Hentai: Peach's Untold Tale 3.48 (Nov 2/18) - HIATUS

[MPLDAM9919]

Oh! And before I forget, That pesky double Peach bug is still in the game when pausing on the World map (Any World) then exiting the menu.

[AsianP3rsuas10n]

Heya guys

Hey, you appeared here! Try not to fly so quickly again

First off is something ridiculously small but I just want to point out anyways.

Man...I use a good SyncMaster LCD (not led). Even with more contrast/brightness, I dont see a thing of that rectangle. Neither 0,001% of it. :/

Next is, this. It seems if I jump and then move myself to the locker, the button to use it appears at where I came into contact with it. You should probably set it so it appears by the handle only. Same with the bed. But again something small

On purpose. The button system appears based no Peach, not the object. The correct was to put the button appear at least in a central point in the upper boundary line (upper area). But there are tons of objects that use different registration points, so fixing the button in a given configuration was throwing bugs. I'll retain the button as is, as it works. If you jump and it appears so far away, you can always return to the object without jumping later.

And lastly, is this line that bothers me a bit. Your directions here are quite redundant as for the word "left" I would advise changing it to the door on the left and then move west.

I dont see any problem. I'll ask Quiz to check it.
Thank you, and please check the new addition (Peach taking a bath in the checkpoint). And tell me if you liked it

Hahah I guess I could stay a bit longer.

Its fine for the square. Like I said I bet 99.9% of people dont see it. The reason I saw it was either of 2 reasons.
1. I'm going nuts.
or
2. I was so concentrated on how I could find a way to make it so Peach would actually be visible to the player that when I noticed the slight movement that passed my screen, that I noticed it right away.
But no matters! hahah. Its hard to see in the picture anyways.

As for the button thing, thats fine.

And the reason the line bothers me is because when I read, I like my sentences to flow without me having to repeat one word after another right away. Of course that's excluding words like I, you, me, they, etc. Especially with directions is where i get bothered most. For instance if I were to receive instructions on how to get a place and some one says "First you go down to your left then go left then it's the door on your left." Of course its plain and simple but in some cases with new areas I could get confused and lost because half the time directions are places are quite vague. By saying "Go south and make and left turn, and the head west, it should be the door on the left hand side" Now the directions arent so vague and it flows easily that trying to remember it wont be so hard. But I guess it is just my opinion :/ and I am a weirdo so...haha but yea check with Quiz on it.

Anyways, in the process of making something. I'll show you soon once im done.

[AsianP3rsuas10n]

And lastly, is this line that bothers me a bit. Your directions here are quite redundant as for the word "left" I would advise changing it to the door on the left and then move west. Change it up a bit instead of always using left or right. You could probably remove the "Its the last front facing door" as well because it will be flashing green so players can probably tell where it is if they keep moving left. Also I'd advise more complete sentences. Instead of short sentences over and over. Try to make use of commas, colins, and semi colons to your advantage. So if you're going to remove the line I asked, make sure the last part, "we have little time", is a bit longer. Like "We have little time, you must hurry." etc

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Oh, you have me to blame for that. I wrote that whole thing. (Back when I literally just started. Hey, I am learning as well.)

I agree with the move west thing.
I added the part about the door being front-facing to make it extra clear. I didn't want people to get confused, thinking that it is the door to the side.
And now you got me bothered about the short sentences as well. Let me think...

I will open the lab door. Please go back, take the first elevator and then move west to get to it. Its light will be shining green. We have little time, you must hurry.
Does that sound about good?

I like it! But how about
I will open the lab door for you. Please go back, take the first elevator and then move west. Its light will be shining green. We have little time, you must hurry.






On second thought, my creation must wait. Time to go grab some dinner with some friends ^_^ I'll be back later!

