Mr.D's Krystal Ball Slide-show and Mr.D´s characters

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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby Mr D » Thu Jan 06, 2011 8:10 pm

KaTsuO_O Wrote:
Mr D Wrote:becouse i know next to nothing about scripts means that I cant make the mask come off and on as I wish :cry: .....yet 8-)


Do you use Action script 2.0 or 3.0? I can help you if you does use 2.0.


I have Flash C4 and as far as I know it has both Action script 2.0 and 3.0.
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby KaTsuO_O » Thu Jan 06, 2011 8:27 pm

Mr D Wrote:
KaTsuO_O Wrote:
Mr D Wrote:becouse i know next to nothing about scripts means that I cant make the mask come off and on as I wish :cry: .....yet 8-)


Do you use Action script 2.0 or 3.0? I can help you if you does use 2.0.


I have Flash C4 and as far as I know it has both Action script 2.0 and 3.0.


I would not recomend you to learn as2 if you want to learn as3 but if you dont really care then i could help you. Can you please post you flashfile so i can take a look at it.
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby Mr D » Fri Jan 07, 2011 12:39 am

Here is my progress so far. It is still not finished as you can see but .......yeah. This is what I got so far....... you might have to zoom in.
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby KaTsuO_O » Fri Jan 07, 2011 1:10 am

Is it that you want to be able to remove mask with a code?
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby Mr D » Fri Jan 07, 2011 1:21 am

KaTsuO_O Wrote:Is it that you want to be able to remove mask with a code?


Yeah. I want to know how to remove pieces of clothes or change them (like in Lok or Samus Template viewtopic.php?f=7&t=539&start=360#p14580 ). I have a model of Zephyrmon nude and without the mask but I dont know how to change it with just a "click of a button" (leteraly)
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby KaTsuO_O » Fri Jan 07, 2011 1:54 am

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This is the code that i did put in to the button symbol and im going to explain it as good as i know.

(I did make all the symbols to one symbol caled "zep")

on(release) {
zep.mask.nextFrame();
}



on(release) {

when you have released the button the action line under will be activated



zep.mask.nextFrame();

"zep" is the instance name for the character "mask" is the mask that is inside the character symbol and "nextFrame();" means jump to next frame. So inside "zep" we got "mask" which is going to jump to the next frame after we release the button = the code. When i mean jump to next frame i mean it jumps to next frame inside it self.



Inside the mask there is three frames which all contain the code stop(); which makes it dont play. The mask is on the first frame but the scond frame is just blank and on the last frame i got a code:

gotoAndPlay(1);

this makes so when you have pressed the button two times it goes back to frame one inside the mask because the nextframe(); code makes it goes on frame and stop.



If we want the mask to me inside the head instead inside of only inside of "zep" the code would look like this:

on(release) {
zep.head.mask.nextFrame();
}




hope you understand what im saying and also will be able to use this knowledge.
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby Mr D » Fri Jan 07, 2011 4:17 pm

Thanks a lot KaTsuO_O . You really helped :D
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby KaTsuO_O » Fri Jan 07, 2011 4:33 pm

Your welcome. If you have anything other you would like to have help with ask me.
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby Boomer » Sat Jan 08, 2011 3:36 am

Mr D Wrote:
swirls Wrote:I think would personally prefer Ammy as a wolf (anthro), but I guess it's really your decision since you're the one making these things.
Could you make it so that Zephyrmon's mask is optional or removable?

I JUST realized you're the same guy who started the LoK futa-version thread too; were you planning on making any herm/futa characters here?


1. About Ammy - I am not sure if I will make her human or anthro :? . It depends on how much fanart of her will I be able to find becouse I cant start making her if I dont have enough source material.

2. As far as Zephyrmon goes I have both versions with and without mask :D BUT becouse i know next to nothing about scripts means that I cant make the mask come off and on as I wish :cry: .....yet 8-)
(I have most of the model done but it still needs some refining)

3. Right now I dont plan to make any futa characters here :| .

Hope that answered all your questions :D


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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby Mr D » Sun Jan 09, 2011 4:51 pm

I totaly forgot that I still had this one


Its a me MARIO (unfinished)
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby Vyksen » Fri Jan 28, 2011 3:10 pm

Ahhh. More digimon.
I've missed out so much since I was gone. Haha. This is pretty cool!
Be awesome to see a Duskmon. Js.
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby Reaver » Wed Feb 02, 2011 6:36 am

it looks pretty good although its missing a arm but u knew that already
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby Mr D » Sat Feb 12, 2011 4:56 pm

HA. Now seriousely who saw this coming?
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby trunks2585 » Sat Feb 12, 2011 7:14 pm

she's a bit on the lanky side. The forelegs are too long, and something seems off about the breasts but it's not a bad start.
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby wizard » Sun Feb 13, 2011 3:49 am

trunks2585 Wrote:she's a bit on the lanky side. The forelegs are too long, and something seems off about the breasts but it's not a bad start.


I think they are facing too far right on her torso. Also objects in the foreground tend to appear larger, so her left breast might be out of proportion. Animation looks fluid though.
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby Darek » Sun Feb 13, 2011 3:51 am

Her right breast looks wrong because the breast seems to be attached beginning at the side of her ribs. Or in other words, look at your side; then imagine that the start of your imaginary breast begins at the middle of your side. Now look at porn and at the female breast.

And I would have to agree she looks rather lanky. Especially her lack of hamstrings (i.e. the 'behind' section of her legs are straight...she lacks muscles there). Understandably this is a cartoon so it shouldn't be exactly anatomy-correct. However I think a slightly bit more bulk would help out.
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby ByHisBillowingBeard » Sun Feb 13, 2011 4:13 am

The ass needs work. the.....#checks# left buttock, most certainly, is too angular. Needs that delicious feminine curve to it ;) --fact it's a draft is noted--
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby Mr D » Sun Feb 13, 2011 6:17 pm

Here are some minor changes I did. But I still cand get the shape of the breasts right :(
1 game (oh I mean story slideshow -_-) and 5 flash loop FINISHED...fuck yea
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby bed_intruder » Sun Feb 13, 2011 6:40 pm

Mr D Wrote:Here are some minor changes I did. But I still cand get the shape of the breasts right :(
Raise the breasts a bit. I think the problem is that they look too saggy, they should look better perky and less big
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby ronpepper » Sun Feb 13, 2011 7:03 pm

Looks real good! Number one, the proportions are very good. I wouldn't mind the breasts staying where they are, although you could nudge them up a few pixels and that would be good too. I'd really put a little more mass into her calves and a little curve into her hamstrings.

Really nice job.
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