Mr.D's Krystal Ball Slide-show and Mr.D´s characters

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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby kuja » Mon Feb 14, 2011 2:04 am

Mr D Wrote:HA. Now seriousely who saw this coming?
pretty familiar curves ;D principally the neck, dunno where i saw it. lol
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby Zeus Kabob » Mon Feb 14, 2011 3:15 am

breast size is good, but the back one is too big.
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby Mr D » Mon Feb 14, 2011 8:18 pm

More boobs. So what do you think is it now better or worse. And I also threw in the model made by kuja witch I used to make this krystal model. (I was sort of hoping that someone would notice it sooner that it was made by kujas model :roll: , I mean lets face it, kujas models are the best things on this forum.)
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1 game (oh I mean story slideshow -_-) and 5 flash loop FINISHED...fuck yea
My mini flashes link : http://legendofkrystal.com/forum/viewto ... f=7&t=1972
Also I am working on a project right now.But remember, it's a secret to everybody >:D
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby ByHisBillowingBeard » Tue Feb 15, 2011 4:25 am

1. Looks like the breasts are 'connected' too high up, under the armpit. Although, thinking about it, this may be because of the size of the breasts.. The shape is better though, think a slight more feeling of gravity, acting on the perkiness, is necessary.

2. These only looks 'realistic' (i know, i know) if there was a bra or waspie or something acting on them.

I don't know how nit-picky I should be. Is there a polite amount?
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby Zeus Kabob » Tue Feb 15, 2011 4:33 am

Number 2, all the way. Back breast is still too big, though, I think.
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby Anonymous » Tue Feb 15, 2011 4:42 am

why doesntlok team use that liz girl
that ones one hundred times better
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby joeyjoey61297 » Thu Feb 17, 2011 1:23 am

two deffinatly
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby ronpepper » Fri Feb 18, 2011 2:37 am

paint-the-seconds Wrote:why doesntlok team use that liz girl
that ones one hundred times better


I dunno, just looks like a green human girl to me.
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby toddymon » Fri Feb 18, 2011 5:05 pm

ronpepper Wrote:
paint-the-seconds Wrote:why doesntlok team use that liz girl
that ones one hundred times better


I dunno, just looks like a green human girl to me.


Agreed. It has a mor detailed look about it but the face just doesn't do it for me. I also think that that one was once used by kuja but I cant remember.
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby Mr D » Wed Feb 23, 2011 8:32 pm

ok here is some progress. Still not finished but getting there. (I SO DONT KNOW HOW TO MAKE HAIR T_T)

Oh and toddymon you remember correctly :D . That liz girl is one of kujas models, i just wanted to show what I used to make my krystal model (if you look at the model there is BY KUJA over it ;) )
1 game (oh I mean story slideshow -_-) and 5 flash loop FINISHED...fuck yea
My mini flashes link : http://legendofkrystal.com/forum/viewto ... f=7&t=1972
Also I am working on a project right now.But remember, it's a secret to everybody >:D
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby ICE » Wed Feb 23, 2011 9:34 pm

Either way it looks great, including the hair.
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby Caranaga » Thu Feb 24, 2011 6:59 am

I think the hair looks good though personally i'd like it longer, thats just me
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby Mr D » Sat Feb 26, 2011 3:58 pm

Ok here is some progress. All that I need to do now is to make a model for the back hand and shadow the tail.
1 game (oh I mean story slideshow -_-) and 5 flash loop FINISHED...fuck yea
My mini flashes link : http://legendofkrystal.com/forum/viewto ... f=7&t=1972
Also I am working on a project right now.But remember, it's a secret to everybody >:D
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby Mr D » Sat Feb 26, 2011 8:27 pm

And here is the finished version (for now). If you want then I can upload the .fla for this.
So how will this model help the Lok project you ask? .....most likely it wont. But if anyone feels like using something from this than you are free to use it :D .
(but I still think that I should work on her hair)
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Also I am working on a project right now.But remember, it's a secret to everybody >:D
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby PetRex » Sat Feb 26, 2011 10:09 pm

Keep it up, bro. This model keeps getting better and better!!! My thoughts, as of now are that the left hand's fingers look too segmented, perhaps shortening the seperating lines would help. As for teh body, i think to match it up with the tail's furryness, u should apply the same type of furryness to edges of limbs and stuff, like elbows and knees, as well as the tufts of fur hanging off her cheeks. Other than that, I want ur skills.
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby Zeus Kabob » Sat Feb 26, 2011 10:39 pm

Or just making the lines more similar to the shade of blue used in the hands.
Also, lines in the skin could indicate fur as well. (I'm just going for differing views on the modifications PetRex suggested)
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby HolyPaladin » Sat Feb 26, 2011 10:41 pm

Yo, I've noticed this alot, the Tail looks like its backwards :l
Boom... nuff' said.
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby Mr D » Sat Feb 26, 2011 11:10 pm

HolyPaladin Wrote:Yo, I've noticed this alot, the Tail looks like its backwards :l


You are right. Since I did this model with playshapes tail model as an example, so I left the colors for the tail as they were. Changing that is not really a problem but I wanted to see how people will react to it.

oh and btw I edited the lines on the back hand, It should look better now (changed the color)




.....I´ll do something about the furryness.
1 game (oh I mean story slideshow -_-) and 5 flash loop FINISHED...fuck yea
My mini flashes link : http://legendofkrystal.com/forum/viewto ... f=7&t=1972
Also I am working on a project right now.But remember, it's a secret to everybody >:D
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby Zeus Kabob » Sat Feb 26, 2011 11:26 pm

Hey, is there a way to paint a texture instead of a color? If so, you could paint "fur texture" (black lines interspersed) on the character, and it would take the strain out of drawing thousands of little black lines.
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby Mr D » Sat Feb 26, 2011 11:43 pm

Zeus Kabob Wrote:Hey, is there a way to paint a texture instead of a color? If so, you could paint "fur texture" (black lines interspersed) on the character, and it would take the strain out of drawing thousands of little black lines.


Well it is possible but if I do it like that but the quality tends to drop if I draw in textures. And the model might become hard to edit or change leter on.
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1 game (oh I mean story slideshow -_-) and 5 flash loop FINISHED...fuck yea
My mini flashes link : http://legendofkrystal.com/forum/viewto ... f=7&t=1972
Also I am working on a project right now.But remember, it's a secret to everybody >:D
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