Hentai: Peach's Untold Tale 3.48 (Nov 2/18) - HIATUS

[yurinicolau]

Ok! Here's the other one I was working on: The TONGUE OUT MOUTH!!! I also put the other mouths at old Peach just for fun...

Tongue out mouth is back!!! :D

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Hey Ivan, I think the "new open mouth" that you had improved would be perfect if the lips get thicker!

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Now it's not that open anymore... I'm sending you the updated file with (FINALLY!) the tongue out mouth version done with the pentool!

[yurinicolau]

Ok go ahead! I'll improve the mouth now. She still appears like a woman from 80's. Or a singer. We will choose those mouths in the second round.
PS: Yuri, I adjusted the color (a bit red) because , on a distance, we dont see her mouth well.

Round 1:

I vote for: 1 (first one) and 3 (third one).

Round 2:

And for this round I vote only for: 3 (the third one).

[AsianP3rsuas10n]

Vote

Round 1: 1
Round 2: 1


And no big lips!!!
Big lips wont fit her face. It would look derpy again just like the old peach.
Everyone! Take a coffee, tea, water break! Lets all have a days worth of rest away from LoK. I think everyone needs one. Lets go outside, gym, xbox, Ps3, on a date, or just masturbate or something. To releive all the stress. Then we come back and our ideas will improve 10 fold!!!!
Sooner or later our brains will be fried and someone is going to suggest turning Peach into a man...and thats when everything goes downhill.

[Oriandu]

The new lips are too round and a little too large for her face, if anything you should focus more on the typical "sharp" lip design that a lot of women go for. Accentuate the curves of the mouth instead of making it look like her lipstick is just smeared on.

[yurinicolau]

Sooner or later our brains will be fried and someone is going to suggest turning Peach into a man...and thats when everything goes downhill.

ahahahahhaha! You bring the topic Asian... And since I drank too much coffee I did a little research... Now, for your nightmare I present you...

Hell door number 1:

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Hell door number 2:

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Hell door number 3:

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Now... Something to clear our minds of those HARD images:

[AsianP3rsuas10n]

[yurinicolau]

For God's sake! I didn't know, but there actually is a game called Super Princess Peach! Let's enter her world, shall we?

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SUPER PRINCESS PEACH: THE GAME
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WA7axEF387s&feature=endscreen&NR=1

[Ivan-Aedler]

Hey Ivan, I think the "new open mouth" that you had improved would be perfect if the lips get thicker!

Hmm now I dont agree a bit. Her mouth in your pic above is a bit BIG. Its like she's a singer from 80's, or even a clown, I dont know. Due to her head size, her mouth really needs to be smaller and moved down. Just check the mouth 'contest' in the last page. I've put a correct mouth size. This is more anatomic correct. I'll check the FLA, thanks, man!

Now... Something to clear our minds of those HARD images:

This one I remember. A nice one!

I didn't know, but there actually is a game called Super Princess Peach! Let's enter her world, shall we?

I've talked about this, I think on page 100, or 110 (during the voting pool about the new name of this game). I've said that game was too childlish, and bad graphics :/ But the plot is interesting
Hey I like that booty. A nice new inspiration to make that position, finally, on MIM.

Lets all have a days worth of rest away from LoK. I think everyone needs one. Lets go outside, gym, xbox, Ps3, on a date, or just masturbate or something.

Hey!! Xbox? PS3? It will turn the case worse!

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And, interesting enough, for about the months (open one), I still prefer the 3rd more than 1st. That one was used by Playshapes and it uses the 'tiny lipstick' style in a better way. The only duty now is to improve her other mouths. I'll also maintain the 3rd mouth of round1 for some scenes/meetings (she needs to be sad in some areas).

To releive all the stress. Then we come back and our ideas will improve 10 fold!!!!

Fitness exercise is better!

[QuizmasterBos]

But seriously though, those eyes are creepy.

And since we're on the subject of eyes, you had some feedback on the current eyes, yes? Well, I decided to make a little comparison picture to see that IF the eyes should be changed, that they should resemble actual Peach's eyes more. Now, although you said you had some pictures to base them off, I made it anyway. If it's pointless, I don't mind. If it helps you, then here you go.

Hey QuizmasterBos, the eyes of my Peach Castle surely needs a change, but the current one at the standard Peach is quite beautiful, don't you think? My joke was about the picture (a drawing) that Ivan's posted... I still get shivers when I remember it!

Oh man I'm sorry, I was talking to Ivan at that point. Should have made that a little more clear.

