KaTsuO_O's Models

[KaTsuO_O]

@trunks more?

Do you want the calf armor to be like the rest or like this? Next thing I need to make is the skirt and sandals then all her armor is done.

Just a tip for people who are animating with this model, always check for the latest update.

[KaTsuO_O]

@Ebonizza i will fix it but im not quite good at muscle tone so i would like some help whit that.

[trunks2585]

to add on to what ebonizza said, i suggest looking over all those different eye styles that was posted earlier to try and refine krystal's eye shape, the eye itself could probably use one more highlight reflective white dot to give it that 'glass' look you know?

[KaTsuO_O]

I did add that green-blueish color instead of green and then i added some effects. I did also make the eye smaller.

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[trunks2585]

A second 'white spot' for reflecting light on her iris i think would help, usually a second one is opposite in placement of the first one, here's some decent references for krystal that hopefully addresses some of our points. first the muscle tone

http://www.onepiecehentaikaizoku.com/im ... -tagme.jpg Ebonizza specifically mentioned he's looking for 'dr. Comet' levels of muscletone, so here you go.

and this one is a good shot of the eyes and a decent neck, although maybe a bit too long. http://media.photobucket.com/image/krys ... ggiech.jpg

[Sleepnir]

Yeah Dr Comet's Krystal pics are ridiculously perfect. All in all you've got a really awesome model here already, I'm excited to see people use it!

[KaTsuO_O]

I made a second light spot but they seemed to lonley so i added a third one.

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That comet link isnt working so im gong to search some.

[KaTsuO_O]

I have also been working on some muscletone. I will try some other eye designs later.

[KaTsuO_O]

Ok now i made my own eye model instead of trace one and i think it fits better then the first one.

[trunks2585]

well it's a start, but don't forget to draw in the top of the eyelid as well, the eye is never totally open like that by default, just a line or two between the eye and the eyebrow, i think you get what i mean, and try to make the eyes look like they are resting inside the head and not on the surface. Take what you did with the Iris in the last update, and add on to what i said here and i think the eye would be shaping up to be pretty good.

[KaTsuO_O]

This is preaty much it. I kind of liked the scetch better.

[trunks2585]

yeah just scrap that eye and try again, or ask one of the other artists around here if they wanna try their hand at fixing the eye.

[Acidrayne360]

I agree, I can't put my finger on it, but something's just a bit off about the eye...Foxes are quite dog-like in appearance, sooo...Maybe more dog-like eyes? I dunno, just throwing ideas out there...Maybe a bit more slanty with the eyes? Here's a humorous picture for reference.

[Acidrayne360]

Hmm...Speaking of foxes...Do you think whiskers would be too far?

[KaTsuO_O]

@Acidrayne360 im going to make some other scetches and i will also include doggy eyes too, that pic

When you mean slanted how do you mean, left or right?

If there is anyone that would like to draw an eye please do it because i need it.

[KaTsuO_O]

Just a little idea.

[trunks2585]

Ok first off, that's horrifying, no, just no.

Now then you said feel free to work on it right?
Ask and you shall recieve. i ran this by ebonizza first, he said it wasn't bad, here's a basic outline (clean it up as needed because i know this was a sloppy job)

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this isn't the only problem though, you'll need to fix her muzzle as well (I didn't bother to do it because i can explain the problem) to be blunt, the muzzle needs to be longer and slimmed down. Combine that with this new eye shape and, well dunno if it'll be what we want, but it'll be a step closer for sure.

[KaTsuO_O]

Ok first off, that's horrifying, no, just no. Maybe with some white in the eye it would not be to horrifing.

Now then you said feel free to work on it right?

this isn't the only problem though, you'll need to fix her muzzle as well (I didn't bother to do it because i can explain the problem) to be blunt, the muzzle needs to be longer and slimmed down. Combine that with this new eye shape and, well dunno if it'll be what we want, but it'll be a step closer for sure.

Maybe with some white in the eye it would not be to horrifing.

"Now then you said feel free to work on it right?" Yes that was what i wanted from the first time, so yes do what you want.

Im going to fix the muzzle and im going to trace the eye.

If you see anything you would like to change with the body please draw it up. Dont bother about that i may not like it because it will always make it looks better.

[trunks2585]

i might look it over for anything but really most the problems are in the face now and i've already addressed those.

[Bussa]

Lookin good Kat, let me know if you want any help with that muzzle