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Re: New project

Postby KaTsuO_O » Sun Jan 16, 2011 1:40 pm

Have you send him a message? Im preaty sure he wouldent mind with some changes, it just makes it more awesome.
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Re: New project

Postby warlord42 » Sun Jan 16, 2011 2:12 pm

This is awesome please continue :D
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Re: New project

Postby Bussa » Sun Jan 16, 2011 8:41 pm

@ Kat: Yeah I sent him a message, and I'll just edit the character when I hear back from him.

@ Warlord: Hah, thanks guy ;) and of course I will.
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Re: New project

Postby mando » Sun Jan 16, 2011 9:43 pm

I really like what you did with the Tigress. It looks a lot sharper (is that what you meant by complete-complete?). I think its due to shading but I'm not sure.
I was just wondering if you were planning on giving the rest of the cast that sharp kinda look?
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Re: New project

Postby Bussa » Mon Jan 17, 2011 4:07 am

mando Wrote:I really like what you did with the Tigress. It looks a lot sharper (is that what you meant by complete-complete?). I think its due to shading but I'm not sure.
I was just wondering if you were planning on giving the rest of the cast that sharp kinda look?


Why thank you ;) And yes, I shaded, highlighted, and detailed her to make her "complete-complete". And a second yes, I plan to have all of the characters completed like the tigress before they are put to use in the game.

Anywho, I've had a bunch of down time after my tests so I fixed the male jaguar and got him back to his original pieces, as well as giving him a better tail. I also worked on the second lady I did (female wolf) and made her more to my liking.
And I got kinda bored and fiddled with the re-made dino female model and my jaguar male after I fixed him and put them together in a scene, let me know how you like it ;) I think it turned out really well. Also I'm including an updated cast pic just for the heck of it.
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Re: New project

Postby MrBear » Mon Jan 17, 2011 4:33 am

Ok first post on this thread, looking great but her legs in the top post look weird in that position, sperm looks great though :P
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Re: New project

Postby Axel Delerose » Mon Jan 17, 2011 4:51 am

Ok so I have looked this over and I see where this is going.

Kat, I like the idea you're going with but the spikes need to be a part of the armor I was talking to Bussa about. Omega has armor that he grows from his own skin, I'm thinking a cross between the Armor from Dead Space 2 (The Advanced Suit) and a little bit of the moving plates like Corta had on the Samus model that's currently in use.

Bussa, I didn't expect to see Omega so cut and well endowed, though to be totally fair I haven't even drawn Omega myself so I can't exactly complain or critique for that matter. I also pictured Omega as a more sinister character and a more dominating personality.

I neglected to mention that Omega's eyes had no white in them as the drug he has in his system has turned his eyes completely black with the exception of the iris which is acid green. I am not going to critique you on the skin color as I know that a completely black lizard man makes it incredibly hard to draw all the features, so we'll leave it as is.

I could go further about the drug in his system but I think I will save that for when the time comes.
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Re: New project

Postby KaTsuO_O » Mon Jan 17, 2011 7:15 am

Im glad that you took the time to re-do the male because he is preaty awesome.

I like that you changed the thicknes of the legs on the wolf female it looks a lot better, But it also looks like she is a bit wider than before and she got a bit to much muscles on the arm. It would be a nice detail if you made the ear a bit more like they was on the first one(http://www.vannar.net/landbilder/Djur/lodjur.jpg) The hair looks better only that the white part on on top of ot looks a bit too white.

Like MrBear said the legs looks preaty weird, you should make the thights have a black line all the way around so you only need to lover the calf a little and then the line will be visible. If you dont understand what i mean please say and a will draw a little instruction.
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Re: New project

Postby Bussa » Mon Jan 17, 2011 11:04 am

MrBear Wrote:Ok first post on this thread, looking great but her legs in the top post look weird in that position, sperm looks great though :P


Hah well keep up the critique, I was getting annoyed with them so I just left them, but I just played with them a bit and I think I made them look a bit better.

@ Axel: Ok, I'll take all that into consideration and I'll be editing him soon, I think I'll try and make him darker too and not so "blue".

@ Kat: fixed the arm, fixed the ears, but I think I'm gonna leave the highlight shine on her hair, I think it'll look fine when I shade and highlight her.
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Re: New project

Postby Bussa » Tue Jan 18, 2011 4:23 am

Ok so I worked on Axel's "Omega" character, and improvements are as such:
-made him darker, so he's not so blue anymore
-changed the eyes to black outside the irises
-added so called "armor" which is just all the spikes and such on him

let me know what you think Axel ;) and/or anyone else.
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Re: New project

Postby Bussa » Tue Jan 18, 2011 4:27 am

Also I'll be taking a short break (maybe a few days or so), and Ebonizza has requested that I make a Krystal model so I'll be workin on that soon, as well as improving the rest of my "cast" as said previously. ;) so see you people soon with updates.
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Re: New project

Postby MrBear » Tue Jan 18, 2011 5:29 am

@ Bussa

Ok well I can see some improvement but I looked over it and its not the position of the legs, but the position of the guys arms. In any porn clip you see, the guy grabs the women by the skin under her knee caps, not her thighs because the angle of the grasp would be too hard to maintain and eventually she would slip out of his hands. Move the guys arms under her knee caps and I bet you 10$ it would look a lot better ;).

