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Re: MiM 'Mim AE' (XXX) 1.8 (nov 06/12)

Postby coolness32 » Sat Nov 10, 2012 10:29 am

ivanaedler Wrote:
coolness32 Wrote:I do like the Luigi you have, the idea so far is that he is going to say stories? (I think that's what I read)

Yes. But he will be fucking Peach too (player will be able to choose, of course). Because there are people (including myself) who want to protect Peach until finding Mario. ;)


Seeing as I cosplayed as Mario...I want to save Peach for Mario as well!

I want to see your ideas for the new game, but I also want this game to get more completed. I really like it and I wish my computer didn't suck so much so that I could play it on more than "low" graphic settings.
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Re: MiM 'Mim AE' (XXX) 1.8 (nov 06/12)

Postby AsianP3rsuas10n » Sat Nov 10, 2012 11:24 am

See now The Legend of Peach series must go on! We could make them chapters like a book!!!! And it will consists of all of Peach's adventures.

Ch.1 Missing Mario
Ch.2 The Paper Life (regarding to Paper Peach's look as well as comic)

And so on! It's a great Idea! But only 9 votes?!? What are you thinking people!! :lol:

Man I cannot wait to get back on my computer to work on more stuff. I'm likin it Ivan! This has pursued my dream of making games even further!!!

Anyways, rememer Palcomix? They just finished their 3rd Mario comic! Which you should look at! Not only do they have yoshi fucking birdo, but they also have a funny scene with Mario and Peach in which I think would be funny to have as an ending. Please go check it out when you have the time. Its a great read!

Heres the link if others want to see it too!
http://palcomix.com/mario3/index.html
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Re: MiM 'Mim AE' (XXX) 1.8 (nov 06/12)

Postby QuizmasterBos » Sat Nov 10, 2012 12:16 pm

coolness32 Wrote:I want to see your ideas for the new game, but I also want this game to get more completed. I really like it and I wish my computer didn't suck so much so that I could play it on more than "low" graphic settings.

What browser are you playing it on? If you're playing in FireFox, then the game lags a lot. Try playing it in Chrome, or downloading the swf and then turning it into an exe.
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Re: MiM 'Mim AE' (XXX) 1.8 (nov 06/12)

Postby Ivan-Aedler » Sat Nov 10, 2012 12:27 pm

AsianP3rsuas10n Wrote:See now The Legend of Peach series must go on! We could make them chapters like a book!!!! And it will consists of all of Peach's adventures.
Ch.1 Missing Mario
Ch.2 The Paper Life (regarding to Paper Peach's look as well as comic)

Wait!! I dont want to regard the new Peach as paper :/ I may call her Cute Peach. Remember she would have a 'full body'. She will not flip.
As for the name, I want to let people know the best name for all those chapters (it can be Legend of Peach, or an interesting name). Also, chapter 1 could be the choosen name in the pool (like embarassing adventure), because 'missing mario' is already done ;) BUT! If Ch.1 , Ch2, Ch3 is actually new ones (from Cute Peach), for sure 'Missing Mario' could be used. So its like Ch1 would be played in some levels of MIM AE with the goal to find Mario, like the current game, but , of course, with a different plot and characters.

AsianP3rsuas10n Wrote:And so on! It's a great Idea! But only 9 votes?!? What are you thinking people!! :lol:

It will be a new game. Please wait. I'll be drawing her at first. I prefer to make some comics first (basic level). And on a priority level -8 or during my rest from MIM AE.

AsianP3rsuas10n Wrote:Man I cannot wait to get back on my computer to work on more stuff. I'm likin it Ivan! This has pursued my dream of making games even further!!!

I'm really glad for this! ;) I'm looking forward from seeing you design using only the pen tool ;) But remember we need to study and work too :lol:

AsianP3rsuas10n Wrote:Anyways, rememer Palcomix? They just finished their 3rd Mario comic! Which you should look at! Not only do they have yoshi fucking birdo, but they also have a funny scene with Mario and Peach in which I think would be funny to have as an ending. Please go check it out when you have the time. Its a great read!

I'll read it when I come back! Thanks! EDIT: Hey, I didnt like goombella style, maybe her eyes are too big and with thicker lashes. Also, too bad they didnt make a nude scene with Mario and Peach when they're arguing. But I like her short ponytail style. I may create a variation of her hair for this current game.

coolness32 Wrote:I want to see your ideas for the new game, but I also want this game to get more completed. I really like it and I wish my computer didn't suck so much so that I could play it on more than "low" graphic settings.

