Hentai: Peach's Untold Tale 3.48 (Nov 2/18) - HIATUS

[QuizmasterBos]

If you wanna try to improve it, since you already have done the other Peach comic's mouths, I think that would be the patch. But... If you wanna use Peach Castle mouth at Peachy, I see no problem in that!!! Here's a comparison:

I like it!! It just needs a bit more darker outline. This I can do. Let's see other opinions!

Well, I think the pink lips are a little too thick. You can make those a little bit thinner and make the hole in-between a bit bigger.
Also, try some slightly darker shades, if you play the game, you'd probably won't see them that well.

Yes, geisha mouths can be made for achievements (or the contrary: Peach Castle there). We can ask the high council.

I don't know exactly what those "geisha" mouths will look like, but if you can choose them from an achievement, why not? Just make sure they'll look good.

[Ivan-Aedler]

I think we should add more Hair styles to peach. What do you guys think of ponytails? I feel thats we customize her clothing and face so much we neglect other thing like her hair.

Planned. But I would like to add just three styles so far:
1) 'sleek style' (old ponytail)
2) actual one
3) racer peach style (smalller)

I don't know exactly what those "geisha" mouths will look like, but if you can choose them from an achievement, why not? Just make sure they'll look good.

Just a nickname for 'tiny/narrow lipstick' (which I really want to put it as default in this game). But the other (yuri) , once improved, can stay as default instead. However, all lips need to be changed.

[yurinicolau]

HOLY FUCKING CHRIST!!! Those eyes really spooky me out!!!

[Ivan-Aedler]

HOLY FUCKING CHRIST!!! Those eyes really spooky me out!!!

Hahahahahahaha! (not funny)

[QuizmasterBos]

HOLY FUCKING CHRIST!!! Those eyes really spooky me out!!!

Hahahahahahaha! (not funny)

Hahaha! I loved the memes.

But seriously though, those eyes are creepy.

And since we're on the subject of eyes, you had some feedback on the current eyes, yes? Well, I decided to make a little comparison picture to see that IF the eyes should be changed, that they should resemble actual Peach's eyes more. Now, although you said you had some pictures to base them off, I made it anyway. If it's pointless, I don't mind. If it helps you, then here you go.

Spoiler (click to show/hide):

Never mind the low resolution on the comparison pic, I had to use my browser's zoom function and that lowers the resolution, but it still does the job.

Now, for a short list of the differences (from your game's perspective):
- The line above her eyes are thicker than the comparison
- There is not as much "glare" on her eyes
- Peach has 6 short eyelashes instead of 3 big curvy ones
- The overall shape is less round
- The pupil is bigger in comparison with her iris
- There is no purple-ish line around the iris separating it from the white

So here you go, enough to experiment with, I'd say.

[Ivan-Aedler]

Ok, I'll make this eye and we will compare. Just wait.

[yurinicolau]

But seriously though, those eyes are creepy.

And since we're on the subject of eyes, you had some feedback on the current eyes, yes? Well, I decided to make a little comparison picture to see that IF the eyes should be changed, that they should resemble actual Peach's eyes more. Now, although you said you had some pictures to base them off, I made it anyway. If it's pointless, I don't mind. If it helps you, then here you go.

Hey QuizmasterBos, the eyes of my Peach Castle surely needs a change, but the current one at the standard Peach is quite beautiful, don't you think? My joke was about the picture (a drawing) that Ivan's posted... I still get shivers when I remember it!

All right! Now to what matters... Here's a new open mouth for Peach:

Big lips and tiny lips open mouth comparison :D

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Ivan, I'm sending to you in a couple of minutes!

[Ivan-Aedler]

Now to what matters... Here's a new open mouth for Peach:

Oh wait!! It's...good but...something is still wrong. Maybe the mouth is too big, and wide.

Quiz!!! Your eyes...right here!
Left: My version
Middle: 1st and 2nd attempt.
Right: After 21th attempt (revoved some lashes because they became strange ni this Peach).

CONTEST BEGAN!

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[yurinicolau]

Quiz!!! Your eyes...right here!

Now to what matters... Here's a new open mouth for Peach:

Oh wait!! It's...good but...something is still wrong. Maybe the mouth is too big, and wide.

Quiz!!! Your eyes...right here!

JESUS FUCKING CHRIST! These are even scarier them the other one!! For God's sake Ivan, you are gonna give me nightmares! She now have the look "Yesss... Sleep darling... SO I CAN CUT OF YOUR COCK WHILE YOU'RE ASLEEP!

[Ivan-Aedler]

JESUS FUCKING CHRIST! These are even scarier them the other one!! For God's sake Ivan, you are gonna give me nightmares! She now have the look "Yesss... Sleep darling... SO I CAN CUT OF YOUR COCK WHILE YOU'RE ASLEEP!

But I've made her better again, see above. I've re-edited this eye 10 times. Now, 11th.

[yurinicolau]

It's...good but...something is still wrong. Maybe the mouth is too big, and wide.

