Hentai: Peach's Untold Tale 3.48 (Nov 2/18) - HIATUS

[GeraldMason]

So I think I've got a few small complaints.
First one is regarding Peach and what I found to be the reason I disliked the change. The dress in general is great Ivan, though the area where the nipples press against the dress looks a bit odd due to the color differentiation. The nipples themselves (Without the dress) could also be a tad bit lighter, since they appear to almost be red as opposed to the pink you'd expect. For the dress, In my opinion maybe it would be a good idea to either make the bumps more subtle/remove them or maybe shade it a bit differently so it isn't so white-ish.
Otherwise, the animations, backside view and majority of Peach is superb.
Final complaint is that the world map seems to be a bit cluttered, though I imagine that's not something that was going to stick. Maybe you could get an old 8-bit sprite of Peach/the other characters to serve as their "Markers" for the overworld map, whereas your other designs stick for the notable landmarks within a stage?

As always I mean no offense, so I apologize in advance if I offended you in any way shape or form either now or in the past.

[LuftMallow]

I've done this really quick so it's not heavily detailed, but a first take of the apron is done.Trying to keep everything lined up took the most time. I've noticed Peach's tits shrink in between the side and front views after the first size while making this, which made things look odd.

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[GeraldMason]

I've done this really quick so it's not heavily detailed, but a first take of the apron is done.Trying to keep everything lined up took the most time. I've noticed Peach's tits shrink in between the side and front views after the first size while making this, which made things look odd.

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Before I disappear again I gotta say, you did great on the apron.

[Darthan]

I've done this really quick so it's not heavily detailed, but a first take of the apron is done.Trying to keep everything lined up took the most time. I've noticed Peach's tits shrink in between the side and front views after the first size while making this, which made things look odd.

I am guessing that the backside view was to show the bow where it ties in the back? Problem is that the raccoon tail is obstructing it so you can't really see it. Other than that it look pretty good. Peach's amazing shrinking boobs gave me a bit of a chuckle.

[MPLDAM9919]

I've done this really quick so it's not heavily detailed, but a first take of the apron is done.Trying to keep everything lined up took the most time. I've noticed Peach's tits shrink in between the side and front views after the first size while making this, which made things look odd.

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It's...it's...FANTASTIC!!! That is a great looking apron, LuftMallow. Keep up the good work!

[Ivan-Aedler]

I just wanted to test some of my abilities of Pen Tool on this one.

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So I think I've got a few small complaints.

Expected! I'm all ears

First one is regarding Peach and what I found to be the reason I disliked the change. The dress in general is great Ivan, though the area where the nipples press against the dress looks a bit odd due to the color differentiation.

Again, its the 'survivor theorem' (SUT). I make things, see the reaction, then I improve.
But the short answer is, YES, I will improve it. the problem is the usage of strokes. I will use fills instead.

The nipples themselves (Without the dress) could also be a tad bit lighter, since they appear to almost be red as opposed to the pink you'd expect.

I will check!

For the dress, In my opinion maybe it would be a good idea to either make the bumps more subtle/remove them or maybe shade it a bit differently so it isn't so white-ish.

I will check!

Otherwise, the animations, backside view and majority of Peach is superb.

Thanks!

Final complaint is that the world map seems to be a bit cluttered, though I imagine that's not something that was going to stick. Maybe you could get an old 8-bit sprite of Peach/the other characters to..

Wait! Please stop here! Everything but 8 bit sprites :/. But I have a plan about diminishing Peach size in the worldmap.

As always I mean no offense, so I apologize in advance if I offended you in any way shape or form either now or in the past.

I do know that You can keep complaining, the idea is to improve really!

I've done this really quick so it's not heavily detailed, but a first take of the apron is done.Trying to keep everything lined up took the most time. I've noticed Peach's tits shrink in between the side and front views after the first size while making this, which made things look odd.

Thanks, that's cute, LuftMallow! And man, now with the new system and OUTFIT name cathegorization, it became easier to replace things here. The time to replace here: 10 seconds!
I've had to resize your bra in the side pose because strangely enough, when opening, your apron bra was the biggest of them all.

Hmm I think that some laces and a pink second layer tissue should make it even better. We can improve them, we will see
As for differentes in the boobs, Its expected to fix that. The problem is the size of the boobs in the first place. Once they're resized correctly, I may resize the main bra, then all would be corrected without manual fiddling inside each outfit.

[AsianP3rsuas10n]

Welp just stoppin by for a few. Nice lookin bowser jr

Welcome to the team blargh! I hope you enjoy your stay and no worries, you wont have to pay for anything u take out of the fridge. Room service is also free compliments of the manager. And be sure to have fun and work at your own pace! Remember! The creator is always right!


Anyways, I'm glad there are so many people helping out now!

Well just stopped by to say whats up.

[QuizmasterBos]

I just wanted to test some of my abilities of Pen Tool on this one.

I have to say that you did great on the bow, but the frills on the apron don't make it look so good. But good job to both you and Luftmalllow.

Final complaint is that the world map seems to be a bit cluttered, though I imagine that's not something that was going to stick. Maybe you could get an old 8-bit sprite of Peach/the other characters to..

Wait! Please stop here! Everything but 8 bit sprites :/. But I have a plan about diminishing Peach size in the worldmap.

Well, right now, only World 1 is cluttered. The rest look okay in my opinion. You may have to think about removing, or switching around some things.

[theblacknphbutnotgay]

And she banned you?! C'mon, women can enjoy this game too. Toyloli is proof of that. And shouldn't you be able to play this both (and then maybe re-enact some scenes later tonight *wink wink*)?

she hates games and she let's me read the forums she just thinks i'm still a cheater cause her sister's a bitch and tells her lies she "heard" about me.
plus i did that before to what i thought was good results until she started some you're bored with me crap.