All right! Now to what matters... Here's a new open mouth for Peach:

I'm possibly the only one that thinks your mouth isn't perfect. I feel like the mouth doesn't fit Peach that well.
Because of the way Peach's lipstick works, only the top and bottom parts of her lips would be thick.
Here's an example, it's from a 3DS mario game, so the picture is somewhat small, sorry:

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Here's another, a bit clearer picture, but her mouth isn't open that much:

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Will this help you, yuri?

By the way, in case it wasn't obvious: I vote for the third mouth, Ivan!

Ok! Here's the other one I was working on: The TONGUE OUT MOUTH!!! I also put the other mouths at old Peach just for fun...

That second expression is the hottest! Ivan, you gotta put that in!
But... why is her tongue so purple?

[Ivan-Aedler]

Because of the way Peach's lipstick works, only the top and bottom parts of her lips would be thick. Here's an example, it's from a 3DS mario game, so the picture is somewhat small, sorry:

You know, Quiz, that I REALLY want to make Peach better, resembing the real Peach as depicted in that games (like you've shown above). However, its being hard to adapt her new eyes. I'll keep trying in a background priority, though.

By the way, in case it wasn't obvious: I vote for the third mouth, Ivan!

But, in round 1 or 2 ? In regard to mouths, I really want to make a final decision, and I can maintain the 'kiss' style (mouth 1), and use the SAD mount for some scenes.
As for round 2, the 3th one is really the best one, because this uses the Peach's lipstick as expected.
Again, really, I want to maintain the 'young' style Peach. If someone else doesnt like her, I'm afraid. But a think I can do. I can create (or receive a vectorized part) then test it. Then I can say 'wow, now you did a good job! I'll discuss a bit more, and I may change that part'. However, remember that I need to do the other priorities. Interesting enough, I'm having more time (and mind) to code in the weekdays rather than on weekends.

That second expression is the hottest! Ivan, you gotta put that in! But... why is her tongue so purple?

Yuri is still coloring them. Or I can recolor them. The current color (round 1) is the best for her, because we can see her lips at a farther distance. Yes I will put that expression! And I may use that nose too.

[Allsop2604]

I'm really liking the looks of some of these mouths that are being posted. They bring Ivan's peach face together, complementing it nicely. I'm referring to pretty much all of the larger, lusher lips posted by Yurinicolau. Regarding open mouths or not... the more expressions the better! My favourite aspect of this game, maybe the most arousing part, was Peach's facial reactions and expressions! Looking forward to whatever you guys decide on implementing.

[Ivan-Aedler]

I'm really liking the looks of some of these mouths that are being posted. They bring Ivan's peach face together, complementing it nicely. I'm referring to pretty much all of the larger, lusher lips posted by Yurinicolau. Regarding open mouths or not... the more expressions the better! My favourite aspect of this game, maybe the most arousing part, was Peach's facial reactions and expressions! Looking forward to whatever you guys decide on implementing.

Thaks for the feedback We will take yours into account. As for larger lips (as below), I still think they're too big for Peach face :/

[yurinicolau]

But... why is her tongue so purple?

AHahahahh! I was just waiting that no one would coment that... Well... I confess... I LOVE THAT GOD DAMN PURPLE TONGUE! (I stole the tones from Tifas tongue ) But I know that Peach's tongue is usually reproduced in pink tones... All right Quiz... I'll change it to Peach's standard color... But, Ivan, maybe at least for Peach Castle we can let her tongue purple, right???

I'm really liking the looks of some of these mouths that are being posted. They bring Ivan's peach face together, complementing it nicely. I'm referring to pretty much all of the larger, lusher lips posted by Yurinicolau. Regarding open mouths or not... the more expressions the better! My favourite aspect of this game, maybe the most arousing part, was Peach's facial reactions and expressions! Looking forward to whatever you guys decide on implementing.

Thank you for the feedback man! And I must say, since I first saw your "gif pic" here at the forum, I can only think of you as KAKASHI! I really like that character at Naruto series!
P.S. And also it's very funny, because Kakashi from time to time is always reading some erotic book! So for me, at this forum, for all purposes, you are KAKASHI! hahhahah!!!

As for larger lips (as below), I still think they're too big for Peach face :/

Seriously man? You are having the impression that the "open mouth" is making her look like " a clown"??? Because, man, I surely do not have that impression... You know that the open mouth is for when she is surprised right? So no one opens "just a little" the mouth when surprised, it's the hole way out, in other word, at maximum range! I did like the colors you choose for the lipstick, I just couldn't reproduce it at my previously pics (not the hard ones , the ones that have old Peach and the new mouths). By the way, I think that you made the first mouth at the Round 2 a bit too small (that's probably because of the "clown" impression you're having! LOL ).

