Pokemon Hentai Game update (Jan 31, 2016)

[Campo92]

if i work on it, i think i can finish abra for tomorrow. like always, i'll ask if you like firs of shading

[bubba91]

Horny Seaking

Spoiler (click to show/hide):

https://www.dropbox.com/s/asmnhy6yg7q4ai8/seakinghorny.jpg

[nvnzip]

Hi everybody.
I've known about this project for a long time, but I never really felt like I could contribute to it in the past (well, I also hadn't played it until last night).
However, over the past 2 months I've been doing a ton of figure practice and I also happened to be playing pokemon crystal.

Anyway, yesterday, I really wanted to play a sexier version of pokemon, so I went googling for one and found myself back at this project.
I usually try to stay away from unfinished games, but I didn't have many options this time around, so I played it.
I finished Cerulean a few hours later and decided I wanted to see how the project was coming along.

After looking around the collection of images that might end up in the final project I realized that I might actually be able to contribute this time around.
So, I decided to try and improve on an already existing design. No offense to bubba91 (who has done tons of awesome drawings already), but I didn't like how that Tentacruel looked at the moment. So, I tried my own version.

Be warned, it needs to be cleaned up significantly before I can call it a lineart, but I wanted to hear some opinions on the design as it is right now.
Tentacruel - Front

Spoiler (click to show/hide):

https://www.dropbox.com/s/zzszerxo9bsr854/Tentacruel.jpg

It may be a little too human for the aim of this project and I can already see a few things I could improve, but I think it's a good start.
Let me know what you think.

[omp123]

It's a furry game, most furries unless feral have a human shaped body besides the head. If you want to slap tits on a regular metapod then go right ahead, but most people wouldn't find it very attractive.

[nvnzip]

It's a furry game, most furries unless feral have a human shaped body besides the head. If you want to slap tits on a regular metapod then go right ahead, but most people wouldn't find it very attractive.

Hmmm, maybe I should rephrase my concern. I'm not so much concerned with it being too human as I am concerned with it not looking enough like the source material.
So, I'm worried she doesn't look enough like Tentacruel for people to identify who it's supposed to be right away.

[Zeus Kabob]

For the example of Tentacruel, I don't think it's too much of an issue. At the same time, I can understand your concerns.

As for your work, I'd say it's pretty dang good. With good inking and coloring, she's got a lot of character, and she's designed well.

Especially with coloring, I think the resemblance is totally there.

[Campo92]

in my opinion, your work is good. this is not a critique, but, somehow your draw is too much different from the others. for example: when i color the draws i try to stay in the line with the color of the 3 original pokemorphs that humbird0 insert in the game. About you, the contest is the face and the body: it looks great for himself but is too far from be seen like a tentacruel. i don't know if you understand what i mean... By the way, abra front is finished.

[dragonmaster121989]

looks awesome

[Rakaziel]

Your tentacruel version looks really good, she is an interesting interpretation, has an interally consistent design and a dynamic pose.
I am not worried about her looking too human, though I am a bit worried about her looking to jellyfishy to be recognizable as a tentacruel (thought the color palette would probably fix that)

[nvnzip]

Alright, so I updated the design for Tentacruel and I cleaned up the drawing a bit.

Tentacruel 2 - Front

Spoiler (click to show/hide):

https://www.dropbox.com/s/t2qi4hjgktbqyj7/Tentacruel%202.jpg

Tentacruel 3 - Front

Spoiler (click to show/hide):

https://www.dropbox.com/s/zyv67waspd20nb8/Tentacruel%203.jpg

I made the helmet and the hair look more like Tantacruel's head and tentacles so that the resemblance is more apparent. I also created a slight variation on the face for version 3.
The idea for the changes in version 3 were borrowed from Bubba91's Tentacruel drawing.

As for what Campo said; I totally agree. I think the best way to describe it is that my Tentacruel looks like a human with the features of a pokemon attached, whereas the rest of the pokemorphs look more like the original pokemon with human-like figures.
However, I think version 3 is a little better in that respect and that some clever coloring could go a long way to making it even better.

I think that if you colored her skin with a pale blue or maybe some gray (something distinctly non-human that matches Tentacruel's color scheme) and then you gave it shine so that it looks almost slimy, you could probably give her a calamari-like look.
Then, you could make her dress an (almost black) dark grey to imitate Tentacruel's body color.
The rest of the colors are the same as Tentacruel's original colors.
At least that's what I think would work.

Anyway, let me know what you guys think of the newer versions.

[Campo92]

Uhm, let's see... I wanna propose you this: if you draw something like this and give me the colors like i've done with the two circles, maybe I'll color first of the sandshrew of bubba.

[BobbyGecko]

Humbird0, I know you're not in condition to work, but on what are you planning to work first? pokemon or guardia forest?
And Bubba, your drawning skills are improving, that's great, but my favorite is still sandslash, or arbok I don't know...

