Jumbo70's Art Garden

[Jumbo70]

One pic for each character will be chosen for the cover pic, this pic will be the non-H pic or clothed and can be seductive or not. This pic will be the pic that shows the personality of the character and will be seen when not performing sexual acts or naked. Up to 8 other pics will be chosen per character for such sexual acts. Since there isn't much room for non-H pics it's suggested that you do more of the H pics or a combo of both.

And next question.
Who are the LoK girls? (dont kill me D: )
i know krystal, lizard women and blaziken (i know blaze is from pokemon), but are there others?
I looked around on characters from the starfox series and found theres some felines and such i dont remember the names on, but will those be available for drawing to the competition?

[riddlebox1321]

viewtopic.php?f=35&t=2885&start=20
Zeus Kabob quotes some original games but also any game that contains krystal is a safe bet. I'm still debating if Mario is missing (including it's variations) should be allowed. If you have questions ask and I shall not maim.

[Jumbo70]

http://www.legendofkrystal.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=35&t=2885&start=20
Zeus Kabob quotes some original games but also any game that contains krystal is a safe bet. I'm still debating if Mario is missing (including it's variations) should be allowed. If you have questions ask and I shall not maim.

Goodie ^^

Il ask new questions once i come up with them

[Jumbo70]

Moar

I really used time on the shading on this one, so would really like to get some comments on that ^^

maagus

[BlueLight]

I like it a lot but here are things that bug me but i can't really place why. The boob attacking hair; the torso just doesn't seem to match up with the head or the legs; and what type of clothing wraps around boobs like that?

Now i understand the torso thing might just be my mind playing tricks but it really doesn't seem like the way her head is turn matches with the body or the legs. It's kinda like a lego man with the legs on backwards and the head to the side. It just doesn't look right. Again there might be no problems.

The hair parting at the one boob.... just looks silly and i can't figure out how that's really possible without personally trying to do that.
and the boobs...well they look like the cloth is acting like a seconds skin. I know of nothing that fits perfectly with your body to the level of a second skin. Also i believe her robe would have to have boobs slots for that to work which.... just seems odd.

um want my detailed comments or is this good?

[riddlebox1321]

I've noticed a very nice improvement on shading. Object placement, size and shape seem to need some work though. You could try using thickness and density of lines on outline as well as the inner lines to show light and shadow more (I.e. the highlighted side having less thickness and density making the lines look bright and the dark having more thickness and density making it look dark.). Also using the "whisper line"(light pressure line) technique and sketching with more short to medium stroke lines for the first layers is good because you don't leave deep imprints that don't erase and you can do line cleaning to get rid of the lines that like to poke out so you can have that "clean" look. Then when you like the overall look of the shapes and their placement you can start layering more. Very nice work on your newest piece it looks like your style fits best with cartooning. It could use line clean up but due to style outline density and thickness aren't so important. If and when you want to sketch in color I could give tips and pointers on getting that right shade through color blending.

[OwnerOfSuccuby]

Mage Fox is cool

[Jumbo70]

I like it a lot but here are things that bug me but i can't really place why. The boob attacking hair; the torso just doesn't seem to match up with the head or the legs; and what type of clothing wraps around boobs like that?

Now i understand the torso thing might just be my mind playing tricks but it really doesn't seem like the way her head is turn matches with the body or the legs. It's kinda like a lego man with the legs on backwards and the head to the side. It just doesn't look right. Again there might be no problems.

The hair parting at the one boob.... just looks silly and i can't figure out how that's really possible without personally trying to do that.
and the boobs...well they look like the cloth is acting like a seconds skin. I know of nothing that fits perfectly with your body to the level of a second skin. Also i believe her robe would have to have boobs slots for that to work which.... just seems odd.

um want my detailed comments or is this good?

You go as detailed as you wish, i personaly would like as detailed as possible ^^

As before. When you say em, i see em, thanks ^^

I dont quite understand, what you mean with the "lego body", i personaly dont see anything wrong in the pose itself bu i do agree with the torso being like a second skin.
I also agree with the hair you mentioned.

