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Re: KaTsuO_O's Krystal models

Postby Zeus Kabob » Sun Jan 16, 2011 7:59 am

@swirls: I see where you're coming from, but I think that the breast size is very nearly equal, and in fact I see no problem in where it is right now. If one were to change the sizes, I think 50-60% of what you have as the change in breast size would be appropriate. (it looks like you are over-correcting)
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Re: KaTsuO_O's Krystal models

Postby KaTsuO_O » Sun Jan 16, 2011 2:15 pm

@Bussa thanx for the image, im going to do the third one. The fourth one was very cute so i may do something with her.

@swirls i think im gooing to add some more to the back one.

@Thaedael push up effect is a preaty awesome idea, im going to make a little bounce animation when the bra is removed.

@trunks2585 im going to just delete that one and go with the third one in bussa's image, i was actualy going to make that head before but the links broke so i did go with what i had left.
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Re: KaTsuO_O's Krystal models

Postby KaTsuO_O » Sun Jan 16, 2011 3:48 pm

I think its going to turn out preaty well.
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Some colors added
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Got a jaw
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A working jaw
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How about the eye shape?
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A eyebrow makes a big difference
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I dont want to copy so what would you would to see on the ear instead?
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Re: KaTsuO_O's Krystal models

Postby Bussa » Sun Jan 16, 2011 8:40 pm

Looking great Kat! Keep up the improvements, glad I could be of some help. ;)
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Re: KaTsuO_O's Krystal models

Postby KaTsuO_O » Sun Jan 16, 2011 9:12 pm

@Bussa thanx, as long as people post i will be improveing it. Posts is my work fuel.

I added some details to the eye and adjusted that part behind the jaw.
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Re: KaTsuO_O's Krystal models

Postby trunks2585 » Sun Jan 16, 2011 9:45 pm

the jaw is still pretty unbalanced by how thick the top jaw is to the bottom jaw, thing you could get them a big more even to each other? the top half is usually thicker than the bottom, but not by that much.

http://image.shutterstock.com/display_p ... 840007.jpg Dunno if that link helps any or not.
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Re: KaTsuO_O's Krystal models

Postby KaTsuO_O » Sun Jan 16, 2011 9:53 pm

Thicker?
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Or like this maybe
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Re: KaTsuO_O's Krystal models

Postby trunks2585 » Sun Jan 16, 2011 10:00 pm

less thicker/wider. make the top part of her jaw less wide, like you did on your first krystal. Also use the same eye from the first one, the current one doesn't look very good, the top part of the eye should be the longer line and a bit thicker, and there's no hint of eyelashes. basically just use the same eye, i provided you with on your first model.

Edit: stupid forums bugging out. the second one of the two you just posted looks pretty good.
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Re: KaTsuO_O's Krystal models

Postby trunks2585 » Mon Jan 17, 2011 2:05 am

Ok i was gonna wait for ya to finish up this model but i'll go ahead and say it here. What I suggest is after you make this krystal head, make like 2-3 more different 'styles' of the head, give people a selection and hold a vote to see which one people like the most. Two of these I think should be, a redoing of the original krystal used, and then one of the first picture from bussa's examples post. this would give at least 4 heads and people could tell you what they do/don't like about each model.
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Re: KaTsuO_O's Krystal models

Postby Bussa » Mon Jan 17, 2011 4:16 am

That sounds like a bit of work, but if you're up to it Kat, I think trunks' suggestion would be a great idea! We'd be able to find out what Krystal should "really" look like :lol:
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Re: KaTsuO_O's Krystal models

Postby KaTsuO_O » Mon Jan 17, 2011 5:15 pm

I cant say 100% that i actualy is going/have time to do it but i try my best to have 4 different styles done by the week end. More people should also set like deadlines because it makes you work faster.

I only got one more that looks like it would be good enough from bussa's so if you got any you would like to see please send a link.

Im not a huge fan of that eye on this head, the other one fits a lot better.
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Im going to fix the jaw and also fix the other eye later.

No i mean now...
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Heres a start of the first one:
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If someone thinks that i shouldent listen to trunks and listen more to myself, then my answer is that trunks knows a lot more than me about this so if i listen to him and all other users i know it will be perfect. Just want you to know.

