Hentai: Peach's Untold Tale 3.48 (Nov 2/18) - HIATUS

[QuizmasterBos]

Yes he did. He missed it at first though, but he went back and got it. But what do you mean by 'misleading'?

You get near the chain chomp, it starts going crazy, Bowser says he'll handle it and it says something along the lines of "The two monsters stare deeply into each others eyes" and the chain chomp starts undulating and bowser tells mario if he could turn around for a moment.

Even as a kid, I was under the impression something naughty was going on until you turn around and find it's a weapon now.

I felt the Chain Chomp feels weak, having to be untied instead of breaking loose. She is a woman, so she might be some sort of feminist, so it would be degrading for her to see her getting untied by someone other than her boss. That's why Mario and we aren't allowed to see.

Haha, fun times. And Peach's ???. I'm guessing its panties, because if it were a diary, they would just say it. But it could be something worse xD

Oh yeah, the XXX. Some say it is her bra, but if you go in after Peach has appeared outside (when you brought her back to the castle) the grandmother says something that seems to fit more to a porn stash than underwear. But that's just my dirty mind.

[MPLDAM9919]

Haha, fun times. And Peach's ???. I'm guessing its panties, because if it were a diary, they would just say it. But it could be something worse xD

Oh yeah, the XXX. Some say it is her bra, but if you go in after Peach has appeared outside (when you brought her back to the castle) the grandmother says something that seems to fit more to a porn stash than underwear. But that's just my dirty mind.

I always thought it was a dildo. It makes sense that she doesn't want anyone to see it.

[CaptainFalcon9000]

^ my toughts exactly, i had always tought it was a Dildo.

[Ivan-Aedler]

I've got time and some enthusiasm.
So, after Mallow and Chain Chomps, I'm already finishing up BELOME. I will show him here soon.

EDIT: SO FAR

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[GeraldMason]

You know what would be a funny idea with those "spin-off story" ideas that's been thrown about?
Daisy's Mansion. Dunno why, but I find the idea hilarious.

[QuizmasterBos]

You know what would be a funny idea with those "spin-off story" ideas that's been thrown about?
Daisy's Mansion. Dunno why, but I find the idea hilarious.

You mean, a spin-off of Luigi's Mansion? How are you seeing this?

[Thatguy45]

I think I'm done with 'em all now.

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I think they turned out well again. I could not for the life of me, however, figure out a way to have an anal scene without it looking too much like the two doggystyle scenes. I also like how just changing the where the chain chomp's eyes are facing and being closed while cumming make it so much better looking.

I also made this while messing around. Good for a smile, at least.

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[Ivan-Aedler]

I think I'm done with 'em all now.

I like them all! Thank you!
Remember I need those in high quality in order for me/Blargh to make the scenes. Right now, I can't read the text at all.
I hope no animator will be upset, because if I start making scenes, well...nobody will make me stop (only God).
I might create more scenes for Pokeys but for sure CHAIN CHOMP SCENES is the way to go!

I also made this while messing around. Good for a smile, at least.

Hahaha! You silly! It should be ...cute if its a Luma, or a Toad (yes, an adult toad!). "Oh i need milk".

[Toyloli]

Okay, so this is gonna be a huge post. Be forwarned

Hey! I used to say the same thing. >____>
But honestly I guess all I'm trying to do is reduce negative feedback. When this game is done, we all know it will be posted everywhere and I hate the negative feedback. When GP (did you know his name was meant to say Go Repeat? but he had terrible english when he came?) posted his game, the negative comments made me want to kill them all. When I was in java class working on a new project, I kinda remebered the comments that were there and I honestly wanted to quit. I'm going over this not to please everyone but rather to be sure Ivan is pleased and to make him know that what he's doing is amazing. Of course my lack of help nowadays is making me want to help in almost anyway.

Asian. This is the Internet. There will ALWAYS be people making negative comments. I understand your desire to help and bringing this stuff to attention (snickers at the inadvertent joke) but Ivan has to make his game his way, and only think about the people who want it, not for the people who want something entirely different.

I dont think the solution is for a quick game. Rather, I remember someone mentioning. A level where enemies just spawn. No boss, no special scenes, no story. Just enemies that range from like world 1 and 2. Its easy, simple and will allow those who want to get it over with to get it over with. If that makes sense...It gives lazy players something to do and allows the ones who want the story to obtain their needs and all is happy

I was the one who came up with that.

Okay - so female voice of reason time.
I don't know about everyone else, but the current methodolgy I have when I play the game tends to work like this.
I personally Hate Galleries. As they feel stale. I think a lot of people do. When I play hentai games my typical method is to play through as basically a non-schlick run. Especially if the game has like, levelling and stats. As I play through I tend to save savegames near enemies that I like, then later when I'm in the shlicking mood I can simply load up the save game and play.