All in all, I deeply appreciate your critique ^^

I've noticed a very nice improvement on shading. Object placement, size and shape seem to need some work though. You could try using thickness and density of lines on outline as well as the inner lines to show light and shadow more (I.e. the highlighted side having less thickness and density making the lines look bright and the dark having more thickness and density making it look dark.). Also using the "whisper line"(light pressure line) technique and sketching with more short to medium stroke lines for the first layers is good because you don't leave deep imprints that don't erase and you can do line cleaning to get rid of the lines that like to poke out so you can have that "clean" look. Then when you like the overall look of the shapes and their placement you can start layering more. Very nice work on your newest piece it looks like your style fits best with cartooning. It could use line clean up but due to style outline density and thickness aren't so important. If and when you want to sketch in color I could give tips and pointers on getting that right shade through color blending.

Thanks ^^

Ive noticed that I am very....stuck? with my drawings. Everything i draw is more or less from the same angle in a similiar pose. If i could break that barrier, i think it could make me easier to get those shapes and such in order. The problem atm is that i am drawing mainly with only one pencil, and that one is not even meant for drawing XD. I have no idea why the heck i am doing this, but life is full of questions we dont have an answer for.
So the next thing for me to do is to throw that pencil out from the window and start using proper pencils and so on, also i should start to sharpen my pencils more often instead of once or twice per picture...
Thanks for the critique ^^

Mage Fox is cool

Thanks ^^

(i think i should also start wearing my glasses when i draw.....)

[BlueLight]

I like it a lot but here are things that bug me but i can't really place why. The boob attacking hair; the torso just doesn't seem to match up with the head or the legs; and what type of clothing wraps around boobs like that?

Now i understand the torso thing might just be my mind playing tricks but it really doesn't seem like the way her head is turn matches with the body or the legs. It's kinda like a lego man with the legs on backwards and the head to the side. It just doesn't look right. Again there might be no problems.

The hair parting at the one boob.... just looks silly and i can't figure out how that's really possible without personally trying to do that.
and the boobs...well they look like the cloth is acting like a seconds skin. I know of nothing that fits perfectly with your body to the level of a second skin. Also i believe her robe would have to have boobs slots for that to work which.... just seems odd.

um want my detailed comments or is this good?

You go as detailed as you wish, i personaly would like as detailed as possible ^^

As before. When you say em, i see em, thanks ^^

I dont quite understand, what you mean with the "lego body", i personaly dont see anything wrong in the pose itself bu i do agree with the torso being like a second skin.
I also agree with the hair you mentioned.

All in all, I deeply appreciate your critique ^^

I've noticed a very nice improvement on shading. Object placement, size and shape seem to need some work though. You could try using thickness and density of lines on outline as well as the inner lines to show light and shadow more (I.e. the highlighted side having less thickness and density making the lines look bright and the dark having more thickness and density making it look dark.). Also using the "whisper line"(light pressure line) technique and sketching with more short to medium stroke lines for the first layers is good because you don't leave deep imprints that don't erase and you can do line cleaning to get rid of the lines that like to poke out so you can have that "clean" look. Then when you like the overall look of the shapes and their placement you can start layering more. Very nice work on your newest piece it looks like your style fits best with cartooning. It could use line clean up but due to style outline density and thickness aren't so important. If and when you want to sketch in color I could give tips and pointers on getting that right shade through color blending.

Thanks ^^

Ive noticed that I am very....stuck? with my drawings. Everything i draw is more or less from the same angle in a similiar pose. If i could break that barrier, i think it could make me easier to get those shapes and such in order. The problem atm is that i am drawing mainly with only one pencil, and that one is not even meant for drawing XD. I have no idea why the heck i am doing this, but life is full of questions we dont have an answer for.
So the next thing for me to do is to throw that pencil out from the window and start using proper pencils and so on, also i should start to sharpen my pencils more often instead of once or twice per picture...
Thanks for the critique ^^

Mage Fox is cool

Thanks ^^

(i think i should also start wearing my glasses when i draw.....)

The body it self doesn't look any like a lego body but i was trying to use that as a example... and i see it failed.

[riddlebox1321]

I tend to find that as long as the tip of the pencil is sharpened enough to get a good line but slightly rounded, not pointy, it doesn't leave marks as easy. HB #2 is the standard pencil for writing because it was recognized as being the best pencil for getting the widest variety of shades. If you use it you should be able to practice just fine, but if you want to draw a more lifelike sketch then I suggest getting a couple ebony pencils and some sketching pencils. The Generals brand tends to have some great quality pencils and an eraser for a decent price and if you want to go the extra stretch, then Magic Rub erasers are amazing for drawing. They do not smudge and they get most if not all of the pencil lead/graphite off of the paper. The brands I suggest for Magic Rub are Sanford, Papermate, or Prismacolor.