If needed I can edit your pic a little but I suck huge balls at doing anything with paint so it might suck lol
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Re: New project

Postby Bussa » Tue Jan 18, 2011 11:07 pm

@ MrBear: Haha, ok I'll be sure to fix that and post an updated pic when I get back, and I use photoshop not paint, it'd be so hard to do in paint and you can't use layers to keep all the limbs separated as well. Thanks for the info tho, like I said I'll post an update soon. ;)
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Re: New project

Postby Bussa » Fri Jan 21, 2011 6:08 am

So I just got back from my trip and along the way I did work on my game a bit, so once again...

...MASS UPDATE TIME!!! :twisted:

Worked on:
-fixed the pic that MrBear commented on. (hand positions)
-re-made and cleaned up the racoon herm
-re-made and cleaned up my original male lion
-started the "main building" schematics (1st and 2nd floors)
- started learning more about actionscript through some helpful videos a friend referred me to.
-made a quick flash using a little of what I learned, hehe. (I'll post how I would have made the animation using a button first and the actionscripted one second) ;)
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Re: New project

Postby MrBear » Fri Jan 21, 2011 6:11 am

Looks nice, and that standing sex position looks a lot better ;)
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Re: New project

Postby Bussa » Fri Jan 21, 2011 6:24 am

Why thank you! :) I'll be fiddling around with a Krystal model here soon and I really wanna see how she'll fit into something like that position, or something even more flexible than that... :lol:
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Re: New project

Postby Axel Delerose » Fri Jan 21, 2011 10:31 am

Damn you digfree! now I'm addicted to P&S!

One thing I wanted to mention Bussa, Omega is a bit of an evil character so he might be a bit "rough" to some. And as soon as I stop the odd fixation on Her I'll draw up Omega since the ref pic seems to be unfinished.
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Re: New project

Postby lebutcheker » Fri Jan 21, 2011 7:25 pm

Ohhhh i love those tests indeed we cant wait for you to get em moving please keep up the good work
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Re: New project

Postby KaTsuO_O » Fri Jan 21, 2011 11:07 pm

Looking good. I see good and less good stuff with the recoon herm update.

Good stuff:
Straighter lines.
Better looking feet.
Amazing eyes.
Fur on her chest.
Fur over her pussy, looks a bit to close maybe.

The things that is less good is the nipples, the structure is good but they looks like they are made of metal. the boobs looks good but the front/left boob is a bit smaller than the back/right one and why is it light spots under them? Also I think that the shoulder on the front/left arm points out a bit to much and the back/right arm doesnt really looks conected to the body as it look at the first one.

I kinda liked the old head a little bit more because of how you made the gray top of her ears and how round the line under her upper muzzle was and also im preaty sure the head is a bit bigger now. It looks a bit like the front/ left eye is floting over her head because the hair isnt covering it, i think it would look better if the hair do cover the eye.

The lion update is very good so i dont think i have to say anything else than it looks much better now.

The hotel looks good but its a bit to traditional, so i my suggestion when you make it dont make it to boring. It would be cool if it was a bit special like this:
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I dont think i showed this one, she is like one of the hottest: http://e621.net/post/show/112462/blue_e ... dog-female
And
http://e621.net/post/show/111973/ajna-b ... darkduck64
And
http://e621.net/post/show/111976/ajna-b ... ine-darkdu

Could you please post the flash file of what you made, its important.
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Re: New project

Postby Bussa » Sat Jan 22, 2011 7:03 am

@ Axel: Haha I know Panty & Stocking are awesome! And that sounds good, can't wait to see what you come up with for me. ;)

@ Kat: Thanks hun! As for the nipples, they are highlighted and shaded and her body is not so they may look weird now but when she is flash ready they will look fine. Boob size is perspective based but I will be making a change as you said. Fixed the arm position, thanks for the tip! I'll be fiddling with her muzzle later, and her eyes are a separate layer and if I put them behind her hair you can't see her lashes and it really kinda hides her eyes a lot, so I think I'm gonna keep them above the hair...hmmm, idk maybe I can put them under the hair and make the part that touches the eyes a little transparent... idk, I'll mess with it later. And holy crap I don't think I could ever make a background that amazing haha, my backgrounds are going to be pretty simple :lol: I'm only tying to make the sex scenes and character interaction detailed...not so much the scenery. And as for Janice's character I did have one of her pics in my 'new character references' folder so I'm sure I'll get to her eventually. ;)

I'm posting the updated raccoon herm, those fla's you wanted, the button one (larger file) first and the actionscript one (smaller file) second.
Also I worked on a Krystal model for Ebonizza, if you guys like it a lot, I can make a side view one that could possibly be used for LoK style play. ;) The nude one has added hair tassels and hair highlights, bikini one does not. Also she's the first character with eyebrows! and yes they are separate so they will be movable! :)
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