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Re: MiM: Peach's Untold Tale 1.9.2 (feb 26/13)

Postby nemoudeis » Wed Feb 27, 2013 4:33 pm

Hello again,
When Peach fucks goombas, it's always the same sex scene which is shown (the first you're supposed to get), except when Peach fucks sleeping goombas. This bug appears whatever your clothes are but doesn't apply to koopas; however, when you try to fuck sleeping koopas, the game freezes and you can see the following balloon text (written in red):
"Use this Balloon in areas of the scene that you need the user to press SPACE to continue. This balloon won't be shown".
Something else (not very important) : when you run to go and talk with the chancelor, you can hear the sound of your steps during the whole conversation (while you're not moving).
I didn't change any options and I'm using Mozilla.
Excuse my English, I'm French.
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Re: MiM: Peach's Untold Tale 1.9.2 (feb 26/13)

Postby Ivan-Aedler » Wed Feb 27, 2013 4:36 pm

nemoudeis Wrote:Hello again,
When Peach fucks goombas, it's always the same sex scene which is shown (the first you're supposed to get), except when Peach fucks sleeping goombas. This bug appears whatever your clothes are but doesn't apply to koopas; however, when you try to fuck sleeping koopas, the game freezes and you can see the following balloon text (written in red):
"Use this Balloon in areas of the scene that you need the user to press SPACE to continue. This balloon won't be shown".

Hmmmmmmmmmm......I'll check this.

nemoudeis Wrote:Something else (not very important) : when you run to go and talk with the chancelor, you can hear the sound of your steps during the whole conversation (while you're not moving).
I didn't change any options and I'm using Mozilla.

Ok I'll check. Thanks for the reports!
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Re: MiM: Peach's Untold Tale 1.9.2 (feb 26/13)

Postby Biles » Wed Feb 27, 2013 5:02 pm

Sup LOL. I haven't disappeared quite yet, still working on Peach's anatomy. While I did make some progress, there is still more work to be done.

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I could've redone her lower legs, but there's an issue of whether or not I should break her feet apart to be independent from her legs. Most of the rework was done on her head as that had many details and in the process, I had to bork parts of the animation and have yet to apply the changes to the burned Peach version as well.
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Re: MiM: Peach's Untold Tale 1.9.2 (feb 26/13)

Postby Ivan-Aedler » Wed Feb 27, 2013 5:32 pm

Biles Wrote:Sup LOL. I haven't disappeared quite yet, still working on Peach's anatomy. While I did make some progress, there is still more work to be done.

Hey, how are you?
Short answer for her : Except her head, everything is NICE and YUMMY ;) I like her hips, really! Her hair is also closer to the original.
As for the head....something very wrong there.

1. Her hair in front of her forehead is ...a bit or too flat.
2. Her nose is....too pointy/strange. Her nose arch too.
3. Her mouth is... too 'Pauline' like (??!)
4. Her eyes...no commends, lol.
5. Her cheeks/face shape is a bit squared, I think its due to her chin.

Other than this, really, nice job!
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Re: MiM: Peach's Untold Tale 1.9.2 (feb 26/13)

Postby Biles » Wed Feb 27, 2013 5:37 pm

I know, I can't get it right still. At one time I did, but I'm thinking of looking back at PlayShape's original form. Are we planning to sever her feet to work independently?
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Re: MiM: Peach's Untold Tale 1.9.2 (feb 26/13)

Postby QuizmasterBos » Wed Feb 27, 2013 5:38 pm

Biles Wrote:Sup LOL. I haven't disappeared quite yet, still working on Peach's anatomy. While I did make some progress, there is still more work to be done.

peachprogress.png

I could've redone her lower legs, but there's an issue of whether or not I should break her feet apart to be independent from her legs. Most of the rework was done on her head as that had many details and in the process, I had to bork parts of the animation and have yet to apply the changes to the burned Peach version as well.

I know it isn't done yet, but I'd like to show you my thoughts on it. Prepare, this isn't going to be pretty.