[Jumbo70]

The body it self doesn't look any like a lego body but i was trying to use that as a example... and i see it failed.

Sometimes i am a little more simple in my mind. Now i think i understand tough what you meant with the lego body, not sure tough ^^

I tend to find that as long as the tip of the pencil is sharpened enough to get a good line but slightly rounded, not pointy, it doesn't leave marks as easy. HB #2 is the standard pencil for writing because it was recognized as being the best pencil for getting the widest variety of shades. If you use it you should be able to practice just fine, but if you want to draw a more lifelike sketch then I suggest getting a couple ebony pencils and some sketching pencils. The Generals brand tends to have some great quality pencils and an eraser for a decent price and if you want to go the extra stretch, then Magic Rub erasers are amazing for drawing. They do not smudge and they get most if not all of the pencil lead/graphite off of the paper. The brands I suggest for Magic Rub are Sanford, Papermate, or Prismacolor.

I use those hb leads on the pencil, and now i think you can figure out what kind of pencil i usually draw with, and those types of pencils aint the best ones.
I have somekind of hi-polymer rubber eraser, and it works just fine by me Then again i draw with a pencil that is not meant to draw with so who am i to say what is good and what is bad XD

So far today, i mean yesterday. I drew a sketch on a a4 drawing paper, ive spended time on the drawing for around 2 hours n so far ive only used a H9 pencil and this eraser i mentioned earlier. I am thinking on using ALOT of time on this piece and slowly make it done, thinking bout everything and so forth, wich i usually dont do...
So i force myself to use much time on one drawing instead of just sketching me trough one.

incase you want a sneak peak

just a crappy phone image

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it is far from done

I think il move that tail around so you can see more of dat ass

[OwnerOfSuccuby]

FireFox has a sister

[Jumbo70]

FireFox has a sister

heh

[Jumbo70]

I tried to draw a lynxie :3
no shadows here cuz i didnt wanna try put shadows on this one n possibly ruin it D:
sorriez
dat hand is little short XD

lynxiemynxie who looks more like a cheetah
il call her lynxie for now (hmm setha perhaps?)

How do i use the scanner properly???
when i look the original with my eyes, the colours arent that pale, but when i try to make them colours stand out more, it just gets bad.
Whut i do wrong D:

[OwnerOfSuccuby]

Great !!! But She looks like leopard now

[Jumbo70]

Great !!! But She looks like leopard now

indeed XD
had hard time figuring out how those lynx colours should look like,
One image says gray, other says a colour similiar to this, but one thing was same for everyone. they had black eartips!

[Jumbo70]

Alas, new drawing, and this one is the one i used alot of time on the "sketching phase"
And i also managed to more or less ruin the muzzle.
Dat hand should be bigger.

i have no idea how or when that "line" got in the background, annoys me.
and i notice that some of the lines are traced harder than some, on the paper it looks just fine tough.....go figure

Also, on my comic topic, should i bumpy it whenever i post a update to it?

[riddlebox1321]

I think that's what the bump option is for... I guess.
I like the improvement on shading, soon you might be able to draw images without a hard outline

Edit: Have you tried using different shades of a color pencil when making color images?
Light blue dark blue?
I remember my art professor having us experiment with color shading by having us draw 3d shapes and test the colors on them.

[Jumbo70]

I think that's what the bump option is for... I guess.
I like the improvement on shading, soon you might be able to draw images without a hard outline

Edit: Have you tried using different shades of a color pencil when making color images?
Light blue dark blue?
I remember my art professor having us experiment with color shading by having us draw 3d shapes and test the colors on them.

Thanks ^^
It is kinda my wet dream to make drawings without outlines Slowly getting there woo!

I havent really done anything special in the terms of using colour pencils, still taking baby steps there, but il start doing that on the next colour pic i make ^^
My art teacher also tried to tell us to draw those 3d shapes n put shades on em, whenever she got tired of talking bout her skills in arts and how great she is....

[riddlebox1321]

The only thing that really isn't that great on the new pic is the left eye, (her right) it makes the cheek and muzzle a little distorted. Oh and you're right, the hand is a little small... The Index is too fat and long, the middle and ring fingers are too short.
And there should be a little shading under where the hair falls over the cheek (for depth)

Sorry for being critical, you've improved so much that I didn't notice at first.