[QuizmasterBos]

And lastly, is this line that bothers me a bit. Your directions here are quite redundant as for the word "left" I would advise changing it to the door on the left and then move west. Change it up a bit instead of always using left or right. You could probably remove the "Its the last front facing door" as well because it will be flashing green so players can probably tell where it is if they keep moving left. Also I'd advise more complete sentences. Instead of short sentences over and over. Try to make use of commas, colins, and semi colons to your advantage. So if you're going to remove the line I asked, make sure the last part, "we have little time", is a bit longer. Like "We have little time, you must hurry." etc

Spoiler (click to show/hide):

Line.png

Oh, you have me to blame for that. I wrote that whole thing. (Back when I literally just started. Hey, I am learning as well.)

I agree with the move west thing.
I added the part about the door being front-facing to make it extra clear. I didn't want people to get confused, thinking that it is the door to the side.
And now you got me bothered about the short sentences as well. Let me think...

I will open the lab door. Please go back, take the first elevator and then move west to get to it. Its light will be shining green. We have little time, you must hurry.
Does that sound about good?

I like it! But how about
I will open the lab door for you. Please go back, take the first elevator and then move west. Its light will be shining green. We have little time, you must hurry.

I was thinking of that exact line, but wouldn't the word 'its' then suddenly start referring to the elevator and not the lab door? I added the words 'to get to it' to lift any confusion and to make the thing at least in my belief grammatically correct.

[Ivan-Aedler]

I object. Women have to clean their genitals every so often, but they won't get horny from that. Unless they start having naughty thoughts of course. But Peach can just clean herself everywhere without the need for becoming excited.

But she is getting hornier. Just check her expression. Sometimes she washes nicely, but sometimes she just does it. Isn't that cute?

[AsianP3rsuas10n]

Hmm i see what you mean...then what about this
I will open the lab door for you. Please go back, take the first elevator and then move west until you reach a door with a green light. We have little time, you must hurry.


I feel "to get to it" is way to obscure...in some weird way. But i hope this line would be more suitable. If not we can keep the first one you came up with!

[QuizmasterBos]

Hmm i see what you mean...then what about this
I will open the lab door for you. Please go back, take the first elevator and then move west until you reach a door with a green light. We have little time, you must hurry.


I feel "to get to it" is way to obscure...in some weird way. But i hope this line would be more suitable. If not we can keep the first one you came up with!

I like that one. Ivan, can you change the line to that?

[Ivan-Aedler]

I like that one. Ivan, can you change the line to that?

Done, but not uploaded yet!

[MPLDAM9919]

I like that one. Ivan, can you change the line to that?

Done, but not uploaded yet!

Did you get the double Peach glitch?

[Ivan-Aedler]

Did you get the double Peach glitch?

Yes, but later. I'm into a deep programming task now.

EDIT: I've put two cumming situations in the shower! (not uploaded yet).

Did you get the double Peach glitch?

CANNOT REPRODUCE :/ Only going there then clicking on 'EXIT' button or pressing CTRL doesnt throw the bug. All if working correctly here.

[Toyloli]

And lastly, is this line that bothers me a bit. Your directions here are quite redundant as for the word "left" I would advise changing it to the door on the left and then move west. Change it up a bit instead of always using left or right. You could probably remove the "Its the last front facing door" as well because it will be flashing green so players can probably tell where it is if they keep moving left. Also I'd advise more complete sentences. Instead of short sentences over and over. Try to make use of commas, colins, and semi colons to your advantage. So if you're going to remove the line I asked, make sure the last part, "we have little time", is a bit longer. Like "We have little time, you must hurry." etc

Wait, is that on the huh ??
In that image, isn't Tec's lab to the east/Right (Based on left of screen being west, right of screen is east)

[MPLDAM9919]

Did you get the double Peach glitch?

CANNOT REPRODUCE :/ Only going there then clicking on 'EXIT' button or pressing CTRL doesnt throw the bug. All if working correctly here.

It keeps on happening on my part. I just click on the button not press CTRL.

EDIT: I've put two cumming situations in the shower! (not uploaded yet).

Sweet! I can't wait to see them!