I'll base the new game as in Paper Mario 2, but for sure it will have tons of new ideas and scenes. The only reason to use , say, Paper Mario levels and backgrounds is to revive the same levels but with another perspective. I'll create the plot in another day. As for low game speed, try to:
1) use chrome
2) use the standalone flash player (projector), so you can decrease window size instead of lowering quality.
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Re: MiM 'Mim AE' (XXX) 1.8 (nov 06/12)

Postby -Soloid- » Sat Nov 10, 2012 4:45 pm

QuizmasterBos Wrote:I just noticed... Soloid, are you having trouble drawing limbs?

Not particulary, why?

QuizmasterBos Wrote:Peach's feet are off. They are too small.

I didn't change them. I think they are good this size. I took enough time to make a good construction on my original drawing, and the proportion of the feet looks good.

QuizmasterBos Wrote:Peach's hands are a lot better, but the line separating the hand from the arm looks a little odd.

I changed it. This line is actually the fold that the hand makes in this position But I cut it a bit so it doesn't seems detached.

QuizmasterBos Wrote:This time I made sure I checked everything well. The rest is fine. I hope you will try and improve it, you are a really good artist!

Thank you!

And I curved some lines, in particular on the feet!
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Re: MiM 'Mim AE' (XXX) 1.8 (nov 06/12)

Postby Ivan-Aedler » Sat Nov 10, 2012 5:10 pm

-Soloid- Wrote:I didn't change them. I think they are good this size. I took enough time to make a good construction on my original drawing, and the proportion of the feet looks good.

Please allow me to show a possible improvement to her feet (I did it quickly using mspaint).

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Re: MiM 'Mim AE' (XXX) 1.8 (nov 06/12)

Postby -Soloid- » Sat Nov 10, 2012 5:19 pm

ivanaedler Wrote:Please allow me to show a possible improvement to her feet (I did it quickly using mspaint).]


I just curved the heels a bit.

ivanaedler Wrote:(I did it quickly using mspaint).]

Hm, I think this looks a bit strange, especially with the joint between the foot and the calf. Here are some references, and as you can see, the foot makes a sort of pyramidal shape starting from the calf.
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Re: MiM 'Mim AE' (XXX) 1.8 (nov 06/12)

Postby Ivan-Aedler » Sat Nov 10, 2012 5:27 pm

-Soloid- Wrote:Hm, I think this looks a bit strange, especially with the joint between the foot and the calf. Here are some references, and as you can see, the foot makes a sort of pyramidal shape starting from the calf.

Yes but I observed the feet on its overall shape. It's maybe now more even.

Other poses possible too!

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Re: MiM 'Mim AE' (XXX) 1.8 (nov 06/12)

Postby -Soloid- » Sat Nov 10, 2012 5:29 pm

ivanaedler Wrote:Yes but I observed the feet on its overall shape. It's maybe now more even.

Other poses possible too!]


Peach ballerina :D
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Re: MiM 'Mim AE' (XXX) 1.8 (nov 06/12)

Postby QuizmasterBos » Sat Nov 10, 2012 6:19 pm

-Soloid- Wrote:
ivanaedler Wrote:Yes but I observed the feet on its overall shape. It's maybe now more even.

Other poses possible too!]


Peach ballerina :D

Of course her feet have to be a little more relaxed, but her feet do look a lot better that way.

Also, Soloid, thank you for answering, but you missed my remarks on page 112. I made some comments about the face of your Peach. It's my 3rd to last comment.
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Re: MiM 'Mim AE' (XXX) 1.8 (nov 06/12)

Postby glm » Sat Nov 10, 2012 8:01 pm

Just putting my two cents in, but I must say that I love Soloid's Peach as is. Quiz's remarks are valid if you want a Peach that is really close to the in-game model, but as an alternate stylized version, Soloid's is perfectly fine the way it is, feet, face and all.
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Re: MiM 'Mim AE' (XXX) 1.8 (nov 06/12)

Postby Ivan-Aedler » Sat Nov 10, 2012 10:26 pm

Voting pool: Second round.

Thanks for all that voted for the first round.
Winners so far:
-Princess Peach World: An Embarassing Adventure
-Princess Peach: where is Mario?
-Mario is Missing: Princess Peach Diaries
-Princess Peach: Anything for Mario
-Mario is Missing AE (same name)

Now its time to vote for the second.
This may be the last round. I will let it active for 1 week maximum. After it, I will launch a process to rename the entire game right away.
Thanks!
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Re: MiM 'Mim AE' (XXX) 1.8 (nov 06/12)

Postby AsianP3rsuas10n » Sat Nov 10, 2012 11:23 pm

:o :o
>_> hmm...now i dont know what to vote for
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Re: MiM 'Mim AE' (XXX) 1.8 (nov 06/12)

Postby QuizmasterBos » Sat Nov 10, 2012 11:36 pm

glm Wrote:Just putting my two cents in, but I must say that I love Soloid's Peach as is. Quiz's remarks are valid if you want a Peach that is really close to the in-game model, but as an alternate stylized version, Soloid's is perfectly fine the way it is, feet, face and all.