[QuizmasterBos]

Because of the way Peach's lipstick works, only the top and bottom parts of her lips would be thick. Here's an example, it's from a 3DS mario game, so the picture is somewhat small, sorry:

You know, Quiz, that I REALLY want to make Peach better, resembing the real Peach as picted in that games (like you've shown above). However, its being hard to adapt her new eyes. I'll keep trying in a background priority, though.

I do not know why when you make Peach's eyes resemble the actual games more, that they become less attractive. The mouth could be more like the Peach mouth though, with the mouth voting pools the third matches the game the best and are the hottest in my opinion.

By the way, in case it wasn't obvious: I vote for the third mouth, Ivan!

But, in round 1 or 2 ? In regard to mouths, I really want to make a final decision, and I can maintain the 'kiss' style (mouth 1), and use the SAD mount for some scenes.
As for round 2, the 3th one is really the best one, because this uses the Peach's lipstick as expected.
Again, really, I want to maintain the 'young' style Peach. If someone else doesnt like her, I'm afraid. But a think I can do. I can create (or receive a vectorized part) then test it. Then I can say 'wow, now you did a good job! I'll discuss a bit more, and I may change that part'. However, remember that I need to do the other priorities. Interesting enough, I'm having more time (and mind) to code in the weekdays rather than on weekends.

Both round one and round 2! And you shouldn't be so afraid that people end up not liking your design. Every person is different and although many think of something as being hot, not everyone agrees. It's best to go with the masses on this one. If out of 100 people 98 love the design and 2 don't, then don't worry about those two.
And aren't you forgetting that you can use multiple mouths?

That second expression is the hottest! Ivan, you gotta put that in! But... why is her tongue so purple?

Yuri is still coloring them. Or I can recolor them. The current color (round 1) is the best for her, because we can see her lips at a farther distance. Yes I will put that expression! And I may use that nose too.

But... why is her tongue so purple?

AHahahahh! I was just waiting that no one would coment that... Well... I confess... I LOVE THAT GOD DAMN PURPLE TONGUE! (I stole the tones from Tifas tongue ) But I know that Peach's tongue is usually reproduced in pink tones... All right Quiz... I'll change it to Peach's standard color... But, Ivan, maybe at least for Peach Castle we can let her tongue purple, right???

Truth be told, I noticed it before. I just never said anything until now. I was too scared of being judged back then. But all your positive feedback has given me the courage to say what I think, at all times. But if I'm being too honest, do not be afraid to say it!

As for larger lips (as below), I still think they're too big for Peach face :/

Seriously man? You are having the impression that the "open mouth" is making her look like " a clown"??? Because, man, I surely do not have that impression... You know that the open mouth is for when she is surprised right? So no one opens "just a little" the mouth when surprised, it's the hole way out, in other word, at maximum range! I did like the colors you choose for the lipstick, I just couldn't reproduce it at my previously pics (not the hardones , the ones that have old Peach and the new mouths). By the way, I think that you made the first mouth at the Round 2 a bit too small (that's probably because of the "clown" impression you're having! LOL ).

I wouldn't say it looks like a clown, but I do think that the mouth is too thick. As I've stated above, the third mouth in Ivan's voting pool is the best, because it resembles Peach's mouth the most and is the most appealing in my opinion.

[Ivan-Aedler]

Well... I confess... I LOVE THAT GOD DAMN PURPLE TONGUE! (I stole the tones from Tifas tongue ) But I know that Peach's tongue is usually reproduced in pink tones... All right Quiz... I'll change it to Peach's standard color... But, Ivan, maybe at least for Peach Castle we can let her tongue purple, right???

No problem!

Seriously man? You are having the impression that the "open mouth" is making her look like " a clown"???

Its true :/ But the same occurred when I first made the new Peach (people were saying she's derpy and veeeery odd), and I was like that too , but please, try to understand. Its the view/the perspective/ the general appearance that Peach casts to people. So I really see her mouth as big.

Because, man, I surely do not have that impression... You know that the open mouth is for when she is surprised right? So no one opens "just a little" the mouth when surprised, it's the hole way out, in other word, at maximum range! I did like the colors you choose for the lipstick, I just couldn't reproduce it at my previously pics (not the hard ones

Just see the round1, Yuri. Now, the mouth is correctly placed and sized. Really. Of course we can have a 'more open' mouth as a new mouth for some special scenes, provided we keep the outlines (lipstick) thinner, and, to maintain the geisha style, it should be even thinner at the sides (like mouth 3 round 2)

PS: but your mouth became nice with the old Peach (so the problem is this! The new Peach uses a different face and eyes, in a way the thick mouth does not work well).

I think that you made the first mouth at the Round 2 a bit too small (that's probably because of the "clown" impression you're having! LOL ).

