginning), her face/eye structures are different from this one. If I can recreate THIS Peach above, now its a PLAUSIBLE explanation to maintain PS Peach

WARNING, complaints regarding the picture.

Spoiler (click to show/hide):

Either way, I prefer PS version over this one. I honestly find the picture less than appealing. Her body structure is so... weird. It's difficult to pinpoint, but her proportions are just off. And I am not talking about the breasts only.

I also like PS' face better. His had better eyes (more proportionate to the face and less eyeshadow.
Her earrings are also FAR too big, which may cause the face structure to look weird.

Her belly has a great "cut" in it, that shouldn't be there.

And the less I say about her groin, the better.

So, in short, I personally don't like a Peach revision that looks like that.

That concludes my regular complaining.

[Ivan-Aedler]

I also didnt like her belly 'cut'.
I loved her face. Well, personal preferences are like soccer/football/religion/politics, I understand.
So, let's see other opinions
In the meanwhile, I'll be uploading a fix then I will get back to work. Today is Friday!

[LuftMallow]

Wait, who made that picture? Did PS base his version off this, or is it the other way around?

I dont know who made it (there is no watermark). I think PS based his version off this, yes. 80% possible. 20% possible that someone recreated PS Peach.
This Peach AS IS, is beautiful. Period. In game (since the beginning), her face/eye structures are different from this one. If I can recreate THIS Peach above, now its a PLAUSIBLE explanation to maintain PS Peach

I've found where that image originated. It's one of the rare times the "Saucenao" feature that's off to the side on rule34.xxx actually worked. That image was posted on Pixiv in July last year, so Playshapes most likely didn't draw inspiration from it. This is the account: http://www.pixiv.net/member.php?id=45629 (There's really nothing else that's interesting on it, just proof.)

[Ivan-Aedler]

I've found where that image originated. It's one of the rare times the "Saucenao" feature that's off to the side on rule34.xxx actually worked. That image was posted on Pixiv in July last year, so Playshapes most likely didn't draw inspiration from it. This is the account: http://www.pixiv.net/member.php?id=45629 (There's really nothing else that's interesting on it, just proof.)

Bingo! Nice to know, LM! I'll see if I can contact him. He's known with the name COMPILER.

EDIT:

EDIT2: I contacted him either way (via email). He might know english, as his site has english text in some menus.
EDIT3: His email returned (deepcomp [AT] hotmail.co.jp).

EDIT4: On Luftmallow Link , I suppose we can contact him there too -> "Sign up with pixiv today and get connected with こんぱいら". Does anyone have an account there?

[MPLDAM9919]

Still waiting for email responses from Aeolus and Vcampan. Also, do you want me to forward the email from SakuraKasugano to you, Ivan?