Are you sure?? Because as you always remembers me, in the game you can't give a 1000 zoom!

[yurinicolau]

But I've made her better again, see above. I've re-edited this eye 10 times. Now, 11th.

I just don't understand why you are trying to give her new eyes... The current ones are awesome! The problem is not your design is QuismasterBos picture that you are taking as base. Just take a look... The eyes you made for older Peach and for the comic Peach is AWAY better them this design you are trying to reproduce.

[Ivan-Aedler]

I just don't understand why you are trying to give her new eyes! The current ones are awesome!!! The problem is not your design is QuismasterBos picture that you are taking as base. Just take a look... The eyes you made for older Peach and for the comic Peach is AWAY better them this design you are trying to reproduce.

Hey calm down , I'm only testing. No way to include a new eye that way. I'm resting from coding and having some fun too

EDIT: updated above (last time) with a comparison.

[AsianP3rsuas10n]

I like the new mouth yuri
All it needed was a pink outline on the sides.


As for that blue orb on her chest. I think it needs to be more diagonal. Since her boobs pop out like that I would think the orb would be tilted rather than straight up. As of now it doesnt look like it is actually on her dress.


Erm well the eyes dont look THAT bad hahah. You guys may be a bit overreacting. But no that does look kinda creepy. On pupil is bigger than the other. Pretty something impossible even in any perspective. It either you see less of one or more of one. They need to be the same sizes. I'm hoping the white part of her eyes is a separate layer? If not thats what you should do.

Have a white layer any shape behind her face. Make sure her eye holes are not colored. And then put pupils in. The whit and the pupils would be behind the face layer. This would let you move around ur eyes evenly while giving the same perspective.

Of course who am I to tell you how to make a drawing haha. You probably already knew this but this was something i found useful for myself so I will store it here on this exact page.


EDIT:
Da fuq Ivan u just had to update it right when I post my idea. Now I look like an idiot. Thanks alot >_>

P.S calm down Yuri

[Ivan-Aedler]

As for that blue orb on her chest. I think it needs to be more diagonal. Since her boobs pop out like that I would think the orb would be tilted rather than straight up. As of now it doesnt look like it is actually on her dress.

How about now? (click to enlarge)

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Have a white layer any shape behind her face. Make sure her eye holes are not colored. And then put pupils in. The whit and the pupils would be behind the face layer. This would let you move around ur eyes evenly while giving the same perspective.

I know -.-

Da fuq Ivan u just had to update it right when I post my idea. Now I look like an idiot. Thanks alot >_>

I'm making tons of updated, but now I've finished.

[yurinicolau]

I like the new mouth yuri
All it needed was a pink outline on the sides.

All right! Thank you for the feedback!! I'll make the outlines thicker...

P.S calm down Yuri

P.S. I'm really starting to think that 800 ml of brazilian black coffee is too much!

[Ivan-Aedler]

black coffee

Tea is better!
Well, I've programmed today too, but I didnt give the news around here yet. There are some internal code that does not need even to be listed in changelogs. I may have optimized goomba code (say, 5% only). And I've changed keys for LEFT hand keyboard config. R is DO OVER key now. E: ATTACK. SHIFT: Run AND 'next scene'. This KILLS the 'jumping while going to next scene' problem.
Finally, I've included 'Press Space (or Shift)' in MESSAGEBOX area, when Peach is in a sex scene (to alert the player he needs to press space to continue the next scene and eventually exit the scene). This all will be upload soon (1.8.4)

[AsianP3rsuas10n]

@Yuri
No no dont add anything its perfect lol
I was just mentioning the improvement between the two.

@Ivan
And the blue orb looks better now Ivan. And yes I KNOW YOU KNOW >_>
dont gotta give me the -.- face.

[yurinicolau]

I don't know... Ivan I just used that new technique for the smooth out lines that you tought me.. But I think (ONLY IN THIS CASE) the mouth in the archive I gave you is better.

Left one>> thicker lines
Right one>> Normal lines

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If you figure ot how to improve it, please man, do it! I'm really not seem what can be done in this point... I'll start working at Tifa's "tongue out mouth" right now...

[Ivan-Aedler]

And the blue orb looks better now Ivan. And yes I KNOW YOU KNOW >_>
dont gotta give me the -.- face.

Ok, I'll never put that face (-.-) again!

If you figure ot how to improve it, please man, do it! I'm really not seem what can be done in this point... I'll start working at Tifa's "tongue out mouth" right now...

Ok go ahead! I'll improve the mouth now. She still appears like a woman from 80's. Or a singer. We will choose those mouths in the second round.
PS: Yuri, I adjusted the color (a bit red) because , on a distance, we dont see her mouth well.

Round 1:

Spoiler (click to show/hide):

1, 2 or 3? Or 1 AND 2 (to be used in different expressions?) Or ALL THREE?

Round 2:

Spoiler (click to show/hide):

1, 2 or 3?