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Re: KaTsuO_O's Krystal model

Postby Digfree » Sun Jan 09, 2011 6:03 pm

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Digfree - Nice pictures ;) Is it Succubus ? Image


no, lol I changing my avatar/signater every day from scenes of the anime Panty and Stocking, so awesome. if you want to see both of them animated, look at http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Aw48o19fySc
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Re: KaTsuO_O's Krystal model

Postby KaTsuO_O » Sun Jan 09, 2011 6:52 pm

Im done with with the feet but im not that happy with how they turned out so if anyone have something to suggest please say it.
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Re: KaTsuO_O's Krystal model

Postby dryingpole » Sun Jan 09, 2011 7:09 pm

Toes look a tad too big... I think a little more streamlined might be good.

Also the nail should be a little further back on the toe, I think...

(Just my opinion of course.)
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Re: KaTsuO_O's Krystal model

Postby KaTsuO_O » Sun Jan 09, 2011 7:34 pm

@dryingpole Thanx for the suggestion!

I did also some adjustments on the whit part on the back/right leg.

Made a little gap on her front/left leg and it makes a huge different.

Added some more but.

But im still not happy with the legs.
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Maybe easier to see why i dont like the legs:
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Re: KaTsuO_O's Krystal model

Postby trunks2585 » Sun Jan 09, 2011 8:37 pm

I'm not really caring for the claws to be honest, maybe make them more tiny or not even include them at all, let's see if i can dig up a good reference.

http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4085832/ maybe something like this, the claws are there, but not so large.

and yeah the legs could be a little longer like you said in a previous post, mostly just her thighs i think.
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Re: KaTsuO_O's Krystal model

Postby KaTsuO_O » Sun Jan 09, 2011 9:12 pm

I had some problems making smaller claws looking good so i removed them and i think it looks better.

I also made the thights longer and it seams like it did a little bit different but not enought so im going to experiment some more later.
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Re: KaTsuO_O's Krystal model

Postby OwnerOfSuccuby » Sun Jan 09, 2011 9:17 pm

May be try to make head a little smaller ?
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Re: KaTsuO_O's Krystal model

Postby KaTsuO_O » Sun Jan 09, 2011 9:21 pm

@OwnerOfSuccuby Great minds do think alike. I did that before i saw your post. Dont know if im going to make the head smaller than that.

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I do guess that the calves dont got enough curves.
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Re: KaTsuO_O's Krystal model

Postby trunks2585 » Sun Jan 09, 2011 9:25 pm

I honestly can't think of a reason why we shouldn't use this as the new krystal sprite unless she's just not complete for animating with.
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Re: KaTsuO_O's Krystal model

Postby Digfree » Sun Jan 09, 2011 9:31 pm

trunks2585 Wrote:I honestly can't think of a reason why we shouldn't use this as the new krystal sprite unless she's just not complete for animating with.


Pretty easy model to use as I said before. I would't mind doing another animation with her to test her errr... other positions out.
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Re: KaTsuO_O's Krystal model

Postby KaTsuO_O » Sun Jan 09, 2011 9:33 pm

trunks2585 Wrote:I honestly can't think of a reason why we shouldn't use this as the new krystal sprite unless she's just not complete for animating with.
Im so glad to hear that, thanx! And yes she is ready to animate with, the jaws relation to her nose is a little bit weak but other than that its just as smoth as any model can be. Actualy its easier to animate with this than the playshape model.
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Re: KaTsuO_O's Krystal model

Postby Digfree » Sun Jan 09, 2011 9:36 pm

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trunks2585 Wrote:I honestly can't think of a reason why we shouldn't use this as the new krystal sprite unless she's just not complete for animating with.
Im so glad to hear that, thanx! And yes she is ready to animate with, the jaws relation to her nose is a little bit weak but other than that its just as smoth as any model can be. Actualy its easier to animate with this than the playshape model.


lol I hate to ask kat, but I suck at drawing people, that include dicks. I know there are all types of cocks on this website, but your drawing style on her is diffrent from them. Could you just make me a large dick with same art style as her to animate her with? As you can see from my other post here, my dicks I draw look a little off. Thanks XD
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Re: KaTsuO_O's Krystal model

Postby KaTsuO_O » Sun Jan 09, 2011 9:46 pm

@Digfree sounds great, and now you also would be able to make some good penetrations too. and im going to make a dick that you can use

So Here you we got the flash file:
i post the flash file in the first post.
Its not complete yet but i give it you guys because everything that needs to be done is done. Whats left is: making the legs look perfect, some armor, sandals, edit the jaw or nose to make it look more natural, make some more hands, edit her ears, Making her staff, cut some to get more posibiletys, add some expresions and add some fine details.

Before People use this model i want it to be clear for you that you know that the head is traced, like i said in my first post.
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Re: KaTsuO_O's Krystal model

Postby trunks2585 » Sun Jan 09, 2011 10:26 pm

yeah it's pretty easy to reconize the head is from palcomix, but you did the body much more justice than they do.
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Re: KaTsuO_O's Krystal model

Postby KaTsuO_O » Sun Jan 09, 2011 10:45 pm

@Digfree heres your dick :lol:
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Its black because black is awesome.
I was trying to make the balls harrier but it looked just weird so i let them be like this.
The dick is in the document in the first post
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Re: KaTsuO_O's Krystal model

Postby Bussa » Sun Jan 09, 2011 11:41 pm

Just curious, but would she look more proportional if her calves were just a bit longer? Post the original image and an edited image to compare if you can.
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Re: KaTsuO_O's Krystal model

Postby KaTsuO_O » Sun Jan 09, 2011 11:51 pm

Bussa Wrote:Just curious, but would she look more proportional if her calves were just a bit longer? Post the original image and an edited image to compare if you can.
Im going to try that but i cant show any original because there is not any. The head commes from one image but in that iimage she has a totaly other position and you dont even se the calves.
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Re: KaTsuO_O's Krystal model

Postby Bussa » Sun Jan 09, 2011 11:56 pm

no I meant "original" as in the one you have now, and then put the "longer calves" edit next to it so you can see the difference. I didn't mean the reference art ha.
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Re: KaTsuO_O's Krystal model

Postby KaTsuO_O » Mon Jan 10, 2011 12:17 am

@Bussa Ah ok, Thanx for the tip.

It looks better.
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Re: KaTsuO_O's Krystal model

Postby trunks2585 » Mon Jan 10, 2011 1:13 am

might wanna give her a bit more of a neck, it's kinda non-existant as is right now.
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