Forsaken OOC (Fallout RP Looking for GM!)

[Grape Me]

This is good, I wanted feedback on this. Well since your character is not directly associated with anybody else then fine I'll make posting cycle for both you and suger. Prob is suger IS currently associated with another character so I hope you can wait shortly suger. I'll work on yours napsii

[napsii]

If you're going to coax a player in the direction of something that will likely leave them with nothing to post (e.g. resting with no plans for anything to intercede) you should be prepared for how it affects the synchronization of time. If you want to keep time synchronized, it's usually easiest to "put PC's to bed" all at once. This, of course, requires you to direct the characters in such a way that they're all prepared to timeskip simultaneously.

Since it seems you're playing out time asynchronously between characters, though (I am inferring this difference to be a few hours between each PC, at most) then you need to provide material with concern for how it might lead into a significant timeskip that widens the gap between the PC's time. I might be sounding a little blunt here, but it seems like now you're running into the errors of your pacing. Cae, for example, was rapidly drawn toward sleep whereas most of the other characters are freshly finding new things to deal with because in the span of posts that took Cae across Fairtown, into a motel, blahblahblah and then up to bed, some of the chars went through like... a single conversation. Now, the characters are distant enough that this doesn't matter as much, but if you're looking to draw characters together (which you should, I think) you should pay more attention to this. Time becomes vastly more important when characters are in proximity because it becomes harder to see their "time" as distinct.

[Grape Me]

Alright, I have figured out a way to solve this. I'll get to work on both yours and suger's posts.

[napsii]

Any chance that me and Sugarcookie will get a post soon? :c

[Grape Me]

The only day I rly get to work on this rp is Wednesdays (today) so yes ill be trying to get it up soon. If I'm making the posts for you both I might as well just throw it in for everybody.

[napsii]

OK. Roger that.

[Grape Me]

Going to see Zedd on friday. Prob won't get to post this up till sat or sunday. Sorry for the wait guys.

[Grape Me]

Sorry guys need more time. I'm halfway through it

[That_One_Guy]

Sorry, lot, I had lost my internet, i'm back now though

[Suraru]

If this is still going on, lets just say my character blacked out with Scarlet in bed.

[That_One_Guy]

I hope it's still going on.

[SugarCookie]

I really like where this story was heading, that and I love my character. I guess we'll find out Wednesday.

[Noosie]

Looks like it died. If Diablos doesn't re-surface soon, is there anyone who could take over?

[Grape Me]

I'd like to apologize to you all for my disappearance and let me just say I am going to continue this! I will probably leave most of my other rps and focus entirely on this one so expect updates more often (yeeeeeeah!)

Suraru, welcome back and I had your character on reserve so don't worry I'll continue your story. Nap is gone so I'll put her on reserve now. Hope everything is alright with you guys.

[[Brand_Name]]

yayyyyyy

[daxtinator396]

The devil is back! :3 woot! I'm excited to see this continued it has great promise :3

[Suraru]

aw snap, update!
I haven't read it yet because I have to go, but aw snap!

[Grape Me]

Alright so just updated it I should be able to update cycles relatively quickly so that is good news.

In the OOC I put in more locations for the Important Location tab. Will probably put more detail in there.

[Grape Me]

More posts. I'll quickly do one for you too suga then that prob the last from me tonight.

[Suraru]

Not much I can do when tied up ^^
Nah but south seems like a good place to go, I've been stalking a few other people (mainly Sugar), and if the time frame in my head is correct, then after I have fun with this girl (or rather she has fun with me), I can sneak out and run south, making it to the gas station just after the firefight and give her a hand with her little problem. Snipers like me can take them all out in open land, or at least give her a distraction to escape if they run for cover.