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Re: MiM: Peach's Untold Tale 1.9 (feb 17/13)

Postby Ivan-Aedler » Wed Feb 20, 2013 9:51 pm

LuftMallow Wrote:Currently I'm working on a revamp of the Yoshi outfit I made awhile ago that's in Blargh's version. It's too much like the raccoon suit for my taste right now, and I really want to make the Yoshi head part look right

Nice one, LM! I will PM you.

Eyes - Experiment #2.

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Re: MiM: Peach's Untold Tale 1.9 (feb 17/13)

Postby QuizmasterBos » Wed Feb 20, 2013 10:47 pm

Ivan-Aedler Wrote:Eyes - Experiment #2.

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We can also try using Zone's infamous flash as a reference. Here is a pic: (WARNING: Rampant fapping imminent)
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1 - Bowser Koopa Princess_Peach Super_Mario_Bros. Zone.jpg

And here is a more full body pic, made by someone else I believe. The eye color is off in this one,use the other one.
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401836 - Princess_Peach Super_Mario_Bros. Zone.png


GIF of the flash:
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8 - Bowser Koopa Princess_Peach Super_Mario_Bros. Super_Princess_Peach Zone animated.gif
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And the pay-off (Lesser quality):
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16322 - Bowser Koopa Princess_Peach Super_Mario_Bros. Super_Princess_Peach Zone animated.gif
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Re: MiM: Peach's Untold Tale 1.9 (feb 17/13)

Postby Ivan-Aedler » Wed Feb 20, 2013 10:52 pm

Peach experiment #3! ORIGINAL MIM PUT Peach in the center!

peach experiment 3.png

QuizmasterBos Wrote:We can also try using Zone's infamous flash as a reference. Here is a pic: (WARNING: Rampant fapping imminent)

If you 'de-tilt' this pic, or just look at the pic 2, in a deep way, you will notice her eyes are awkward, big and ...strange.

What makes her beautiful is the face. But that gradient-tender red (GRATER) blushing appears better , dont you think? ;) I can experiment that blushing.
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Re: MiM: Peach's Untold Tale 1.9 (feb 17/13)

Postby QuizmasterBos » Wed Feb 20, 2013 11:16 pm

Ivan-Aedler Wrote:Peach experiment #3!

peach experiment 3.png

QuizmasterBos Wrote:We can also try using Zone's infamous flash as a reference. Here is a pic: (WARNING: Rampant fapping imminent)

If you 'de-tilt' this pic, or just look at the pic 2, in a deep way, you will notice her eyes are awkward, big and ...strange.

What makes her beautiful is the face. But that gradient-tender red (GRATER) blushing appears better , dont you think? ;) I can experiment that blushing.

Maybe her eyes ARE a bit strange. But the blushing and colortones overall look fantastic. I'd love to see you experiment with that.
The hair looks great too, can you experiment with that as well?
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Re: MiM: Peach's Untold Tale 1.9 (feb 17/13)

Postby Ivan-Aedler » Wed Feb 20, 2013 11:20 pm

Please see the new three pics above!

QuizmasterBos Wrote:The hair looks great too, can you experiment with that as well?

A total overhaul? Front bangs?
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Re: MiM: Peach's Untold Tale 1.9 (feb 17/13)

Postby QuizmasterBos » Wed Feb 20, 2013 11:34 pm

Ivan-Aedler Wrote:Please see the new three pics above!

Hmm... I seem to like the third one the best. The darker pupils seem to be working out. But all of them are pretty much equally good. Can you put the original up so it is easier to compare?

Ivan-Aedler Wrote:
QuizmasterBos Wrote:The hair looks great too, can you experiment with that as well?

A total overhaul? Front bangs?

Yes. The back is the most important, but I feel the front bangs can use some updating as well.
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Re: MiM: Peach's Untold Tale 1.9 (feb 17/13)

Postby Ivan-Aedler » Wed Feb 20, 2013 11:48 pm

QuizmasterBos Wrote:Hmm... I seem to like the third one the best. The darker pupils seem to be working out. But all of them are pretty much equally good. Can you put the original up so it is easier to compare?

Ok! See it again, 5 peaches above!

QuizmasterBos Wrote:The hair looks great too, can you experiment with that as well?Yes. The back is the most important, but I feel the front bangs can use some updating as well.

You say, two kinds of back? Default Peach and sports Peach? As for the back, like this?

