Mr.D's Krystal Ball Slide-show and Mr.D´s characters

[ByHisBillowingBeard]

'Tis one flamboyant butt plug

[ronpepper]

Kudos to you on your toon though, overall it is remarkably well proportioned.

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If you look back up top, you see that even though Krystal has a big head, she’s not quite as tall as the other model. The discrepancy appears to originate in the height of her torso.The bottom matches up, but the top does not. Red lines indicate where her shoulders are below that of the model, even though she appears to be lifting her shoulders slightly because her trapezius region is invisible and her neck is short. Furthermore, cyan lines indicate where her chin is below the model's chin. Still, when I looked at your model zoomed out, it actually looks perfectly sexy and nicely proportioned, because a smaller torso really helps to accentuate her curves. But zooming out makes it difficult to spot how her feet just look too small. Small feet are just as unsexy as big feet. Overly long shins and knobby knees are too. Those are the details that I felt had to be addressed. There is no need to spend additional effort on the shoulders and neck, based on my judgment AND other responses to the thread. But I do see minor flaws there that exacerbate her small feet, because a slightly short torso make her feet look that much more "longish."

So, if you look at this now with bigger feet and slightly shortened shins, it gives you an idea I hope of what I meant.

[PatchPirate]

Gotta say, I quite like it. Only thing that I see that (I think) hasn't been mentioned is her lack of eyebrows. While a normal fox might not have eyebrows, seeing as she's anthropomorphic, she needs to be expressive.

[Zeus Kabob]

The breasts look better, definitely, and something I like to see when animated. Great work so far.

[Mr D]

@ ronpepper - Thanks a lot . Your advice helped me a lot. I will make sure to put it in good use.

[Digfree]

I find that during mid terms week, I like to procrastinate the most, and I work on more flash then any other time. and yeah, I was bored.

[Digfree]

P.S. I kinda wanted to try making her do a tit/blow job, but 2 things were missing.

1. her eyes are stuck looking at screen, while that is good sometimes, she should be focusing on whatever is in front of her.

2. no males that match her art style on here as far as I know. I could just do it with a cock I guess... but I am focusing on other projects atm.

[Digfree]

Oh god... I NEED TO STOP BEING BORED..... I am now making random avatars for random people e_e

[Mr D]

P.S. I kinda wanted to try making her do a tit/blow job, but 2 things were missing.

1. her eyes are stuck looking at screen, while that is good sometimes, she should be focusing on whatever is in front of her.

2. no males that match her art style on here as far as I know. I could just do it with a cock I guess... but I am focusing on other projects atm.

nice one. And yeah about the eyes. The truth is that I am working so that they can move but unfortunatly it is not good enough yet.

[haloman]

Oh god... I NEED TO STOP BEING BORED..... I am now making random avatars for random people e_e

Lol. Do you take requests Just kidding. But hey nice work!

[Digfree]

Oh god... I NEED TO STOP BEING BORED..... I am now making random avatars for random people e_e

Lol. Do you take requests Just kidding. But hey nice work!

Depends what it is, I am better at drawing some stuff then other. but I am good at making avatars. Just throw out a few ideas what you may want.

(I will only take request from people with 100 or more post)

[haloman]

Oh god... I NEED TO STOP BEING BORED..... I am now making random avatars for random people e_e

Lol. Do you take requests Just kidding. But hey nice work!

Depends what it is, I am better at drawing some stuff then other. but I am good at making avatars. Just throw out a few ideas what you may want.

(I will only take request from people with 100 or more post)

Sweet! Lol. Hmm... Heres an idea: How about Krystal with a halo above her head to signify my name? In a sexy pose of corse! Hows that sound? Pretty easy?

[Digfree]

I didn't know if you wanted a drawn one, or a sprite one from LOK. so pic your poison.

I didn't draw 2nd one, just added the halo

[haloman]

I love the first one. I Think ill take it! Its basicly exactly what i wanted

[Mr D]

Ok I tried to change the legs and animated the eye. I feel like I am not quiet there yet. And I forgot to fix the tail before submitiong it XD.

And one more thing. PINK - BECOUSE I AM WORKING WITH BLUE WAY TOO MUCH.

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[Zeus Kabob]

If we're making color changes here, I liked the black from Another Tail a lot. If the colors are being considered, that's a preference for me.

[ronpepper]

I like it Mr. D, keep on truckin'.

[trunks2585]

the only issue i have with the edit is while you shortened the foreleg, now the thigh is too long, if you're gonna shorten one, you gotta shorten the other. I think the best solution would be to take how much you took off the lower leg and remember that amount, restore the legs to what they were before, now take that amount i told you to remember and divide it in half. half of the reduction will go to the lower leg, and the other half to the thigh you see? Rather than chop it all from the bottom, split it up over the full leg.

I do like the larger feet and ankles.

[NailB]

I don't like the way calves are looking now, they seem elephant-ish and have unnatural flow, make their curves more graceful. Thighs (their front upper-middle region, specifically) seem to be pushed a bit too much outside, I think they conceal crotch a little too much. Thighs are also seem a bit too long compared to forelegs.
Otherwise, great job Mr D!

[Mr D]

If we're making color changes here, I liked the black from Another Tail a lot. If the colors are being considered, that's a preference for me.

Is this black enough?