MPLDAM9919 Wrote:Wait...Didn't Mario fuck Peach in the beginning of the game off camera? That kinda doesn't make any sense for the virgin ending.
MPLDAM9919 Wrote:Also, when are you gonna start the masterbating scenes for the toilet and bed in the X-Naut base?
MPLDAM9919 Wrote:And I like I've said before, each visit should be divided into three acts for each visit. (I.E. Act 1 the potion mishap, Act 2 TEC-XXX sex scene, Act 3 getting the key for the lockers and then leaving the base).
MPLDAM9919 Wrote:Also, I was thinking you shouldn't meet Sir Grodus till like the 4th or 5th visit to the base. It's a great way to build up the story in the base.
AsianP3rsuas10n Wrote:Paper Mario Sticker Star sucks...end of story.
I'm leaving the US to travel to Japan and punching the creator in the face for making this game.
MPLDAM9919 Wrote:An idea has occurred. The more Peach masterbates and cums afterwards (3 or more), it should count as "HORNY" in the results screen. And Peach's pussy will be more and more wet everytime she cums from masterbation.
AsianP3rsuas10n Wrote:Hey Ivan! How ya doin? You workin hard? Or Hardly workin?
AsianP3rsuas10n Wrote:Geez its like this thread slowed down so much...Guess its about that time everyone sat down and had a nice cup of tea.
ivanaedler Wrote:AsianP3rsuas10n Wrote:Geez its like this thread slowed down so much...Guess its about that time everyone sat down and had a nice cup of tea.
Hey take it easy! We dont need 100 new posts a day Sometimes a quieter environment is good. I dont care if, someday, this topic became full of cobwebs.
QuizmasterBos Wrote:The thread has indeed slowed down quite a bit
QuizmasterBos Wrote:- Since Asian still has no internet, I cannot collaborate on new ideas and changes with him.
QuizmasterBos Wrote:- The idea bit is pretty much done for now anyway.
QuizmasterBos Wrote:- Every thread has a down-time at some point.
QuizmasterBos Wrote:I just took one, so this time my mind has been taking me into the psychology behind the title "Princess Peach World: An Embarassing Adventure". Now a little while ago, I posted that the title was too long and that Princess Peach World should be shortened. But actually, that's not the problem. It has to do with how games with long titles are generally referred to.
Take The Legend of Zelda for example. The game series itself is shortened to Zelda most of the time. Since The Legend of Zelda is quite a mouthful.
QuizmasterBos Wrote:If you say it out loud, you know it sounds good. Why? Because it is unnecessary for one thing, but... there is just one syllable per world, making it roll of the tongue.
QuizmasterBos Wrote:Now let's take this info and translate that to the supposed new title of the game. Given that in Zelda, if you refer to a specific game, you say the subtitle only. Therefore, the same will likely happen with An Embarassing Adventure. Meaning that what's in front of the colon {the :} can be as long as you want. The An will instead be left out when spoken and even when being written. So it will be Embarassing Adventure then? Well no, you still notice that it doesn't sound right. Because Embarassing has 4 syllables and Adventure 3, the total becomes seven and that's just one too many. Try changing the -ing to an -ed and it sounds alright, but now the title doesn't make sense. So in conclusion, the title is alright, I just think the word Embarassing should be changed into another word OR Adventure should be changed ito a word with just 2 syllables. Like 'Story' for instance.
ivanaedler Wrote:For sure Princess Peach World can be known as 'Princess Peach' or just 'Peach: AEA'. (which can refer to 'ahh! eehhh!') interjections
ivanaedler Wrote:QuizmasterBos Wrote:If you say it out loud, you know it sounds good. Why? Because it is unnecessary for one thing, but... there is just one syllable per world, making it roll of the tongue.
I cant think of saying 'An Emba Adven', or 'Full Embarass'. Maybe 'Princess Peach World: Embarass!' There are words that just cant be shortened further. But people can find a way (like AEA).
ivanaedler Wrote:QuizmasterBos Wrote:Now let's take this info and translate that to the supposed new title of the game. Given that in Zelda, if you refer to a specific game, you say the subtitle only. Therefore, the same will likely happen with An Embarassing Adventure. Meaning that what's in front of the colon {the :} can be as long as you want. The An will instead be left out when spoken and even when being written. So it will be Embarassing Adventure then? Well no, you still notice that it doesn't sound right. Because Embarassing has 4 syllables and Adventure 3, the total becomes seven and that's just one too many. Try changing the -ing to an -ed and it sounds alright, but now the title doesn't make sense. So in conclusion, the title is alright, I just think the word Embarassing should be changed into another word OR Adventure should be changed ito a word with just 2 syllables. Like 'Story' for instance.
Synonyms of 'Embarass': shy, disconcert, abash, chagrin, discomfit, faze, rattle. (I doubt the others but shy are good sounding ones).
The third Round (voting pool) will be with the best arranged name (following the winner phrase meaning). I may finish the second round tomorrow.
- (An) Embarassing Tale (AET)
- (An) Embarassed Lady (AEL)
- Embarassed! (E)
- Peach World: A Shy/Embarassed Princess
- (An) Embarassing Story (AES)
QuizmasterBos Wrote:I like An Embarassing Tale and An Embarassing Story the most. As I said, you can keep the 'An' since people will automatically leave it out anyways, but if you don't want it, that's fine.
ivanaedler Wrote:QuizmasterBos Wrote:I like An Embarassing Tale and An Embarassing Story the most. As I said, you can keep the 'An' since people will automatically leave it out anyways, but if you don't want it, that's fine.
Its not the fact I dont want it. I really want to put a name which many people have chosen. How about that list to choose from:
- (An) Embarassing Tale (AET)
- Princess Peach: Embarassed! (E)
- Peach World: A Shy Princess
- Princess Peach: An Ashamed Lady (AAL)
- Peach World: An Ashamed Princess
- Princess Peach: An Embarassing Tale / Story (AET, AES)
- Princess Peach: An Embarassing Quest
LuftMallow Wrote:Here's the nurse's uniform Ivanaedler wanted. It's a bit more modest than I originally envisioned, but the more open front I had at first didn't look right between the different poses and breasts sizes.I'm thinking of adding some gloves and stockings later when I decide what I want to do with them.
LuftMallow Wrote:Here's the nurse's uniform Ivanaedler wanted. It's a bit more modest than I originally envisioned, but the more open front I had at first didn't look right between the different poses and breasts sizes.I'm thinking of adding some gloves and stockings later when I decide what I want to do with them. To make up for it, I touched up some of the other tops like Peach's dress and the fire princess one. I didn't do Rosalina's dress though, but it looks like it has a bunch of unnecessary curves that can be removed while making it look better.
AsianP3rsuas10n Wrote:Paper Mario Sticker Star sucks...end of story.
QuizmasterBos Wrote:The only thing that looks a little odd to me is the hat/cap in the sideways view. It looks too thin almost, as if it's been cut-off.
ivanaedler Wrote:
Darthan Wrote:Looks good, other than the fact that it looks like someone broke Larry's left hand off then glued it on sideways.
LuftMallow Wrote:Here's the nurse's uniform Ivanaedler wanted. It's a bit more modest than I originally envisioned, but the more open front I had at first didn't look right between the different poses and breasts sizes.I'm thinking of adding some gloves and stockings later when I decide what I want to do with them. To make up for it, I touched up some of the other tops like Peach's dress and the fire princess one. I didn't do Rosalina's dress though, but it looks like it has a bunch of unnecessary curves that can be removed while making it look better.Spoiler (click to show/hide):
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