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Re: KaTsuO_O's Krystal models

Postby KaTsuO_O » Wed Jan 19, 2011 8:09 am

@ronpepper thanx! I allways have the forum open in my webrowser so that i can check if any new post has arived, when i dont check for new post i work even if im online here.
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Re: KaTsuO_O's Krystal models

Postby Blaze » Wed Jan 19, 2011 3:27 pm

Sorry to say kat but the krystal mod is made up of several mods, anyway all fallout sex animations are rubbish, LOK is vastly supperior.

Here is side shot of another 3d krystal, you'll have to use your ablity to see through the cum: http://ychan.ca/f/3d+krystal/82221
http://ychan.ca/f/3d+krystal/63795

By the way does your ablity let you see through girls clothes. ha
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Re: KaTsuO_O's Krystal models

Postby ronpepper » Wed Jan 19, 2011 7:35 pm

@blaze: Another 3d Krystal? How much of that rubbish is out there? :D 2d all the way!
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Re: KaTsuO_O's Krystal models

Postby KaTsuO_O » Wed Jan 19, 2011 10:31 pm

I havent got much time to work on the styles so this is the what i can show for now:
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I hope i can get some time tomorrow and also alot of time on the week end so i get everything done to sunday 24:00 (12:00)

@Blaze i wouldnt realy say that i can see through stuff but i get a preaty clear view of whats behind, so yeah basicly i can see through clothes.
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Re: KaTsuO_O's Krystal models

Postby trunks2585 » Thu Jan 20, 2011 2:17 am

Hmm, the bangs could be longer for sure, and the bottom of her jaw i'd keep a straight line or a smooth soft curve going inward (like on your last model) rather than having it swell out like in this one. The muzzle looks pretty much right though, not too long or thick.
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Re: KaTsuO_O's Krystal models

Postby KaTsuO_O » Thu Jan 20, 2011 5:47 pm

The jaw looked like that because the head was rotated but i did some perspective changes and made her look to the side instead.

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Re: KaTsuO_O's Krystal models

Postby trunks2585 » Thu Jan 20, 2011 6:27 pm

looking better, keep it up.
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Re: KaTsuO_O's Krystal models

Postby KaTsuO_O » Thu Jan 20, 2011 7:54 pm

thanx, im glad that you didnt find anything wrong with it.

Next one up:
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Edit and heres an other one:
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Im sorry if you find it anoying when they change direction... The ears wont be like that later.
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Re: KaTsuO_O's Krystal models

Postby trunks2585 » Thu Jan 20, 2011 8:29 pm

Hmm I'm kinda indifferent about the second one. On the third the hair should come down a bit more, not be so high up on the head, i think it was just like that in the picture because of the angle of krystal and from her position and whatnot. The muzzle might be a bit too long but i wouldn't touch it till you get some eyes on it and see how it looks then.
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Re: KaTsuO_O's Krystal models

Postby KaTsuO_O » Thu Jan 20, 2011 9:06 pm

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Re: KaTsuO_O's Krystal models

Postby trunks2585 » Thu Jan 20, 2011 9:30 pm

the eye is pretty good, the only thing I would do personally, is you see how you have that extended eyelash effect coming off the top of her eye? add a smaller one like that to the other side of her top eye as well, and don't be afraid to have the top of her eyelid hiding part of the eye (that's what they are there for after all) it'll make the style look more complete.
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Re: KaTsuO_O's Krystal models

Postby KaTsuO_O » Thu Jan 20, 2011 9:39 pm

Thanx for the suggestion, it made a lot better.
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I dont think i need to make many more, allready got over 4 so whats left is to make them done.
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Re: KaTsuO_O's Krystal models

Postby Bussa » Fri Jan 21, 2011 5:46 am

You're doing great Kat! They are all looking like they will turn out well!
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Re: KaTsuO_O's Krystal models

Postby KaTsuO_O » Sat Jan 22, 2011 12:13 am

@Bussa thanx, I appreciate it.

Got an other eyeshape done.
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Re: KaTsuO_O's Krystal models

Postby trunks2585 » Sat Jan 22, 2011 3:18 am

to be honest i just don't care for this head in general, i think it has a chunky feel to it try to reverse the curve of the jaw. The eye itself isn't too bad, might wanna add that eyelash effect to the top eyelid like you did for the bottom, i really don't know how well that's go on this model but it's worth playing around with. in general i think your eyes are getting better, your starting to learn what to do and not do when you draw them, rather than just copying what you see.
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Re: KaTsuO_O's Krystal models

Postby KaTsuO_O » Sat Jan 22, 2011 3:45 am

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I wouldnt improve my drawing skills if you didnt teach me how to do stuff like jaws and eyes so im very thankful for everything.
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Re: KaTsuO_O's Krystal models

Postby trunks2585 » Sat Jan 22, 2011 4:09 am

hmm still doesn't quit look right, maybe if you move the fur that comes off her cheeks in more. I was looking at the other heads and the main model to see and yeah, the starting point of the cheek fur is usually just before the start of the ear and hangs down a little below the jaw, look back at your first model and compare how the fur there looks to what you have now.

Edit: ears could probably shift forward as well.
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Re: KaTsuO_O's Krystal models

Postby KaTsuO_O » Sat Jan 22, 2011 5:11 am

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I think im going to move the fur back but i dont know.
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Re: KaTsuO_O's Krystal models

Postby trunks2585 » Sat Jan 22, 2011 6:06 am

that's not really what i ment. the side view of her head, it's too wide, the area between her eye to her ear, it all needs to be narrowed.
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Re: KaTsuO_O's Krystal models

Postby KaTsuO_O » Sat Jan 22, 2011 6:29 am

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