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Re: MiM: Peach's Untold Tale 1.9 (feb 17/13)

Postby QuizmasterBos » Wed Feb 20, 2013 11:57 pm

Ivan-Aedler Wrote:
QuizmasterBos Wrote:Hmm... I seem to like the third one the best. The darker pupils seem to be working out. But all of them are pretty much equally good. Can you put the original up so it is easier to compare?

Ok! See it again, 5 peaches above!

Well, the right-most one is horrible, remove that please. The others seem a bit less good by comparison. Nothing screams perfect. That might also be because of the lips. It looks like we have to go for a complete make-over here.

Ivan-Aedler Wrote:
QuizmasterBos Wrote:The hair looks great too, can you experiment with that as well?Yes. The back is the most important, but I feel the front bangs can use some updating as well.

You say, two kinds of back? Default Peach and sports Peach? As for the back, like this?

Left one fits the hair the best. Here is the front side view from Super Princess Peach as a good comparison as well. I can't find a good back shot though.
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Even though the back isn't all that visible, you can see how her hair curves. Can you draw that? (Don't pay too much attention to the face, it isn't that great honestly)
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Re: MiM: Peach's Untold Tale 1.9 (feb 17/13)

Postby Ivan-Aedler » Thu Feb 21, 2013 12:00 am

QuizmasterBos Wrote:Well, the right-most one is horrible, remove that please. The others seem a bit less good by comparison. Nothing screams perfect. That might also be because of the lips. It looks like we have to go for a complete make-over here.

Please see it again now!

QuizmasterBos Wrote:Left one fits the hair the best. Here is the front side view from Super Princess Peach as a good comparison as well. I can't find a good back shot though.
Even though the back isn't all that visible, you can see how her hair curves. Can you draw that? (Don't pay too much attention to the face, it isn't that great honestly)

I can try. But low priority.
I'm exausted right now, and I'll do other priorities.
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Re: MiM: Peach's Untold Tale 1.9 (feb 17/13)

Postby QuizmasterBos » Thu Feb 21, 2013 12:08 am

Ivan-Aedler Wrote:
QuizmasterBos Wrote:Well, the right-most one is horrible, remove that please. The others seem a bit less good by comparison. Nothing screams perfect. That might also be because of the lips. It looks like we have to go for a complete make-over here.

Please see it again now!

I like the fourth one the best still, but keep the second one around. Fifth one still looks bad.

Ivan-Aedler Wrote:
QuizmasterBos Wrote:Left one fits the hair the best. Here is the front side view from Super Princess Peach as a good comparison as well. I can't find a good back shot though.
Even though the back isn't all that visible, you can see how her hair curves. Can you draw that? (Don't pay too much attention to the face, it isn't that great honestly)

I can try. But low priority.
I'm exhausted right now, and I'll do other priorities.

Understandable, keep yourself well-rested and do something fun. Instead of coding you can be doing research (playing SMRPG).
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Re: MiM: Peach's Untold Tale 1.9 (feb 17/13)

Postby coolness32 » Thu Feb 21, 2013 1:41 am

Ivan-Aedler Wrote:Peach experiment #3! ORIGINAL MIM PUT Peach in the center!

peach experiment 3.png


I like the second, first then fourth.
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Re: MiM: Peach's Untold Tale 1.9 (feb 17/13)

Postby Axel » Thu Feb 21, 2013 1:58 am

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Re: MiM: Peach's Untold Tale 1.9 (feb 17/13)

Postby MPLDAM9919 » Thu Feb 21, 2013 3:08 am

Ivan-Aedler Wrote:Peach experiment #3! ORIGINAL MIM PUT Peach in the center!

peach experiment 3.png


I like the first and second ones. As well as the original. The fifth one creeps me out. Don't use that.
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Re: MiM: Peach's Untold Tale 1.9 (feb 17/13)

Postby QuizmasterBos » Thu Feb 21, 2013 3:23 am

MPLDAM9919 Wrote:
Ivan-Aedler Wrote:Peach experiment #3! ORIGINAL MIM PUT Peach in the center!

peach experiment 3.png


I like the first and second ones. As well as the original. The fifth one creeps me out. Don't use that.

I begin liking the first one and second one more as well. But I can't decide. It's as if they keep changing the more you look at them.
Also, I've noticed they are all looking upwards. We'd be needing a more neutral view to decide. I do think the experimental eyes (except 5) look better than the comparison.
Honestly, she seems to be getting a more vague look on her face, as if she is not entirely conscious.

