LoK Choose Your Own Adventure

[Yawg]

Added three new pages as well:
http://editthis.info/create_your_own_ad ... il_Katt%3F

I have a plan for the showers as well... but Ill have to write that bit out later. And thanks for whomever added that option for the Kahlua-on-Katt's-breasts option... it was a good idea... I hope you don't mind my integrating it during the actual sex scene!

Looks like I'm going to have to add "change the filters on the pool scrubbers AGAIN to Slippy's to-do list.
Poor bastard XD

[Spycam]

Lovin' the new content ya'll. A special thanks goes to whoever is helping with the planet-side content.

The 'Kaluha on Katt's breasts' option came from your's truly, so feel free to use it however you want- I've got my hands plenty full in other areas.

By the way, I would like to figure out how to add a location system to the story- some of the others on the site will allow you to jump directly to a location rather than figuring out how to get there the long way. It makes for a nice 'checkpoint' system. Of course, I probably won't have time for a while, so if someone else wants something to do, that would be a big help.

[Yawg]

Id love to see more in the way of the planet-side branch; I'm very much enjoying the adventure angle its taking, too. I'm too afraid to contribute to that because... well... I'm me.

It'll devolve to porn.

[gamerfox]

Everyone else having brain drain as well?

[somerandomguy]

I have a singular issue as well. You mentioned 'Cerinian porn', but Cerinia was destroyed. Krystal is the sole survivor. I'm not saying you shouldn't use it, but you may want to address just where Fox would get a hold of such a thing.

Well i agree with Yawg's statement about it and the fact that there was a time when it wasnt gone. there had to be quite a few people who had these magazines, so either he's had it for awhile or he bought it off of someone for a high price. old sticky pages haha. if you would like more clarity ill go change it around.

[Yawg]

Also... Do we know for a fact that Krystal is the sole survivor? Was she the only cerinian that made it to space? Granted surviving space travel in a loincloth is a tricky feat... But still.

[Yawg]

Also also... No updates this week? Colour me disappointed. Let's see what I can do about that.

This is what you've reduced me to: writing terrible slash fiction instead of drawing terrible porn.

Edit: Okie doke... New page added! Nothing terribly sexy (yet) but I've added a new character into the mix!

[gamerfox]

Ok, I'm lost... what should I do in the "strip everyone" branch first...

[Yawg]

Depends; you might want to have Krystal, dragging a stripped-down Katt along the hallways, protesting being as nekkid as she is. Then, depending on who the third person they find is, they can either gang up and tie up Krystal before she hurts herself, or gang up on Katt. I'd recommend either one of the ladies, or... ? Peppy?

Or... Octoman? http://starfox.wikia.com/wiki/Octoman
If he's still alive ("if") this may open the avenue for tentacle sex and mind control, for those of you into that thing.

Slippy's in the hangar, Falco's in the pool, General Pepper's in the women's changeroom, and Fox is still out flying for a while yet... nothing's been set as far as locations for Peppy, Miyu, Fara or anyone else that might be written in later. Though Samus may be around somewhere, since her ship is here and everything XD

[Spycam]

Hey, I'm back. Things have been crazy lately. Good news though, the topless 'wake up' scene is now finished. Before anyone asks, the reason the option to put a top back on is still blank is because all I plan on doing is copying and pasting from the original wake up scene and linking to the same options. Minor adjustments may be necessary, but the point is that this branch is now OPEN FOR CONTRIBUTIONS.

I've decided to postpone the nude scenes for the moment because I want to get some other plot details written. To this end, I'm going to work on the 'remain calm and get more info' page.

By the way, if anyone is interested in Krystal's homeworld for reference purposes, this may help http://starfox.wikia.com/wiki/Cerinia

[Spycam]

Hey, I just had an idea. Could we perhaps start compiling a list of everyone who has contributed to this? It might be nice to put a credits page in at some point, and besides that, I'd be interested to know just how much our team has grown.

[Spycam]

Also, something tells me Yawg might be posting here shortly...

[Yawg]

Oh, hey guys!