Not too fond of her face, I have to say.
Eyes are too big (it's mostly the height of them), her mouth looks off (I can't really place why that is), I think her head's shape has changed too (and it looks a little weird).
Her crown is placed too much forward, it shouldn't be tilted, but it should be placed mostly flat, like in every Peach picture.

I like your attempt at making Peach's new hair, but it doesn't look exactly like Peach's. It feels a tiny bit too long and it is incredibly asymmetrical. Peach's hair is almost perfectly symmetrical, as you can see in this picture:
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Her right arm (the one behind her back) is now impossibly placed. If you look at where her shoulder is, you can see that the arm would have to look inhuman. It would be much lengthier and it would have an odd curve. That is because the hands are placed at about the same X-position, but her right shoulder is placed much more forward than her left. So you either need to make a perfect profile (meaning Peach's body would be seen from the side in a similar way her head is placed now) or you need to make her arm not entirely visible in the little gap between her left arm and her torso. And her right hand would probably need to jut out more than her left as well.

Now, speaking of her torso, that is way too thin. I know Peach has a very slim figure, but this is too much. Her pelvis would snap, considering the weight she has to carry.
Peach's body is more 'plump', I guess? Here is a picture to show what I mean:
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Lastly, around her genital regions. The way her right leg looks there is just odd. I know it is somewhat in the original too, but I found it very noticeable here.

Anyway, just to say, good job and please continue, but you still got a ways to go.
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Re: MiM: Peach's Untold Tale 1.9.2 (feb 26/13)

Postby Ivan-Aedler » Wed Feb 27, 2013 5:52 pm

I like her body in its current form. Thats IMHO. Only the head needs adjustments. And maybe the hair proportions and some shadowing.
I can even say that, once the new peach model is compatible in size (you know her hips/body can be equal or less to accomodate clothes), and cutier, it could be in the game as a new character.

Biles Wrote:I know, I can't get it right still. At one time I did, but I'm thinking of looking back at PlayShape's original form. Are we planning to sever her feet to work independently?

Possible, but you need to split it in a way her legs still retain the same registration point (that is, you just erase the feet part). So its just a mater to edit all animations , including her two feet.
So I'll only ADD two feet, instead of rearranging her legs too. You can use the current model, but I just ask if possible to make the adaptations (like a curvy end, like 'HEW' areas, in a way I can move them smoothly). This will need all outfits to follow that new curvy area.
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Re: MiM: Peach's Untold Tale 1.9.2 (feb 26/13)

Postby QuizmasterBos » Wed Feb 27, 2013 7:08 pm

Ivan-Aedler Wrote:I like her body in its current form. Thats IMHO. Only the head needs adjustments. And maybe the hair proportions and some shadowing.
I can even say that, once the new peach model is compatible in size (you know her hips/body can be equal or less to accomodate clothes), and cutier, it could be in the game as a new character.

I feel that her body could use some updating as well. Especially that right arm, it just doesn't connect to the shoulder properly. And I'd like to see a bit more waist for Peach, she isn't an anime character... or Jessica Rabbit.
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Re: MiM: Peach's Untold Tale 1.9.2 (feb 26/13)

Postby yhgghdg » Wed Feb 27, 2013 7:32 pm

hey guys you should make it so peach can get pregnant and like birth goomba bomb ombs and such and use them as minions or something it would be really cool
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Re: MiM: Peach's Untold Tale 1.9.2 (feb 26/13)

Postby demonteddybear13 » Wed Feb 27, 2013 7:40 pm

Just for a quick heads up. Save option has stopped working.
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Re: MiM: Peach's Untold Tale 1.9.2 (feb 26/13)

Postby Biles » Wed Feb 27, 2013 7:57 pm

Actually, I didn't really change much on the torso except to make it cleaner by eliminate too many anchor points. That pic of Peach from the Super Peach Princess game, you think you can find a side view of her by any chance? I couldn't find one for the life of me. I find it unusual that redoing her face has been the most difficult part. Normally this wouldn't have been an issue for me but apparently her head has been troublesome and uncooperative LOL.
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Re: MiM: Peach's Untold Tale 1.9.2 (feb 26/13)

Postby QuizmasterBos » Wed Feb 27, 2013 8:23 pm

Biles Wrote:Actually, I didn't really change much on the torso except to make it cleaner by eliminate too many anchor points. That pic of Peach from the Super Peach Princess game, you think you can find a side view of her by any chance? I couldn't find one for the life of me. I find it unusual that redoing her face has been the most difficult part. Normally this wouldn't have been an issue for me but apparently her head has been troublesome and uncooperative LOL.