Having said this, as a great alternative to Galleries I have seen Horde Modes in games. Horde modes usually work on the idea of a single map of a reasonable size, inside which monsters spawn on the basis of "Defeat of this (these) monster(s), then a boss, defeat another bath, then a boss. Each time you get a boss you get a powerup, and of course your given the option like in a normal game to either fight or f@#k.

This was the method I proposed ages back, not as a new level necessarily but as a mode accessible easily from the main menu. Peach would be deposited in a map like the original mario maps, or some other alternative, and monsters would just start coming out in waves. up to 10 on the screen at any time, with new species appearing at intervals.

Friendly Chain Chomp: (phew, a bit of work adjusting that teeth).
What's that?
I'll check this.

Yeah, it looks much nicer but the problem wasn't the size of the teeth so much as their perceived sharpness. Remember in the design, you need to think "Will Peach find this Cute". I think the trick is this, you can make the teeth bigger if you want but try to make all the teeth the same size, not so that they get larger towards the front. Other than that, I LOVE his tongue. I can just imagine getting licked and slobbered over by that!

I've got time and some enthusiasm.
So, after Mallow and Chain Chomps, I'm already finishing up BELOME. I will show him here soon.

EDIT: SO FAR

Enemy - boss Belome.swf

Is it just me, or does he look puzzled over only having two eyes
I still think four eyes and no teeth looked cuter than two eyes. But then I think spiders are cute - so others may not agree with me.

[Thatguy45]

I think I'm done with 'em all now.

I like them all! Thank you!
Remember I need those in high quality in order for me/Blargh to make the scenes. Right now, I can't read the text at all.
I hope no animator will be upset, because if I start making scenes, well...nobody will make me stop (only God).
I might create more scenes for Pokeys but for sure CHAIN CHOMP SCENES is the way to go!

Thank you very much! I hate to ask though, because I'm probably missing something obvious, (though that's what happens when I'm sick), but what do you mean when you say "high quality"? Bigger pictures or bigger text?

I also made this while messing around. Good for a smile, at least.

Hahaha! You silly! It should be ...cute if its a Luma, or a Toad (yes, an adult toad!). "Oh i need milk".

Actually, it wasn't supposed to be young/child peach. It was just a tiny Peach, shrunken with a mushroom or something. I agree that a Luma would be cute there, especially if it was Rosalina (maybe an idea for her later on?)

[Ivan-Aedler]

Asian. This is the Internet. There will ALWAYS be people making negative comments. I understand your desire to help and bringing this stuff to attention (snickers at the inadvertent joke) but Ivan has to make his game his way, and only think about the people who want it, not for the people who want something entirely different.

I tried to make him understand since months ago. We WILL listen to people as always, but things like 'the game is slow", "I dont like it', 'its full of bugs', are too generic, and it sounds like a Flame War. And remember all info (and much more) is already in page 1.

Having said this, as a great alternative to Galleries I have seen Horde Modes in games. Horde modes usually work on the idea of a single map of a reasonable size, inside which monsters spawn on the basis of "Defeat of this (these) monster(s), then a boss, defeat another bath, then a boss. Each time you get a boss you get a powerup, and of course your given the option like in a normal game to either fight or f@#k.

I agree, but I still prefer a more elaborate level, like 'pipe maze' (actually its like those shortcuts between worlds, but bigger). Its a way to check new scenes and to...well...relieve him/herself faster
This would be accessible from the red pipe next to Peach Castle. It wont add score points, and it might throw powerups after some enemies. Maybe some boxes can be respawned.
In the future, I might also add some mouse holes with names, like Goomba Home, Shyguy Home... pressing the button there will spawn this enemy race.

Yeah, it looks much nicer but the problem wasn't the size of the teeth so much as their perceived sharpness. Remember in the design, you need to think "Will Peach find this Cute". I think the trick is this, you can make the teeth bigger if you want but try to make all the teeth the same size, not so that they get larger towards the front. Other than that, I LOVE his tongue. I can just imagine getting licked and slobbered over by that!

I will see if I can make the teeth the same size. As for the tongue, Wow! Nice to know I'm in the right path.

I still think four eyes and no teeth looked cuter than two eyes. But then I think spiders are cute - so others may not agree with me.

Well, nothing is final in regard to new enemies. I might make a poll about Belome: 2 or 4, with teath or without it.

Thank you very much! I hate to ask though, because I'm probably missing something obvious, (though that's what happens when I'm sick), but what do you mean when you say "high quality"? Bigger pictures or bigger text?

Bigger picture, in order for me to read the text (not sooo big).

Actually, it wasn't supposed to be young/child peach. It was just a tiny Peach, shrunken with a mushroom or something. I agree that a Luma would be cute there, especially if it was Rosalina (maybe an idea for her later on?)