I think I've done a page or three.
Still working on the General Pepper part... and thinking about whether the Slippy section should be expanded on- and instead of melding with someone else's (Gamerfox's?) section break it off and head in a third direction with it?

Meh. We'll see, I guess. Still waiting for you guys to catch up with me though.
The challenge has been issued!

[Spycam]

Just put a whole bunch of time into the project, but not much of that work is visible. Aside from some minor editing, I made a backup file for all of my contributions and then struggled with trying to create a locations system. I think I've figured out a method that will work, after plenty of trial and error, but I'm exausted, so that won't be up until tomorrow.

[Spycam]

All right, the good news is that I managed to create a location system. It's a bit awkward, but it works. If someone with a better understanding of the syntax wants to clean it up a little, be my guest, but otherwise I don't plan on touching it. The bad news is that I spent a lot of time trying something that wasn't working, and haven't done any writing. Fingers crossed for the weekend!

Also, I'd appreciate feedback concerning the current status bar (lookin' at you, Yawg ).
(1)For health I figure we can just put fun little phrases in, and magic could come into play if Krystal manages to retrieve her staff. For example, if you try to shoot a sharpclaw with a fireball, and you've already used up your MP... well, we'll all get what we came for.
(2)What do ya'll think of replacing 'Level' with 'Experience'? I found out how to do that when I was messing around with the location stuff. It doesn't need to have an impact on the story, but it could be a good way to track your own progress.
(3)Should I make up an equipment category that links to descriptive pages? Doing so could add a bit of depth to the project.

[Yawg]

As far as the health phrasing goes, I like it. It gives the "status-of-the-moment" a bit more flexibility. Buuuuut you kinda lose me on the MP. I'm not really sure that its necessary. And its totally be a useless power on the Great Fox, or during the story arc where it's just Fox and Krystal on a beach that no one's developed yet. And would the story options even check for MP? Or would you have to write that into the story itself? Because you could do that anyway, and dispense with MP altogether. Personally, I'd go with homeyness or drunkenness, myself. If we had to do a thing, I mean.

Ditto for levels. Perhaps as a way for Krystal to keep track of her conquests?

[Gale Toral]

The MP bar isn't strictly necessary, but it might be useful if a situation arises where keeping track of varying MP over time becomes necessary. I like the health idea, and the equipment pages would be cool, and I say go for it if you believe it's worth your time.

[Spycam]

Prompt and productive feedback! I love it, thanks guys. So here's the results:
(1) Health is a brief description of Krystal's emotional and physical state (be creative!).
(2)The level statistic shall be changed to experience. Actually, I like the way Yawg put it, I'll call it Conquests. I'm thinking 1 point per standard enemy or ally (for example, a threesome would be worth 2), whereas gangbangs and bosses can be left to authors' discretion. Perhaps we can put a rating system in if we ever reach a point where we have endings.
(3)An equipment category will be added (that's easy, the code is the same as for locations). Note that it may take time to add decent descriptions.

That leaves MP. It was originally there purely because of the template I was using. To clarify, I don't plan on putting any stats in that require a check, first because it makes things awkward, and second because I have no idea how. What I WAS thinking is this: your MP remains at 0 until you obtain Krystal's staff, likely overlooked and assumed to be irrelevant- which it was when it was put there. An arbitrary number of charges would then be added, and then deducted if an option that used a staff power was chosen. Thus, an observant reader may notice if it was at zero, and reconsider which option to choose. The purpose of this would merely be to add a level of logic, as opposed to just suddenly hitting a page that says 'You're out of magic.' What magic?

Regardless, I don't really see a need for any other stats whatsoever, so there's no harm in leaving it as is. If no one chooses to utilize it, so be it.

[Yawg]

New page - nothing much in terms of content, but I've linked together my path (Krystal, Matt and Falco -> go to quarters) with someone else's (exit quarters, meet Peppy), just for a sake of cohesion.

Nothing yet in store for the Krystal x General Pepper section, though I do have something in mind... But if you guys want to go ahead and beat me to it, be my guest!

[gamerfox]

Someone give me suggestions for the threesome with Katt and Fox branch.