LoK Choose Your Own Adventure

[Yawg]

THIIIIIIIIIIINK! QUICKLY!
HARDER!
*grabs by colour and shakes*

[Yawg]

In all seriousness though- if you want to take over the branch where Krystal talks to Fox after they're back on the Great Fox, or create a branch where Krystal skips out on the training, but instead asks Fox to land somewhere to talk, by all means, please do- no atonement necessary!

In other news- only 18 pages? We lost 5 pages somehow... did someone do some purging, or was something removed?

[Spycam]

Some of the pages that are in the story aren't showing up in the category list. If anyone knows how to fix that, let me know.

[Yawg]

Ahh... I assume some pages were posted without the category listed... maybe?

[gamerfox]

Here's a map of the game so far. (please delete the other one, it doesn't have the pdf)

[gamerfox]

Also, added a new page ( http://editthis.info/create_your_own_ad ... llway_nude ). Any suggestions for the choices?

[Yawg]

Yay, new material!
But not a lot of new material, so sad face D:

Anywho- where to go from there... could stop to chat with Katt, could hit on Katt, could encounter Robb or Peppy as they roam the halls (Fox is still out flying remember), ooorrrr.... who else could be on the ship... Sgt Pepper?

[gamerfox]

Yay, new material!
But not a lot of new material, so sad face D:

Anywho- where to go from there... could stop to chat with Katt, could hit on Katt, could encounter Robb or Peppy as they roam the halls (Fox is still out flying remember), ooorrrr.... who else could be on the ship... Sgt Pepper?

You mean General Pepper right? We could also have Fara, Miyu, or Lucy on board.

[PseudoImmortal]

I like this idea, will probably contribute at some point... Are people in charge of branches or do we all just help with whatever?

[Yawg]

I call it now; it you want a branch preserved, put an initial after it in brackets, until you're done.
Beyond that, anythings fair game, I'd think.

I'll wait for Spycam to give his two cents in this regard since he started this, but as far as my branch is concened (the one on the ship, as opposed t the planet-side one) I say anything's fair game. I mean hey- even worst-case scenario, if you do something I was hoping to do... no reason why there cant be two versions of the same branch. *shrug* Especially if they're two different twists on it.

[Spycam]

Two cents? I like too think my comments are worth far more than that. Three cents at least! Anyway, I like the idea. At present, there are only two branches I personally want left alone, and one is half finished while the other says DO NOT EDIT. Other than that, the initial idea or some similar notice to the rest of us should suffice. Try not to initial EVERYTHING you write though, as this is supposed to be a collaborative project.
As a side note, I can pretty much guarantee at least a few pages on my end over the weekend .

[IrrelevantComment]

Added two pages, but I'm not much of a writer so feel free to improve them (they are the two with (lok) in the name)

[IrrelevantComment]

Okay, on the pages I added (http://editthis.info/create_your_own_adventure/(LoK)_Attack_Liz. and the one it links to) it says they are in the LoK category, but when I go there they aren't listed?

EDIT: Huh, that's weird. The category page misses some of the pages if you are not logged in...

[gamerfox]

Here's how to get the wiki to stop sorting the prefixes. For example, if your page is called "(LOK) Grab his dick threateningly", then at the bottom of the page add:

Code: Select All Code

[[Category: Legend of Krystal|Grab his dick threateningly]]

That will have your page appear below "G" in the category listing, not "(".

[gamerfox]

Also, got the casual branch going for any PepKrys fans out there.

[IrrelevantComment]

Okay done a big rewrite of all the pages I have written so far. I had three almost identical pages, so I rewrote them all to be different and tried to add clarity and make the story make a bit more sense. I also proof read everything, fixed bad grammar and spelling, put everything into the same tense and made them all be formatted the same way as the first page. Hopefully they are better now, although I still don't have much confidence in my writing.

I also wrote a new page, but I'm trying to write a few pages at a time before adding them to the site, otherwise I keep having to go back and change pages to make them make sense in the context of later ones...

[Spycam]

Here's a map of the game so far. (please delete the other one, it doesn't have the pdf)

Thanks gamerfox, that's a big help.

Also, I like the new branch IC. Can't wait to see where you go with it.

[Spycam]

Minor update: I finally finished the topless scene on the arwing. Feedback would be appreciated, 'cause I'm not completely sure about one or two things. The corresponding 'wake up' scene will be tomorrow's project.

[gamerfox]

Might work on the Great Fox nude branch tomorrow. Either that or start on the tribal outfit one, probably with Katt in the hallway for that one too.

[IrrelevantComment]

Now got about 5 pages written that I'm waiting to add, as I still need to write the pages that lead to them. When I do add pages (hopefully by the end of this week) I should have 8 or so to add