BLARGH AND IVAN ARE BOTH WORKING ON THIS GAME
when i can play the update i'm sure it will be amazing... whenever that is i get to.

also Luftmallow that apron is nice... it gives me ideas

[Ivan-Aedler]

Morton color overhawl.

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[Darthan]

I just wanted to test some of my abilities of Pen Tool on this one.

The bow and the pink trim on the bottom do look nice, but I have to agree with Quiz about the white lace frills. They just make the apron look fussy.

[Simply]

so im having a problem... every time i try to play the game, peach just keeps running left. nothing i do stops her, she just keeps running left

[Ivan-Aedler]

The bow and the pink trim on the bottom do look nice, but I have to agree with Quiz about the white lace frills. They just make the apron look fussy.

How about now? (lace in bottom area)

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[QuizmasterBos]

The bow and the pink trim on the bottom do look nice, but I have to agree with Quiz about the white lace frills. They just make the apron look fussy.

How about now? (lace in bottom area)

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Remove the frills on the top part, around her breasts. They don't look very good in my opinion.

[Darthan]

Remove the frills on the top part, around her breasts. They don't look very good in my opinion.

Agreed, the lace around the bottom looks better, but it still looks kinda weird to me. It may just be the lace around her breasts is making the whole thing look weird. Try taking that top lace out and we can go from there.

[Uchiha wolf]

love this game i have palyd the ones on newgrunds and they where all bugy and clichy but this game is epic ps i hope this are geting thoru cuz i dont think they are

[Ivan-Aedler]

Third style:
PS: The little 'white mess' in the left breast is not the lace, its the cum (in the game it's only shown if Peach has made boobjobs).

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[yurinicolau]

Hey folks I'm back!!! My life have been crazy with me ending the senior year at university and having to move to back to my family city and all... Lot's of parties too!!! But hey, I've found some spare time to appear around here! I'm very impressed all colaborators MIM PUT has right now! And these 2 months that I spend out of the forum has bring lots of surprises for me at the game! Congrats Ivan, MIM is going greater them ever!!! Oh, and the Morton's pic you posted just make me realize something...

Morton color overhawl.
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Morton's is probably the only character at the game from old playshapes MIM... If you really look at him you'll see that he doesn't fit the game artwork anymore, he needs changes (it's still on brush yet!) So... This made me wonder, what if you work your magic at him and totally remasterize him with the pen tool???

And guys, let me know what you think about a new Morton aswell!

Cheers!!!

P.S. Ivan I'm sending the Game Over Scene script to you soon via Skype later today.

[Ivan-Aedler]

so im having a problem... every time i try to play the game, peach just keeps running left. nothing i do stops her, she just keeps running left

Please, which keyboard config? (1,2,3,4)? QWERTY or AZERTY? Which browser and version? Are you uising an older computer (like a Pentium3)? AMD K6-II? Thank you!

Hey folks I'm back!!! My life have been crazy with me ending the senior year at university and having to move to back to my family city and all... Lot's of parties too!!!

Hey how are you?? I'm glad you're back! Hey I'm not forgotten. Drammatic scenes (like Trogdor game). But remember it will have two types of it.
1. Drammatic scene in the FIRST enemy type (e.g first goomba). It will move automatic. user press space to pass scenes.
2. Normal scenes: 4 camera types (CAM1,2,3,4). User can press a button.

Congrats Ivan, MIM is going greater them ever!!! Oh, and the Morton's pic you posted just make me realize something...

Thank you! But the TEAM is responsible for that too

Morton's is probably the only character at the game from old playshapes MIM... If you really look at him you'll see that he doesn't fit the game artwork anymore, he needs changes (it's still on brush yet!) So... This made me wonder, what if you work your magic at him and totally remasterize him with the pen tool???

But its that thing that I want to avoid in the meanwhile because I'm making level 3-4 and fixing errors on level 3-3. And I have to put Peach crouching option.

[Simply]

so im having a problem... every time i try to play the game, peach just keeps running left. nothing i do stops her, she just keeps running left

Please, which keyboard config? (1,2,3,4)? QWERTY or AZERTY? Which browser and version? Are you uising an older computer (like a Pentium3)? AMD K6-II? Thank you!

Hey folks I'm back!!! My life have been crazy with me ending the senior year at university and having to move to back to my family city and all... Lot's of parties too!!!

Hey how are you?? I'm glad you're back! Hey I'm not forgotten. Drammatic scenes (like Trogdor game). But remember it will have two types of it.
1. Drammatic scene in the FIRST enemy type (e.g first goomba). It will move automatic. user press space to pass scenes.
2. Normal scenes: 4 camera types (CAM1,2,3,4). User can press a button.

Congrats Ivan, MIM is going greater them ever!!! Oh, and the Morton's pic you posted just make me realize something...

Thank you! But the TEAM is responsible for that too

Morton's is probably the only character at the game from old playshapes MIM... If you really look at him you'll see that he doesn't fit the game artwork anymore, he needs changes (it's still on brush yet!) So... This made me wonder, what if you work your magic at him and totally remasterize him with the pen tool???

But its that thing that I want to avoid in the meanwhile because I'm making level 3-4 and fixing errors on level 3-3. And I have to put Peach crouching option.

all of them are giving me this issue, ive tried the game on every matchup of 1-4 qwerty and azerty. and no, im using a windows 7 laptop. I tried looking through the thread and it seems im the only person with this problem, in which case i dont know what to do.