I see no problem of using Luma of even a naked child Toad, provided there is no sexual scene, but I like the adult ones, they're cute already.

[Toyloli]

Throwing this in; Looking over the original artwork from the game and merchandise yea, this is where your getting lost.
Chain Chomps teeth are very straight line, not curved in any way. And while they're sharp they're all about the same size.

Also, I notice most of the official artwork the eye is nearly twice the size of what the one is in your's.


Edit; okay this might just be stupid. I was thinking we don't need to hide the Chain-chop's genitals outside of the sex scenes. That can be his attack. At intervals he will drop to the ground and a large squirt of cum will shoot out of his penis from the impact.

Peah: Aww, poor doggy has sore balls. I make it better

[CaptainFalcon9000]

i like the way you work on one enemy at a time, the only thing left for chain chomps is an anal scenes and that´ll be it, i don´t think it needs more than 4 scenes, but if ivan and the others want more then why not? if i´m not mistaken, the axem rangers were planed isn it?

[Thatguy45]

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[Thatguy45]

That can be his attack. At intervals he will drop to the ground and a large squirt of cum will shoot out of his penis from the impact.

Peah: Aww, poor doggy has sore balls. I make it better

I know I was the one that said they pretty much have metal balls, but that's just...horrifying in a way. I like what Peach said though.

[Ivan-Aedler]

Chain Chomps teeth are very straight line, not curved in any way. And while they're sharp they're all about the same size.

Its not nice to have sharp teeth for Peach :/ But for sure I'll make them equal in size.
Also, I plan a tender vore scene with this one (he swallows Peach up and spit her full of cum). Those creatures DONT have bad smelling things anyway.
ThatGuy can even make a scene based on this

Also, I notice most of the official artwork the eye is nearly twice the size of what the one is in your's.
Well, so far, I like the eye. Will a bigger eye be better?

Edit; okay this might just be stupid. I was thinking we don't need to hide the Chain-chop's genitals outside of the sex scenes. That can be his attack. At intervals he will drop to the ground and a large squirt of cum will shoot out of his penis from the impact.

Remember his balls are BALLS OF STEEL!

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It doesnt work here :/
After you upload it, I think LOK is resizing them, I dont know. You can PM me.

But if ivan and the others want more then why not? if i´m not mistaken, the axem rangers were planed isn it?

Almost certain. I cant tell when I'll be making them though.

[Toyloli]

Friendly Chain Chomp: (phew, a bit of work adjusting that teeth).

!!TODO - ChainChomp3.swf

I see what your doing, edited four times, one a little while ago and looking cuter, the change in the teeth shape have helped a lot.
He looks much sweeter now. And if you're going soft vore how about some partial, where he grabs her in his mouth, the teeth appear to vanish, and she's laying on his tongue (half of her body hanging out). Which would be wriggling and licking her, then when she's dropped to the ground she's covered in slobber

[Ivan-Aedler]

I see what your doing, edited four times, one a little while ago and looking cuter, the change in the teeth shape have helped a lot.
He looks much sweeter now. And if you're going soft vore how about some partial, where he grabs her in his mouth, the teeth appear to vanish, and she's laying on his tongue (half of her body hanging out). Which would be wriggling and licking her, then when she's dropped to the ground she's covered in slobber

Ohh nice to know you see I update the animations over time The entire thread is alive!
As for the soft vore, That should be interesting : ). As for teeth vanishing, I'll see what can be done but I dont feel its so necessary. His teeth is not sharp anymore. And he's mechanical anyway, a cute doggie for Peach, with meat parts too, like his dick and tongue

[Thatguy45]

Chain Chomps teeth are very straight line, not curved in any way. And while they're sharp they're all about the same size.

Its not nice to have sharp teeth for Peach :/ But for sure I'll make them equal in size.
Also, I plan a tender vore scene with this one (he swallows Peach up and spit her full of cum). Those creatures DONT have bad smelling things anyway.
ThatGuy can even make a scene based on this

Umm, okay? I can only try, but it would definitely have to be the biggest chain chomp, and I'm am not experienced in the ways of vore. In this case, is Peach getting swallowed completely, or only to the waist?

Bigger text and image! (As long as it's opened in a new tab or window).

It doesnt work here :/
After you upload it, I think LOK is resizing them, I dont know. You can PM me.

Will get to this later tonight

[Ivan-Aedler]

Umm, okay? I can only try, but it would definitely have to be the biggest chain chomp, and I'm am not experienced in the ways of vore. In this case, is Peach getting swallowed completely, or only to the waist?

Both cases! The completely in will be like one of the pics above I've send today (only one of her legs outside).
I think the voting poll will be definitive. I'll wait more days but I have the final word, as chomp sizes will impact the scenes.

Will get to this later tonight

Thank you! I'm a bit tired after creating three enemies in a row in less than 30 hours.