KaTsuO_O's Models

[MrBear]

Would hit this krystal model anyday.

[swirls]

This head looks pretty nice! I think once you get the proper eye in there it'll look great

Not totally sure what to think about the body at this point, but maybe a bit more white stomach? I think I like it a bit more in Untitled 74 but then you decided to reduce it. (But then again, maybe it's the perspective? I'm not sure)

[KaTsuO_O]

@swirls I reduced it bacause it would be some problems with the perspective.

Got the ful body traced so now im going to start with everything else.

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Heres the new and the old one together. I think that the perspective looks a lot better.

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[Valentine]

A great improvement over the first model! Though maybe her butt is a little too big, it looks a bit out of proportion along with her thighs.

[KaTsuO_O]

@Valentine thanx, im working on the proportion.

@Ebonizza i fixed the ass.

I did also finnish the tattoos, made the eye look a bit better, traced a hand from trunks image and made the neck thicker.

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[trunks2585]

I have no idea how hard it is to find by now, shouldn't be too hard, but try to use the original model playshapes made, when doing the ass and legs, ren's was a bad edit that most of us didn't like in the fist place. The thighs are a bit too thick as they are right now, not sure if the legs need to be a bit longer or not.

Edit: here a pic of the original http://pawsru.org/flash/src/flash2258_TLOK.png it's not perfect either so we'll have to use some of our own judgement on this one.

[KaTsuO_O]

http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/536624 I dont really like how the legs looks like on this one so is there anything between my and these that would look good?

[trunks2585]

let's see. what you have as far as the ass shape in your first edit after ebonizza's post isn't bad, the problem now lies in her thighs. (heh i rhymed sorta...ok lame joke is lame). Anyways I'm not sure but making her thighs (and her calfs as well so they match) a bit longer might help, but making them thinner would also help (reduce from the back of her legs and ass not the front), that should make her legs look better. If all else fails, see if you can find any good side views of a woman's legs. references are always a great way to improve your art.

[KaTsuO_O]

How about this?

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[toddymon]

I think it looks great. Good job man.

[trunks2585]

Try a bit thinner. Here's another reference http://www.youngwomenshealth.org/fitnes ... s_side.jpg i'm probably not going to find a better example of a side view than that, and it's a pretty good one if you ask me.

And one more http://www.mannequingallery.com/images/ ... e_view.jpg between the fitness woman and the mannequin legs i think those should help you enough. The biggest thing to remember is the ass doesn't stick out nearly as far as you have it, maybe a little past the shoulders at most.

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It looks like her thighs are a little short.

[Valentine]

Found some reference pics.
Number 1
Number 2
Number 3

[trunks2585]

thank you valentine, those should help katsu as well.

[ronpepper]

I dunno, she is a bit on the voluptuous side but I like her just fine:) And considering her popularity, why adjust too much?

Or try this argument out: If you want to see a skinny bitch, get Samus in there ..

[KaTsuO_O]

Thanx for the pictures!

Too thin.

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I dont see any problems with this.

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And this is the first one.

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[trunks2585]

personally i like 82 even though you think it's too thin, but i could go with 83 to be on the safe side. let's see what others prefer.

[MrBear]

Yeah I liked 82 more than the others. Trunks spot on this time :O

[imp32]

83 is my fav, love that ass =D.

[NailB]

81 all the way baby. 83 is nice too and more natural, just don't go into flatness that was v0.1... Don't like 81, too thin indeed.
Also some other things... are there going to be varying line thickness in final model? I think this adds a lot more life to drawings.
I think calves' angles should be smoothed a little bit.
Looking back at the v0.2 Krystal, I like her eyes more. Are new eyes wip or finished? They look kinda lifeless to me right now.

Awesome work Katsu, it's really great to see actual progress going on