Also, I'm currently working on the TEC and Gordus scene let me know when you want that and the Pennington one. And I'm also working on some more dildos/toys and some outfits for shits and giggles.

[Ivan-Aedler]

It keeps on happening on my part. I just click on the button not press CTRL.

OK GOT IT. It is the button IN THE WORLDMAP, the left pink one (Open Menu) outside the main screen! You didnt say that clearly, and as I use CTRL instead, I would never find it.
Fixing it!

[MPLDAM9919]

New Dildos Plus three strapon prototypes!!! (LuftMallow or someone else can fix them later)


Dildos:
-Boo (Regular and Shy)
- Veggie Vibrator
- Question Block
- Peachy Pleasure
- Daisy Dildo
- Rosie Rumbler

Strapons:
-Double strapon (Used by Rosalina)
-Regular (Used by Pauline)
-Mushroom (Unknown as of now. Most likely Wendy)

[Ivan-Aedler]

Version updated!
- Double Peach in worldmap (when clicking in the pink button 'open menu' fixed.
- Some corrections in the bath, like tail disappearing. Also, when Peach is a raccoon or yoshi, she doesnt 'take out' her clothes because she has a real animal body/tail in those situations.

New Dildos Plus three strapon prototypes!!! (LuftMallow or someone else can fix them later)

Very nice! But strapons are low priority because I Need to create a sytem code that put it betwen thighs.
Also, Dildos should ony be used in certain places (like her bed, Mario's bed, the throne...), not everywhere. I dont plan to make Peach carry dildos any time soon. The exception is the scepter.

Dildos:
-Boo (Regular and Shy), - Veggie Vibrator, - Question Block, - Peachy Pleasure, - Daisy Dildo, - Rosie Rumbler

So these are addons of the former. Ok.

[Residentlover2]

NO DILDOS PLEASE THEN THE SCENES WILL BE THE SAME AS ALWAYS IS LIKE THE LESBIAN SCENES ARE WITH MEN IS THE SAME SO GO FOR TRIBADISM SCENES PLEAAAASE!! No dildos....no dicks involved or something like that on at least one scene please please.... i beg you please ivana

[Toyloli]

:evil: NO DILDOS PLEASE THEN THE SCENES WILL BE THE SAME AS ALWAYS IS LIKE THE LESBIAN SCENES ARE WITH MEN IS THE SAME SO GO FOR TRIBADISM SCENES PLEAAAASE!! No dildos....no dicks involved or something like that on at least one scene please please.... i beg you please ivana

Um, dildo's were meant to be for Peach to buy and use, at least I thought so. But goddess, why do we have to many weirdos who immediately jump to allcaps and start acting troppo as soon as a fetish they don't like gets mentioned ???

regarding:

[b]
- Veggie Vibrator

When I first saw the veggies in the world map (the ones she now picks up and throws) I thought they were for her to play with...
What you just made re-enforces the 'why not'.

and

[b]Strapons:
-Double strapon (Used by Rosalina)
-Regular (Used by Pauline)
-Mushroom (Unknown as of now. Most likely Wendy)

The whole lesbian thing doesn't bother me which way it's done. I do know some lesbians complain that the abuse of dickgirls and strap-ons in hentai does make it seam like "girl's can't get off without a cock". . . Since we've already established Peach can though, and from discussions we won't be limiting peach just to that kind of les sex I don't think it's a huge huge issue.

Random thought. Since all the females so far seam to be Mid-bosses.
Perhaps Nympho peach is the one to use the strap-on. And the enemies just use whatever they have with.

[Residentlover2]

i know that the majority of the guys love this....but lesbians without cocks its a way to make new sex scenes like the 69 position (come on who doesnt want to see an animation where peach and rosalina for example are fucking in this position)

or maybe tribadism....you can found cocks everywhere in the game please dude is just a suggestion for at least a few scenes cause i know that the majority will choose the dildos position that are the same that with mens no differences only tits with a dick well thats my opinion!!