But THAT was what I said above. That should be the right size, really. You know, there are times we need to stand up, walk, think a bit about it, then seat down and verify the image again. If people had not alert me in the first new peach face, she might be in the game I liked her A LOT (liked! Because I dont like anymore). I've seen the truth under this face, after 'walking a bit outside my home'.

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I do not know why when you make Peach's eyes resemble the actual games more, that they become less attractive. The mouth could be more like the Peach mouth though, with the mouth voting pools the third matches the game the best and are the hottest in my opinion.

Yes, and that mouth will stay. Some of Yuri ones are better, though, like the kissing mouth. I know Yuri has made a lot of work on this and he deserves it, because it's better and rounder (pic 1 of round 1).

Both round one and round 2! And you shouldn't be so afraid that people end up not liking your design. Every person is different and although many think of something as being hot, not everyone agrees. It's best to go with the masses on this one. If out of 100 people 98 love the design and 2 don't, then don't worry about those two. And aren't you forgetting that you can use multiple mouths?

Yes I can use multiple ones. But for now, I wills tick with 1 for round 1, and 3 for round 2, and I will see if I can use her other mouths in some scenes.

[yurinicolau]

all your positive feedback has given me the courage to say what I think, at all times. But if I'm being too honest, do not be afraid to say it!

Hey Quiz, I'm actually very glad that you can be straight about your opinions! This is a WIN man!!! Because if people in the forum start not comment what they really think or simply commenting the most polish thing they can think of, then this forum would be pointless... So feel free to say what you think man! I will always listen, though I may not agree 100% all times, but THAT'S WHAT IS ALL ABOUT!!! Different opinions, perspective, this actually improves our relashionship here at the forum, and MIM game experience too! SO NEVER HOLD BACK. Also, I'm all about helping MIM become an even more complete porn game experience! And I'm fully aware that all my contributions (a few artworks, lot's of ideas, some dialogues too) are aways a bet, they won't necessary be in the game, and I'm ok with that... We, here at Ivan's page, are really having a role at this game confection! Ivan is an open mind person and a very good listenner, that's why this game is always becoming better and better! Not only Ivan, but all our minds are into it!!

Cheers!

[Ivan-Aedler]

1 - a bit open, 2 - open (scared, surprise), 3 - deepthroat mode.
PS: I can use the playshapes one to the mouth 2.

[QuizmasterBos]

1 - a bit open, 2 - open (scared), 3 - deepthroat mode.
PS: I can use the playshapes one to the mouth 2.

It seems clear that these are not actually the same mouth, or at least they don't seem like it.
All need work, but the third one the most; her mouth grows but her face doesn't stretch resulting in a very weird look.
From first glance, the size of the second mouth is the most correct; the size of the other two are either too small or too large.

Another problem is that her expressions don't match her face.
The first one looks like she is a bit confused with that "Huh?!" mouth.
The second one is as if someone asked her "open wide!"
The third one just looks unreasonably sized. Not much of an expression there.

all your positive feedback has given me the courage to say what I think, at all times. But if I'm being too honest, do not be afraid to say it!

Hey Quiz, I'm actually very glad that you can be straight about your opinions! This is a WIN man!!! Because if people in the forum start not comment what they really think or simply commenting the most polish thing they can think of, then this forum would be pointless... So feel free to say what you think man! I will always listen, though I may not agree 100% all times, but THAT'S WHAT IS ALL ABOUT!!! Different opinions, perspective, this actually improves our relashionship here at the forum, and MIM game experience too! SO NEVER HOLD BACK. Also, I'm all about helping MIM become an even more complete porn game experience! And I'm fully aware that all my contributions (a few artworks, lot's of ideas, some dialogues too) are aways a bet, they won't necessary be in the game, and I'm ok with that... We, here at Ivan's page, are really having a role at this game confection! Ivan is an open mind person and a very good listenner, that's why this game is always becoming better and better! Not only Ivan, but all our minds are into it!!

Cheers!

Thank you for the nice compliments, yuri. You're being very nice and are doing a fantastic job helping out. I can't do what you can!

[Ivan-Aedler]

It seems clear that these are not actually the same mouth, or at least they don't seem like it.

Yes, they are the same mouth!

All need work, but the third one the most; her mouth grows but her face doesn't stretch resulting in a very weird look.

Thats why I prefer to use playshapes one in 1) and 2). As for 3), I see Yuri mouth becomes interesting for deepthroats, however, I'll need to create code to increase her jaw and animate it, because I cant just increase her head. I call this 'jaw open , jaw close animation code'. I prefer to do this when I have more sex scenes.

From first glance, the size of the second mouth is the most correct; the size of the other two are either too small or too large.

The size of 1) was done on purpose.

[Residentlover2]

i dont like the ticker mouth anyway it is a detail xD i dont think that it has to be a big deal