[georges341]

Alright, so I updated the design for Tentacruel and I cleaned up the drawing a bit.

Tentacruel 2 - Front

Spoiler (click to show/hide):

https://www.dropbox.com/s/t2qi4hjgktbqyj7/Tentacruel%202.jpg

Tentacruel 3 - Front

Spoiler (click to show/hide):

https://www.dropbox.com/s/zyv67waspd20nb8/Tentacruel%203.jpg

I made the helmet and the hair look more like Tantacruel's head and tentacles so that the resemblance is more apparent. I also created a slight variation on the face for version 3.
The idea for the changes in version 3 were borrowed from Bubba91's Tentacruel drawing.

As for what Campo said; I totally agree. I think the best way to describe it is that my Tentacruel looks like a human with the features of a pokemon attached, whereas the rest of the pokemorphs look more like the original pokemon with human-like figures.
However, I think version 3 is a little better in that respect and that some clever coloring could go a long way to making it even better.

I think that if you colored her skin with a pale blue or maybe some gray (something distinctly non-human that matches Tentacruel's color scheme) and then you gave it shine so that it looks almost slimy, you could probably give her a calamari-like look.
Then, you could make her dress an (almost black) dark grey to imitate Tentacruel's body color.
The rest of the colors are the same as Tentacruel's original colors.
At least that's what I think would work.

Anyway, let me know what you guys think of the newer versions.

tenta much better now but dude
IT FREAKS ME OUT

[Eterai]

Tentacruel looks like she could be a monster in MGQ! O.O
She looks really good, and like others said, how she is colored should really set her apart!

Campo92, nice Abra!

[bubba91]

Alright, so I updated the design for Tentacruel and I cleaned up the drawing a bit.

Tentacruel 2 - Front

Spoiler (click to show/hide):

https://www.dropbox.com/s/t2qi4hjgktbqyj7/Tentacruel%202.jpg

Tentacruel 3 - Front

Spoiler (click to show/hide):

https://www.dropbox.com/s/zyv67waspd20nb8/Tentacruel%203.jpg

I made the helmet and the hair look more like Tantacruel's head and tentacles so that the resemblance is more apparent. I also created a slight variation on the face for version 3.
The idea for the changes in version 3 were borrowed from Bubba91's Tentacruel drawing.

As for what Campo said; I totally agree. I think the best way to describe it is that my Tentacruel looks like a human with the features of a pokemon attached, whereas the rest of the pokemorphs look more like the original pokemon with human-like figures.
However, I think version 3 is a little better in that respect and that some clever coloring could go a long way to making it even better.

I think that if you colored her skin with a pale blue or maybe some gray (something distinctly non-human that matches Tentacruel's color scheme) and then you gave it shine so that it looks almost slimy, you could probably give her a calamari-like look.
Then, you could make her dress an (almost black) dark grey to imitate Tentacruel's body color.
The rest of the colors are the same as Tentacruel's original colors.
At least that's what I think would work.

Anyway, let me know what you guys think of the newer versions.

I like the third version but the dress doesn't convince me a lot. May I redo my version, it was one of my firsts drawings(like diglett) and was really simple.

[Rakaziel]

Version 3 looks awesome! A possible alternate look for the dress would be tattered black algae.

[Campo92]

By the way, if someone wanna help to color the draws, I can do a simply tutorial with the bases. I'm not asking you to do much like I do, but maybe only clean up the double lines, or color the xone, or shade an already colored draw.... Send me a pm if someone is interested

[nvnzip]

Campo92 wrote:
Uhm, let's see... I wanna propose you this: if you draw something like this and give me the colors like i've done with the two circles, maybe I'll color first of the sandshrew of bubba.

Hmmm, I think I'll do the lines and then try to color it myself, just to see how it turns out.

nvnzip wrote:
Alright, so I updated the design for Tentacruel and I cleaned up the drawing a bit.
...

georges341 wrote:
tenta much better now but dude
IT FREAKS ME OUT

lol, I wasn't aiming for creepy. xD
I was kinda going for the whole Disney queen look a bit. Ursula was one of my inspirations for this one.

nvnzip wrote:
Alright, so I updated the design for Tentacruel and I cleaned up the drawing a bit.
...

Bubba91 wrote:
I like the third version but the dress doesn't convince me a lot. May I redo my version, it was one of my firsts drawings(like diglett) and was really simple.

Well, you're free to do what you like, but what is it about the dress you didn't like?

Rakaziel wrote:
Version 3 looks awesome! A possible alternate look for the dress would be tattered black algae.

lol, how would I even do that?
Sounds hard. >.>

[bubba91]

Well, you're free to do what you like, but what is it about the dress you didn't like?

Nothing special but I believe it will identify her more like a wild pokemon if she's fully naked.

[Campo92]

I know i can be repeatitive, but, I agree with bubba, all the pokemorphs must be fully naked, that's the line of the game. Except Jinx, that have a dress for herself