I also got a question to you trunks, why did you want to help me in the begining? Was it because just wanted to be nice or was was it. I thinks about it a lot.
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Re: KaTsuO_O's Krystal models

Postby Bussa » Mon Jan 17, 2011 8:28 pm

Lookin good Kat ;) keep up the good work.
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Re: KaTsuO_O's Krystal models

Postby trunks2585 » Mon Jan 17, 2011 11:14 pm

Hmm, I think this head I'm just not really gonna care for much, it doesn't look too bad, just not really working, even with the other eye like you said. Looks like the next head is off to a good start, my only suggestion is when you add in the eye, aside from using the same eye in the example, have it opened a bit wider, as the one in the picture is partially closed. Aside from that, yeah that'll pretty much be all of bussa's examples, then there's just trying your hand at remastering playshapes model like Kal did.

As for all the help I'm giving you, It's because i saw a member of this community taking matters into his own hands, and i wanted to help someone that showed they were willing to get something done.
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Re: KaTsuO_O's Krystal models

Postby Blaze » Tue Jan 18, 2011 1:53 am

If you need some reference pics for the different styles, I recomend looking at dr comet's work:
http://ychan.ca/r/dr+comet/7896/

I personally thinks this picture style is better when it comes down to the head: http://ychan.ca/f/your+favorite+blue+vixen/48650/

There is also a kystal mod for fallout 3 and new vegas which looks pretty good:
http://rule34-images.paheal.net/_images ... ar_Fox.png

You have been putting a lot of effort into this and its refreshing to see, keep up the good work.
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Re: KaTsuO_O's Krystal models

Postby trunks2585 » Tue Jan 18, 2011 2:47 am

I'm not sure how much those reference pics are gonna help, non of them are from a side view, but thanks for the contributions.
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Re: KaTsuO_O's Krystal models

Postby Bussa » Tue Jan 18, 2011 4:18 am

lol none of those ref pics with be useful for the head, maybe body shots but not head :lol:

(and the second one kinda weirds me out...the body is just... :shock:)
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Re: KaTsuO_O's Krystal models

Postby trunks2585 » Tue Jan 18, 2011 7:11 am

Yeah the second one's body is off, the torso has a few issues, i can't quite put my finger on it but i think it has to deal with the torso is a little too long, the hip placement on that cocked hip, and her breasts don't quite sit right on her.

btw found this from that site http://ychan.ca/f/your+favorite+blue+vixen/50186/ that's a pretty cute side profile face, on the chibi side for sure but very expressive, and if matured a bit would be another worthy choice.
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Re: KaTsuO_O's Krystal models

Postby Blaze » Tue Jan 18, 2011 6:14 pm

I purposely posted forward facing pics for the facial details, all of the three picture are different styles but still have an accurate face of what krystal looks like. I only posted them for the face not the rest of the body. I personally find it easier to draw a side of a head when I also got a front shot to work with as well.
But i'm dyslexic so my brain is wired to see things differently, because kat is as well I thought he might find it useful as well.

This is the best side shot of the 3d kystal i could find: http://rule34-images.paheal.net/_images ... ar_Fox.jpg
There is also another side shot of it on a thread I posted a while back: viewtopic.php?f=4&t=497

Best side shot my Dr comet which isn't brillant: http://lu.scio.us/hentai/albums/star-fo ... es/2991520
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Re: KaTsuO_O's Krystal models

Postby KaTsuO_O » Tue Jan 18, 2011 8:56 pm

Sorry for not having any update for you, I have been playing around with my new flashcard.

@Blaze thanx for the images. Like the other said the other images isnt much to help but it helps me to keep working when people post and even more when people take time to find images because they want to help. My ability as dyslexic is that i can see things that i actualy cant see, I see outlines when i trace that isnt there, i can sit in a room and point at something through the wall and some more things.

Also that mod of fallout 3 looks awesome, seen it before but i didnt know that you actualy could have sex(?) Where do you get it, and how do you use it?

Im going to be busy this week so there may not be as much stuff done but im going to use the most of my freetime to work on this.
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Re: KaTsuO_O's Krystal models

Postby ronpepper » Tue Jan 18, 2011 11:56 pm

@KAtsuO_O : We can see that you're in it for the long haul and doing lots of work on this. I'm all about you spending your time working on the project, it will go faster when you're not in forums. The forum will be here when you get back. You're doing a great job.
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