[QuizmasterBos]

And lastly, is this line that bothers me a bit. Your directions here are quite redundant as for the word "left" I would advise changing it to the door on the left and then move west. Change it up a bit instead of always using left or right. You could probably remove the "Its the last front facing door" as well because it will be flashing green so players can probably tell where it is if they keep moving left. Also I'd advise more complete sentences. Instead of short sentences over and over. Try to make use of commas, colins, and semi colons to your advantage. So if you're going to remove the line I asked, make sure the last part, "we have little time", is a bit longer. Like "We have little time, you must hurry." etc

Wait, is that on the huh ??
In that image, isn't Tec's lab to the east/Right (Based on left of screen being west, right of screen is east)

TEC's room isn't the lab. It's the concoctionator room as Ivan said. But since that is a long, nonexistent word, I changed it to lab.
And that IS indeed to the west.

[b]Strapons:
-Double strapon (Used by Rosalina)
-Regular (Used by Pauline)
-Mushroom (Unknown as of now. Most likely Wendy)

The whole lesbian thing doesn't bother me which way it's done. I do know some lesbians complain that the abuse of dickgirls and strap-ons in hentai does make it seam like "girl's can't get off without a cock". . . Since we've already established Peach can though, and from discussions we won't be limiting peach just to that kind of les sex I don't think it's a huge huge issue.

Random thought. Since all the females so far seam to be Mid-bosses.
Perhaps Nympho peach is the one to use the strap-on. And the enemies just use whatever they have with.

MPLDAM has a bit of a fetish. Every female only or female on female scene has a dildo or strap-on in it originally. I already told him to cut down on them, since they often-times don't fit, or they just become over-used.

Double strapon (Used by Rosalina)

Rosalina isn't going to use a strap-on. I was going to write that scene, remember? And I am not going to include toys of any sort in that scene.

[Ivan-Aedler]

:evil: NO DILDOS PLEASE THEN THE SCENES WILL BE THE SAME AS ALWAYS

Dildos, Strap ons, etc, are not a priority, but they might be in the game in some scenes. I also prefer Tribadism.

Um, dildo's were meant to be for Peach to buy and use, at least I thought so. But goddess, why do we have to many weirdos who immediately jump to allcaps and start acting troppo as soon as a fetish they don't like gets mentioned ???

Yes, Peach should use the dildo with herself more than with others.

When I first saw the veggies in the world map (the ones she now picks up and throws) I thought they were for her to play with...
What you just made re-enforces the 'why not'.

One of my plans is to make her play with her veggies. Using a masturbation key while she is carrying one, for example, would trigger one.

Since we've already established Peach can, though, and from discussions we won't be limiting peach just to that kind of les sex I don't think it's a huge huge issue.

Again, I dont mind.

Perhaps Nympho peach is the one to use the strap-on. And the enemies just use whatever they have with.

I wont be adding inventory system to Peach any time soon. Strap-ons/dildos are to be used in some scenes along the level. After the game is complete in levels, new features (like kissing, peeing and experiments with bigger belly), and poses for Peach, dialogues and sex scenes (still my priority) I can think about an inventory.

:cry: i know that the majority of the guys love this....but lesbians without cocks its a way to make new sex scenes like the 69 position (come on who doesnt want to see an animation where peach and rosalina for example are fucking in this position)

Again and Again: MPL is just showing his art. ITS OBVIOUS that I prefer 'pure lesbian scenes', like 69, tribadism, etc. But that dont exclude the use of dildos/strap ons in some scenes only.

Rosalina isn't going to use a strap-on. I was going to write that scene, remember? And I am not going to include toys of any sort in that scene.

Instead of saying 'NOO!', I always search for a solution. Again, those scenes are possible to be in the game, even with Rosalina, but as a 'Make her do it' button (parallel to the main scenes).
As I know there are tons of fetishes (foot, strap ons, massages before sex), I will make them aside fo the 'pure flesh to flesh' scenes, which is still the priority and I can experiment with pussy animations.