The only thing that I think needs changing in my opinion is the eyes. The others things are more imperfections.
I'm not saying that this Peach has to look like the in-game Peach, but it needs to look like Peach in general, which Soloid does approach quite well aside from some little things.
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Re: MiM 'Mim AE' (XXX) 1.8 (nov 06/12)

Postby Ivan-Aedler » Sun Nov 11, 2012 1:03 am

Ok, I'm now adding x-naut outfit (by Luftmallow) to Peach (Done!)
:arrow: (CS5 FILE) Here is our Peach so far, 4 full poses with all clothes and hands (FLA file included, for those who can contribute, adding animations or clothes for each body part, or even to create a comic). Its just her 4 main poses (side, forward, frontside, backside).

Spoiler (click to show/hide):

You cant generate a SWF because it will throw errors (there are code inside clothing). But you can create a new pose, using each body part separately. You can duplicate, say, 'PeachMovingWalking', naming it 'Peach Falling', and then go inside it and change each part. You can also create a new clothing (entering each body part and copying/pasting the last two frames - just after 'x-naut' label, and naming as a new name, like 'NEW CLOTHING', then adding the shape. If you want to create these, remember you have to do this in all body parts and hands. Please dont move library files, otherwise, other users cannot update their Peaches without generating duplicates (me included). Let it as is.
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AsianP3rsuas10n Wrote::o :o >_> hmm...now i dont know what to vote for

We can use 'Legend of Princess Peach' to our Cute Peach character that I'll create, no problem ;)
I would like to retain 'Princess' in the titles.

BUSY DAY:Today was a busy day around here. After making those 6 characters from scratch, and remaking Luigi mansion objects, I've had to priorize things at work and at home. But, today, at least I've put the new pause menu screen from Soloid and the x-naut outfit (I didnt upload them yet). As for the pause menu, no moving checkerboard yet. I dont think its reeeeeeally necessary anyway, so far.

Ability to change clothes in each powerup, but the effect (like flying) depends on powerup, not the costume:
Remember that , in this game, you can change clothes according to new powerups, but the effect (e.g. being able to fly) is only activated when you take LEAF/RACCOON. If Peach is dressed as a raccoon because she takes Dress powerup, she will not be able to fly. BUT I may change that function. In the future, the player can change outfits only when he beats a given level / world that requires that outfit in particular, like x-naut level. So, after beating World 9, the player will be able to use x-naut outfit when selecting powerups, playing with her dressed like that. This is good because it will force you to beat a given world first (but the player will be able to change clothes he gathers in each world, inside Peach castle. More in the next item). Anyway, you will find plenty of powerups in the levels, so you will be able to play with new costumes. Remember you can see sex scenes in the gallery in an outfit you want (temporarily).

Clothes available in her castle -> she can use them regardless of actual powerup -> she will not change actual powerup!
Aside of this, I plan creating a way to change clothes the way the user wants , when Peach is in her castle. Peach will be able to change clothes when she collects them in definitive (E.g; World 1 => raccoon, World 2 => HammerBros, World 9 => x-naut). This clothing will be available in her castle. Then the player will be able to see her changing clothes (at least its a plan to do that), a simple animation of her removing the dress, for example, and putting another costume (can be inside a screen too, to avoid making different animations of sling bikinis and etc). Then she starts a given level/world with this clothing. (NO POWERUP is changed). If she is harmed or loses a life, of course she will lose clothing parts and, eventually, all of them.

LEVEL 2-3:
I've brainstormed more about the next features (remember the list I update most is here viewtopic.php?f=7&t=2265&p=185916#p185916). I would like to continue making the level 2-3 and detaching Peach castle from level 1-1, creating a level 0 for this castle. Then I want to make a new castle level for world 2 (so it will have just 4 levels so far) in order to start making world3, full of underwater levels! This will make me increase priority for Pokey scenes, Daisy character, and Big Bertha scenes (vore scenes). Non linear development (that is, going to World2, make some levels, then World3, then back to World2, then World4), works better for me, letting the development faster, without getting bored with same mechanics.