Next up would be mouths maybe? Or hair?
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Re: MiM: Peach's Untold Tale 1.9 (feb 17/13)

Postby MPLDAM9919 » Thu Feb 21, 2013 3:25 am

QuizmasterBos Wrote:
MPLDAM9919 Wrote:
Ivan-Aedler Wrote:Peach experiment #3! ORIGINAL MIM PUT Peach in the center!

peach experiment 3.png


I like the first and second ones. As well as the original. The fifth one creeps me out. Don't use that.

I begin liking the first one and second one more as well. But I can't decide. It's as if they keep changing the more you look at them.
Also, I've noticed they are all looking upwards. We'd be needing a more neutral view to decide. I do think the experimental eyes (except 5) look better than the comparison.
Honestly, she seems to be getting a more vague look on her face, as if she is not entirely conscious.

Next up would be mouths maybe? Or hair?

I thought hair was covered and done with.
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Re: MiM: Peach's Untold Tale 1.9 (feb 17/13)

Postby Smeardy Bro » Thu Feb 21, 2013 3:25 am

MPLDAM9919 Wrote:
Ivan-Aedler Wrote:Peach experiment #3! ORIGINAL MIM PUT Peach in the center!

peach experiment 3.png


The fifth one creeps me out. Don't use that.

wat ?no !use it ! i want Peach to see my hairy nipples ! :o
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Re: MiM: Peach's Untold Tale 1.9 (feb 17/13)

Postby QuizmasterBos » Thu Feb 21, 2013 3:34 am

MPLDAM9919 Wrote:I thought hair was covered and done with.

Her haircut in MiM PUT hardly resembles the actual hairstyle from the Mario games. The original PlayShapes model comes much closer. That might be a reason why people want the Playshapes model back. Even so, the hair can use an update. This frizzy eighties-like hairstyle just doesn't befit a princess.
Especially seeing how she has a well-known haircut as she can be easily recognized by it.
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Re: MiM: Peach's Untold Tale 1.9 (feb 17/13)

Postby Ivan-Aedler » Thu Feb 21, 2013 4:54 am

QuizmasterBos Wrote:Her haircut in MiM PUT hardly resembles the actual hairstyle from the Mario games. The original PlayShapes model comes much closer. That might be a reason why people want the Playshapes model back. Even so, the hair can use an update. This frizzy eighties-like hairstyle just doesn't befit a princess.
Especially seeing how she has a well-known haircut as she can be easily recognized by it.

The hair uses some of Paper Peach hair as inspiration. But I am thinking here of a way to change hairstyles (ponytail), then we can use the PS hair on the new peach, and the contrary too.
I'll be putting here more faces with neutral eyes.
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Re: MiM: Peach's Untold Tale 1.9 (feb 17/13)

Postby coolness32 » Thu Feb 21, 2013 5:02 am

Ivan-Aedler Wrote:
QuizmasterBos Wrote:Her haircut in MiM PUT hardly resembles the actual hairstyle from the Mario games. The original PlayShapes model comes much closer. That might be a reason why people want the Playshapes model back. Even so, the hair can use an update. This frizzy eighties-like hairstyle just doesn't befit a princess.
Especially seeing how she has a well-known haircut as she can be easily recognized by it.

The hair uses some of Paper Peach hair as inspiration. But I am thinking here of a way to change hairstyles (ponytail).
I'll be putting here more faces with neutral eyes.


I like the idea of changing hairstyles! You've thought of Ponytail, how about pigtails? 80's side ponytail? There are lots of options if you are willing to give her hairstyles that change her hair drastically, like shorter hair. These are all just ideas of course, Peach's normal hairstyle is fine with me to be the only one in the game!
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Re: MiM: Peach's Untold Tale 1.9 (feb 17/13)

Postby Ivan-Aedler » Thu Feb 21, 2013 6:51 am

Updated Peach models (same eye position). Who is cutier?

peach experiment 3.png

peach experiment 4.jpg

I still prefer the current one (in the middle).

coolness32 Wrote:I like the idea of changing hairstyles! You've thought of Ponytail, how about pigtails? 80's side ponytail? There are lots of options if you are willing to give her hairstyles that change her hair drastically, like shorter hair. These are all just ideas of course, Peach's normal hairstyle is fine with me to be the only one in the game!

Do you have any picture as a reference of possible hair styles to be added? (blonde, of course)
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