I have tried finding some pictures in side view myself before, but I couldn't find one either.

Now, I have an idea and it might work.
I have Super Smash Bros Brawl and it has a screenshot function with SD card support. So what I can do, is make some pictures, put them on the SD and see if I can get them on the computer. Then I can send them to you. My Wii mote is empty right now, so you'll have to bear with me for a bit.
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Re: MiM: Peach's Untold Tale 1.9.2 (feb 26/13)

Postby Adler18 » Wed Feb 27, 2013 8:58 pm

"Game below. Next update around FEB 30."
that day does not exist in our world
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Re: MiM: Peach's Untold Tale 1.9.2 (feb 26/13)

Postby Residentlover2 » Wed Feb 27, 2013 9:06 pm

the new peach looks more mature i really like it .... ;) great job
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Re: MiM: Peach's Untold Tale 1.9.2 (feb 26/13)

Postby Keirn » Wed Feb 27, 2013 9:52 pm

Not sure if it has been brought up in the mound of comments already, but how come whenever I save my game and come back to it another day the data is erased and I have to start again?
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Re: MiM: Peach's Untold Tale 1.9.2 (feb 26/13)

Postby Destrocto » Wed Feb 27, 2013 9:55 pm

No I don't know the meaning of the word dumb in the context of that situation sadly.
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Re: MiM: Peach's Untold Tale 1.9.2 (feb 26/13)

Postby EnderX » Wed Feb 27, 2013 9:56 pm

Adler18 Wrote:"Game below. Next update around FEB 30."
that day does not exist in our world


LOL just realized this.
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Re: MiM: Peach's Untold Tale 1.9.2 (feb 26/13)

Postby Biles » Wed Feb 27, 2013 10:16 pm

QuizmasterBos Wrote:So what I can do, is make some pictures, put them on the SD and see if I can get them on the computer. Then I can send them to you.

Alright, I'll look forward to that then.
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Re: MiM: Peach's Untold Tale 1.9.2 (feb 26/13)

Postby Ivan-Aedler » Wed Feb 27, 2013 10:47 pm

Adler18 Wrote:"Game below. Next update around FEB 30."
that day does not exist in our world

But in mushroom kingdom, yes :D

yhgghdg Wrote:hey guys you should make it so peach can get pregnant and like birth goomba bomb ombs and such and use them as minions or something it would be really cool

Already discussed. Please use the search function. I think you will like it, too many ideas and even a poll was cast.

demonteddybear13 Wrote:Just for a quick heads up. Save option has stopped working.

Going to check now!
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Re: MiM: Peach's Untold Tale 1.9.2 (feb 26/13)

Postby Knight Cream » Wed Feb 27, 2013 11:10 pm

Biles the new Peach looks awesome!

Lovin those legs. I also see what Quiz is talkin about though. I think i know why it appears thin. It looks like compared to the current one it's missing that gradual rib line from the top down into the belly bump curve. And the lack of the belly bump and ribs is creating a valley. Just pointing it out, i could be wrong cuz the wrists block out that part, but the overall curve suggests its just one valley curve. And the new awesome voluptuous legs increase that sense of space. The red line in the picture just shows the alignment of the stomach to the legs as a comparison, I even gave the current one a a little breathing room from the red line, that''s not really the important thing though, its just to show what the lack of the belly bump creates. I like the new alignment, but maybe a belly bump and a more gradual concave rib line might help in some way. That's just my two cents, if Ivan likes it better the new way, keep it haha.
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