'GRAND' BUG of 'mixing levels':
However, I have a fear. I've got some strange problems with the game engine lately (those 'partial levels overlapping old levels' glitch) when finishing a given level (this happened twice. One of them, before entering inside the castle (level 1-8), and the other, when taking the coin to go out of X-naut level). Those are problems UNRELATED to coding bugs. So, I'll be cautious. If, someday, this problem returns and becomes permanent, when we have , say, 2, 3, 4 more levels, I will have to analyse the entire game, and if necessary, I'll port it entirelly in AS3, or I will split the game (each swf, a different world). A thing I really dont want to do.
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Re: MiM 'Mim AE' (XXX) 1.8 (nov 06/12)

Postby coolness32 » Sun Nov 11, 2012 4:58 am

QuizmasterBos Wrote:
coolness32 Wrote:I want to see your ideas for the new game, but I also want this game to get more completed. I really like it and I wish my computer didn't suck so much so that I could play it on more than "low" graphic settings.

What browser are you playing it on? If you're playing in FireFox, then the game lags a lot. Try playing it in Chrome, or downloading the swf and then turning it into an exe.


I do actually use Firefox. I don't play it on the internet though I download it and play it in swf players. The ones I use are Eolsoft Flash Player and SWF_FLV Movie Player. How do you change it into a exe? just put .exe in the name?
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Re: MiM 'Mim AE' (XXX) 1.8 (nov 06/12)

Postby Ivan-Aedler » Sun Nov 11, 2012 5:01 am

coolness32 Wrote:I do actually use Firefox. I don't play it on the internet though I download it and play it in swf players. The ones I use are Eolsoft Flash Player and SWF_FLV Movie Player. How do you change it into a exe? just put .exe in the name?

No, you have to convert it using programs like this: http://www.softpedia.com/get/Others/Mis ... rter.shtml
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About the proportions of Peach's feet

Postby yurinicolau » Sun Nov 11, 2012 5:07 am

-Soloid- Wrote:Hm, I think this looks a bit strange, especially with the joint between the foot and the calf. Here are some references, and as you can see, the foot makes a sort of pyramidal shape starting from the calf.

Hey -Soloid- , first I'd like to congratule you for the outstanding job you did at Peach's new screens! They are AMAZING!!! :o You really captured her essence, her delicacy and princess nobility! I don't even have enought words to describe it!! That said... About the feet proportions problem, it's an easy thing to solve! As the designer of Peach's feet for the game, I can easily point them out for you, with a cirurgical precision! :mrgreen: Here:
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With the hell too big, her feet look like hippo paws!
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I circulated the shapes that seemed too big... Notice that although the mainly problem looks to be at the heels, that seem too big, to make it right you need to do a bigger sole for the feet and by result have heels at the regular size (look at the curve at the foot between the circulated shapes, it's smaller the it should be, making the heel bigger then it should be). :ugeek: That's it man! Hope I could be of some assistance!! ;)

AsianP3rsuas10n Wrote:>_> hmm...now i dont know what to vote for

Me neither man!!! Now we are truly fucked up! :shock:
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Re: MiM 'Mim AE' (XXX) 1.8 (nov 06/12)

Postby coolness32 » Sun Nov 11, 2012 5:17 am

ivanaedler Wrote:
coolness32 Wrote:I do actually use Firefox. I don't play it on the internet though I download it and play it in swf players. The ones I use are Eolsoft Flash Player and SWF_FLV Movie Player. How do you change it into a exe? just put .exe in the name?

No, you have to convert it using programs like this: http://www.softpedia.com/get/Others/Mis ... rter.shtml

Thank you very much! It's much better, I think my comp just can't handle it...not a very happy thought, but at least I can play it on Med graphics instead of Low graphics.
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Re: MiM 'Mim AE' (XXX) 1.8 (nov 06/12)

Postby glm » Sun Nov 11, 2012 6:47 am

ivanaedler Wrote:Voting pool: Second round.

Thanks for all that voted for the first round.
Winners so far:
-Princess Peach World: An Embarassing Adventure
-Princess Peach: where is Mario?
-Mario is Missing: Princess Peach Diaries
-Princess Peach: Anything for Mario
-Mario is Missing AE (same name)

Now its time to vote for the second.
This may be the last round. I will let it active for 1 week maximum. After it, I will launch a process to rename the entire game right away.
Thanks!


Honestly, amongst the second round suggestions, I feel keeping the "Mario is Missing" part of it is essential. After all, even though the game has evolved away from its roots, the fact that Mario is missing is still at the core of the game, as is its origin. So that quickly limits the choices, as far as i'm concerned, to the "Mario is Missing : XXXXXXXX" titles (I especially hate that Princess Peach World: An Embarassing Adventure", which feels clunky and overly long).

So, from that Mario is Missing basis, MIM:AE is passé, Peach's Untold Story would end up abbreviated to MiM:PUS (not really great for a sex game :p), i'm not overly fond of the "Peachy" nickname, so : MIM : Princess Peach Diaries it is, for me. (Or, for an unexpected Nintendo/Disney crossover : "MiM : The Princess Diaries" :mrgreen: ).
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